Concrete Dreams

LadyValentine · 08-01-2006, 09:06 AM

Lieing On The Concrete, Memories Flashed Before My Eyes
The Sounds In The Wind Reflected That Of My Mother's Cries
Surrounding By Eyes, My Heart Beat Slowed Down
A Blur Of Colours Whisked Past When My Head Hit The Ground
Squirming Across The Gravel, No Handy Angels Around
I Hear The Sirens In The Background, But Their Rapidly Fading
No Chance They'll Make It, Like The Tire Marks Erasing
Is It Death I'm Facing?, Pasted Out On The....

3 Months Later

Nurse Rita Issacs, I'm Real Familar With
A Bond So Dense, Like My Love For Her Is
Put In Extra Time, Pancakes With Extra Lime
Extra Sugar, Tender Loving Care, You Can't Figure
An Oxygen Mask At The Scene She Applied
Assaigned To Another Department, She Denied
A Better Wage, She Turned Down With Rage
Her Life Is A Story Evaluated Like The Content Page
Like A Modern Day Nun, Even With Her Own Son
Like A Former Bonnie, Cleaned Barrels Of Rotton Guns
But Left that Life Alone, Street Life She Was Prone
Till An Enemy Put One To Her Little Man's Dome
Brain Damage Forseed, They Wanna Put Him In A Home
Began Seeing The Light, With Clyde Outta Sight
She Could Focus, Her Good Nature Wasn't A Hocus
Suppose This, My Rap Skills Would Be Pocus
Without Pain, You Can't Rap Your Hopeless
Just Know This.

YoungGunna · 08-01-2006, 12:31 PM

good shit queen...nice concept..seen better work from u thou

lyrics alight, flow was good...nice concept

7/10

stay up

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.::Mc-TaZo::. · 08-01-2006, 04:26 PM

thats some gd shit man keep it up ill give ya say 8/10 head flyin hi

leather2006 · 08-01-2006, 06:54 PM

Lady Valentine Will Take U Anytime In A Battle U Called Me Out So Im Ready Anytime!!!!

LadyValentine · 08-02-2006, 09:31 PM

Upppppppppppin

Skipp a.k.a Dat-Nigga · 08-02-2006, 09:42 PM

good shit Lady i liked da last 2 trackz u posted

LadyValentine · 08-02-2006, 10:28 PM

^Props Fam

Sniper Locs · 08-02-2006, 10:37 PM

nice insert

LadyValentine · 08-02-2006, 10:47 PM

^.............ok

Mar-Velous · 08-02-2006, 11:49 PM

U said Im Lame WTF sum shit didnt Even Rhyme
and Wheres The Lyricalness wheres the Complexity
Those R Just Words That Rhyme Theres Nothin 2 It
so How U say Im lame Come On

LadyValentine · 08-03-2006, 05:11 AM

^Your Lame, It's That Easy, I've Showed My Lyrical, It's Not Needed In Every Free

Houstatlantavegas · 08-03-2006, 06:54 AM

Shits tight lady

LadyValentine · 08-03-2006, 07:55 AM

^Propz Saint

08-01-2006, 09:06 AM	#1
LadyValentine Veteran Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Throw A TV At You Crazy Posts: 3,948 Repped: 82 Repped 1,918 Times in 381 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 36 Times in 31 Posts	Concrete Dreams Concrete Dreams Lieing On The Concrete, Memories Flashed Before My Eyes The Sounds In The Wind Reflected That Of My Mother's Cries Surrounding By Eyes, My Heart Beat Slowed Down A Blur Of Colours Whisked Past When My Head Hit The Ground Squirming Across The Gravel, No Handy Angels Around I Hear The Sirens In The Background, But Their Rapidly Fading No Chance They'll Make It, Like The Tire Marks Erasing Is It Death I'm Facing?, Pasted Out On The.... 3 Months Later Nurse Rita Issacs, I'm Real Familar With A Bond So Dense, Like My Love For Her Is Put In Extra Time, Pancakes With Extra Lime Extra Sugar, Tender Loving Care, You Can't Figure An Oxygen Mask At The Scene She Applied Assaigned To Another Department, She Denied A Better Wage, She Turned Down With Rage Her Life Is A Story Evaluated Like The Content Page Like A Modern Day Nun, Even With Her Own Son Like A Former Bonnie, Cleaned Barrels Of Rotton Guns But Left that Life Alone, Street Life She Was Prone Till An Enemy Put One To Her Little Man's Dome Brain Damage Forseed, They Wanna Put Him In A Home Began Seeing The Light, With Clyde Outta Sight She Could Focus, Her Good Nature Wasn't A Hocus Suppose This, My Rap Skills Would Be Pocus Without Pain, You Can't Rap Your Hopeless Just Know This.

