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06-28-2009, 07:29 AM
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Join Date: Oct 2008
Location: Brooklyn
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I'll Do anything
Some girls are not to be trusted,
But ill do anything for you, A been around the world six times, A bad bitch in every part of the world been mines, But you can change me, Baby you can change me, Look, am already feelin’ different, see, Shorty you make me feel brand new, Am not running games girl a swear you do, You too cold to hold and too hot to handle, Do you think im a fool, Cos ill do anything for you, But they don’t know the reason, Why I do all the things I do for you, You talk like you love me, Like all the angels above me, You one of the angels, When I'm talkin to you , Am not talkin to no stranger, Get a bow and arrow and I can be your ranger, This song cant even get no stranger, Am rappin for a girl I aint met, But I still love her, Like no other, Keep this on the down low, Cos we secret lovers, That put a smile on your face, Live life slow, There’s no need to race, One day we talk to each other, Face to face, Cos ill do anything for a girl like you, You make me feel brand new, Like I said before, Your like the waves, Come crashing on the shore, So peaceful, Calm and breathtaking, Your like that too, When your not online you can hear my heart breaking, So sad, So we should be together, For ever and ever
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06-28-2009, 07:51 AM
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Join Date: May 2006
Posts: 718
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Anything but write well.
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| The Following User Neg Repped to Shogun For This Un-useful Post: | Tha Pak Ataak (07-01-2009) |
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07-01-2009, 02:30 AM
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Join Date: Feb 2007
Posts: 154
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this is ass at its hairiest
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| The Following User Neg Repped to crazy_mofo For This Un-useful Post: | Tha Pak Ataak (07-01-2009) |
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07-02-2009, 01:01 PM
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S.F.S. Coming!
Join Date: Sep 2007
Location: Land Of The Latent
Posts: 1,598
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50 > u
this was a louzy remake of 50's song.....u barely had any rhymes and ur flow + lyrics are fucking basic as hell....i aint hating....u can neg me all u want....truth is ur not a good rapper....if ur not guna take anyone's advice u wont improve further....i suggest u to read other vet's drops and start gaining more ideas from them.....keep dropping though.....just dont take every feed thats negative as hate.....
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