8 Bar Warning- [V]

ThA ViiRu5 · 07-07-2009, 12:56 PM

Check it, you wash ya hands but it'll never be sterile
My rhyme book 'sears' competition, you dont even wear the apparel
Whether they 'check their skill' or 'fuck with my gunplay'
They'll realise they lives a game of 'Donkey Kong' one day
..cause they find themselves at the 'bottom of the barrel'
A battle with me? its comically a peril
Commonly something you dont wanna be involved in
the lyrical 'SWATs' called in, but these 'flies' aint a problem
He says he carries a pistol, but aint been a banger in awhile
He tries to hide his anger and denial but he'd get mangled by a mile
I'm a Bandito..Ill be damned if this fag lethal, Pistol i'll give u mag measles
a Pistol? damnit i 'control the metal' change my username to Magneto
You mustve been joking..make another, complete it then
u'll end up Paul Ritter or Chris Farley..another dead comedian
It aint even close, more of a roast, no-one morose, the virus..lower the dose
A battle with me? Shit..his own name admits that he's 'toast'

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 07-07-2009, 04:16 PM

They undermine the Truth and Who Fathered them,
I Came back with a Collab & guess Who Slaughtered them,

Blizzy · 07-08-2009, 05:48 PM

a Pistol? damnit i 'control the metal' change my username to Magneto

^ya best line but this was not as good as your usual V....meta's and punches just weren't connectin at all.....stay up tho my man

TheMadWriter · 07-08-2009, 07:19 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Blizzy

a Pistol? damnit i 'control the metal' change my username to Magneto

^ya best line but this was not as good as your usual V....meta's and punches just weren't connectin at all.....stay up tho my man

Sounds like someone's losing a bit of focus. Is that weakness I see?

Komplex · 07-08-2009, 10:53 PM

sick drop. the wordplay in the first few lines was entertaining (the sears and donkey kong lines) as well as the other metaphors throughout the verse (the dead comedian and Magneto lines). Multies dope as usual. Despite how ill this drop was, i can tell you wasn't going full speed. Still liked it alot though.

ThA ViiRu5 · 07-09-2009, 01:28 AM

^^ lmao thanks yall. I saw my name in PB's drop and i jumped right on a reply haha.

07-07-2009, 12:56 PM	#1
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 2,617 Repped: 525 Repped 179 Times in 104 Posts Neg Reps: 81 Neg Repped at 21 Times in 16 Posts	8 Bar Warning- [V] 8 Bar Warning- [V] Check it, you wash ya hands but it'll never be sterile My rhyme book 'sears' competition, you dont even wear the apparel Whether they 'check their skill' or 'fuck with my gunplay' They'll realise they lives a game of 'Donkey Kong' one day ..cause they find themselves at the 'bottom of the barrel' A battle with me? its comically a peril Commonly something you dont wanna be involved in the lyrical 'SWATs' called in, but these 'flies' aint a problem He says he carries a pistol, but aint been a banger in awhile He tries to hide his anger and denial but he'd get mangled by a mile I'm a Bandito..Ill be damned if this fag lethal, Pistol i'll give u mag measles a Pistol? damnit i 'control the metal' change my username to Magneto You mustve been joking..make another, complete it then u'll end up Paul Ritter or Chris Farley..another dead comedian It aint even close, more of a roast, no-one morose, the virus..lower the dose A battle with me? Shit..his own name admits that he's 'toast' __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT

07-07-2009, 04:16 PM	#2
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,906 Repped: 80 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	They undermine the Truth and Who Fathered them, I Came back with a Collab & guess Who Slaughtered them, __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

07-08-2009, 05:48 PM	#3
Blizzy Wordsmith Join Date: May 2008 Location: In Battlefield's Posts: 3,359 Repped: 687 Repped 345 Times in 158 Posts Neg Reps: 25 Neg Repped at 26 Times in 25 Posts	a Pistol? damnit i 'control the metal' change my username to Magneto ^ya best line but this was not as good as your usual V....meta's and punches just weren't connectin at all.....stay up tho my man __________________ MY MUSIC CHECK IT OUT myspace.com/ttpbloodshot

07-08-2009, 10:53 PM	#5
Komplex Poetic Swagger Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 1,164 Repped: 117 Repped 99 Times in 50 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	sick drop. the wordplay in the first few lines was entertaining (the sears and donkey kong lines) as well as the other metaphors throughout the verse (the dead comedian and Magneto lines). Multies dope as usual. Despite how ill this drop was, i can tell you wasn't going full speed. Still liked it alot though. __________________ "Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz

07-09-2009, 01:28 AM	#6
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 2,617 Repped: 525 Repped 179 Times in 104 Posts Neg Reps: 81 Neg Repped at 21 Times in 16 Posts	^^ lmao thanks yall. I saw my name in PB's drop and i jumped right on a reply haha. __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT

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