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..Introduction Page..
SWAGGER VANCE Killing is less anger and more a sick fascination To quit blastin faces I'd need a thick vaccination My hits have the pages in the newspaper sellin Way ahead of the felons' yellin, is the dude scrapin melons My house is decorated with ripped arteries & torn flesh The faces of prom queens & bitches from porn sets A war vet whose more hexed from deafening slugs Has my knife handles lookin scarlet cuz they're peppered wit blood Ahead of you scrubs, my rage boils and ignites When I see a fine dime, I need her soiled by my knife So I coil and I strike, and then I brutally beat That pussy into peices, 'til it loses its heat The best is the reaction, where heat leaps and dwells When the knife hits their flesh, as a sneak-peak to hell So when the clouds cloak the night in a body of sin And you think that somebody's watchin, he probably is ..Page One.. ADILLA I stare into the air, swag wit a devilish flair Unrepented of the ones, I brought into my lair The spider says to the fly, why you make my song cry I got D'evils, of maniacal thoughts makin lives awry Givin my victims, the most seductive verse They don't know they'll never see a hearse Pristine white skin, where should I begin Talkin to my murderous twin, with a contempt grin Of me and my kin about to do the most unforgivable sin All I need is One gun, One knife, One rope To end One's life, One's soul, One's hope My black soul leaks like ink Leavin red leakin, From the spot where you used to think My Mind's Playing Tricks On Me Leavin them with a drought in they gout They unable to shout, from the blood that spout Of the serial killer is so Sick Society devout Leave every rhyme shook like halfway crooks Cause this killer isn't no damn rook Leavin a note for this notebook to look You just saw "The Mind of A Serial Killer" And then it realize, it was the next victim In my rhymebook serial thriller.... ..Page Two.. Lost Child Woke Up With A Easy Way Of Life, Until I Licked Blood. Sugar Level Was Going Crazy, As If I Dicked Her Love.. With Out Having A Thought, I Became A Hunter. Got Head’s Laying In Different Spot’s, Call Me A Punter.. How I Kicked Off The Media, And No One Got Any Yards. Come Close To The Suspect, Can’t The Evidence Got Guards.. So More Bag’s Got Filled Up, As It Was A Movie Show. These Many Bodies, Can’t Be Reality, But It Is Though.. Innocent People Just Get Me Turn On, Like Watching Porn. There Insides I Rip Out, Leave Um Hanging, N Family’s Torn.. Got Pills To Relax My Excitement, But After Three Hours. Another Ceremony Going On, So I Go To, Here’s A Flower.. I Am A Serial Killer, My Mind N Heart Tells Me To Respect. The Corpse And There Family, It Aint Nice To Neglect.. Well Now I See How To Surpass The Law, With Murder’s. The Town Cant Figure It Out, Something No One Heard Of.. First It Was DILLA’S Pic Then Anon1, Now Me, As Mind’s Of A Serial Killer. With All The Construction We Condemned, A House Is Being Build.. ..Page Three.. Anonymous 1 A shock-wave, enduces a reaction leading to stock-prey With sharp-blades, on the first person that i cross-ways Shadow bound as i silther' painting pictures, chalk-pave Your not-safe, victims introduced to a silent dark-grave Far-days begins" farther's sins' a childs heart-depraved Smart & behaved, yet the symbols of abuse engraved Now the thought-process, enslaves onslaught-obsess I rot & depress, murder visions' but i will not-progress Collecting-bras' i'm being the cause of distraught-stress Disecting-saws' limb for limb the blades knot the dress A innocent-soul, by my savage' added to a stastic-toll A existence-stole, at demands of my coherence-control My logic doesn't-hold, pain' stains almost a dozen-souls Husbands-alone, with my name printed on a little-note "The mind of a serial killer", is what my victims-wrote Thier resilient-hope, enraged' me making instant-ghosts ..End Of Book..
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good list Dawg
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The alias is Protege
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ztay active.
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Bump bump bump
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good book...nice punchlines....and crazy story telling...
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It was Good.. Better than Most shit i Read.. A lot of Forced Multies though in the 1st Verse.. 2nd verse was Decent.. needs multies.. 3rd verse was wick wick wack.. Last verse was Best IMO..
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"I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito
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^^what he said
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Well it's a good thing my verse was last then, :d thanks for the feed i'll let the others know
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