I Spit That Real

immortaltech · 08-01-2006, 03:00 AM

i aint sayin words just to say i mean shit when i talk
real discussions my people livin in the ghetto blamin it on me as if was my fault
but honestly
as my people continue to live in squalor
and poverty
makin minimun dollars
we got rich niggaz buyin unesisarry objects
still the same thoughts process
the young minded and the weak
give into the steriotypical kind of shit that continues to make the future blek
as we give into our greed money conqures us all
im buildin a dynasty ill be damned if it fall
i swear to never be fake i represent my atire
and you beggin me to ceasefire,
and fuck flossin
whats fame and fourtane
when your stuck in the coffin
cause your bias voice when you talk you allude all of us,
how racism affects america
what you think you aint get hated on cause you arib
shit i try my best to enclose the truth
so if you talkin bullshit ima disclose you ,
a war mainly startin after the towers were knocked down
,explosives planted in the buildin shatered debre to the ground
rappers be talkin bout holdin a gun,
thinkin its cool when sick mothafuckas take part in collateral damage for fun
yall mothafuckas is brainwashed tryin to be gangsta,
when you aint take time to notice we all in danger
world war 3 is nearly takin affect,
fuck your life fuck your checks,
fuck ya pirex, and techs,
just some shit i had to get off my chest

WUTANG · 08-01-2006, 03:16 AM

Wh-wh-what...the Fizzzuck!?!?!?!?

N.Y.C · 08-01-2006, 03:18 AM

looks good but u need to line your words right so we can see what rhymes like:

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not like

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immortaltech · 08-01-2006, 03:42 AM

^^^^ i got you so like that?

LadyValentine · 08-01-2006, 05:13 AM

^Yup, Like That

The Mix Of Long And Short Lines, Kinda Threw Me Of
But The Content Was Good

Stay Up I.T

08-01-2006, 03:00 AM	#1
immortaltech Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 796 Repped: 257 Repped 14 Times in 8 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	I Spit That Real I Spit That Real i aint sayin words just to say i mean shit when i talk real discussions my people livin in the ghetto blamin it on me as if was my fault but honestly as my people continue to live in squalor and poverty makin minimun dollars we got rich niggaz buyin unesisarry objects still the same thoughts process the young minded and the weak give into the steriotypical kind of shit that continues to make the future blek as we give into our greed money conqures us all im buildin a dynasty ill be damned if it fall i swear to never be fake i represent my atire and you beggin me to ceasefire, and fuck flossin whats fame and fourtane when your stuck in the coffin cause your bias voice when you talk you allude all of us, how racism affects america what you think you aint get hated on cause you arib shit i try my best to enclose the truth so if you talkin bullshit ima disclose you , a war mainly startin after the towers were knocked down ,explosives planted in the buildin shatered debre to the ground rappers be talkin bout holdin a gun, thinkin its cool when sick mothafuckas take part in collateral damage for fun yall mothafuckas is brainwashed tryin to be gangsta, when you aint take time to notice we all in danger world war 3 is nearly takin affect, fuck your life fuck your checks, fuck ya pirex, and techs, just some shit i had to get off my chest

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08-01-2006, 03:16 AM	#2
WUTANG Banned Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 185 Repped: 0 Repped 2 Times in 1 Post Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Wh-wh-what...the Fizzzuck!?!?!?!?

08-01-2006, 03:18 AM	#3
N.Y.C 24-8 Join Date: Apr 2005 Posts: 1,715 Repped: 13 Repped 26 Times in 9 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	looks good but u need to line your words right so we can see what rhymes like: .................................................. ........................ .................................................. .......................... .................................................. ........................... .................................................. ........................... .................................................. ........................... not like .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..................................................

08-01-2006, 03:42 AM	#4
immortaltech Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 796 Repped: 257 Repped 14 Times in 8 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	^^^^ i got you so like that?

08-01-2006, 05:13 AM	#5
LadyValentine Veteran Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Throw A TV At You Crazy Posts: 3,948 Repped: 82 Repped 1,918 Times in 381 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 36 Times in 31 Posts	^Yup, Like That The Mix Of Long And Short Lines, Kinda Threw Me Of But The Content Was Good Stay Up I.T