08-01-2006, 12:31 PM	#2
YoungGunna Young Gunna Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: T Dot Posts: 11,079 Repped: 348 Repped 128 Times in 87 Posts Neg Reps: 33 Neg Repped at 7 Times in 7 Posts	good shit queen...nice concept..seen better work from u thou lyrics alight, flow was good...nice concept 7/10 stay up 1 __________________

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08-01-2006, 04:26 PM	#3
.::Mc-TaZo::. !!UNIQUE.GANGSTA.CLICK!! Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: !!...U.K...!! Posts: 40 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	thats some gd shit man keep it up ill give ya say 8/10 head flyin hi

08-01-2006, 06:54 PM	#4
leather2006 !!UNIQUE GANGSTA CLICK!! Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 420 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Lady Valentine Will Take U Anytime In A Battle U Called Me Out So Im Ready Anytime!!!!

08-02-2006, 09:31 PM	#5
LadyValentine Veteran Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Throw A TV At You Crazy Posts: 3,948 Repped: 82 Repped 1,918 Times in 381 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 36 Times in 31 Posts	Upppppppppppin

08-02-2006, 09:42 PM	#6
Skipp a.k.a Dat-Nigga INT.~Rhymers~Council Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: The Council Board Room Posts: 2,678 Repped: 0 Repped 36 Times in 26 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	good shit Lady i liked da last 2 trackz u posted

08-02-2006, 10:28 PM	#7
LadyValentine Veteran Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Throw A TV At You Crazy Posts: 3,948 Repped: 82 Repped 1,918 Times in 381 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 36 Times in 31 Posts	^Props Fam

08-02-2006, 10:37 PM	#8
Sniper Locs Banned Join Date: May 2006 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 2,574 Repped: 0 Repped 108 Times in 86 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	nice insert

08-02-2006, 10:47 PM	#9
LadyValentine Veteran Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Throw A TV At You Crazy Posts: 3,948 Repped: 82 Repped 1,918 Times in 381 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 36 Times in 31 Posts	^.............ok

08-02-2006, 11:49 PM	#10
Mar-Velous M@R\/ Join Date: May 2006 Location: Southern Cali Posts: 1,016 Repped: 16 Repped 41 Times in 31 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	U said Im Lame WTF sum shit didnt Even Rhyme and Wheres The Lyricalness wheres the Complexity Those R Just Words That Rhyme Theres Nothin 2 It so How U say Im lame Come On

08-03-2006, 05:11 AM	#11
LadyValentine Veteran Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Throw A TV At You Crazy Posts: 3,948 Repped: 82 Repped 1,918 Times in 381 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 36 Times in 31 Posts	^Your Lame, It's That Easy, I've Showed My Lyrical, It's Not Needed In Every Free

08-03-2006, 06:54 AM	#12
Houstatlantavegas Veteran Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: . Posts: 10,641 Repped: 1,261 Repped 699 Times in 157 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	Shits tight lady

08-03-2006, 07:55 AM	#13
LadyValentine Veteran Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Throw A TV At You Crazy Posts: 3,948 Repped: 82 Repped 1,918 Times in 381 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 36 Times in 31 Posts	^Propz Saint