The Appetizer - [V]

ThA ViiRu5 · 06-26-2009, 03:12 PM

You might love this, I eat MC's for light lunches..
ive got more classic lines comin than the upcoming Mike punches..
I disappear for a minute and people are revering my image
as clear as a vision you should rly fear a collision
cause of course they'll be takin ya 'chest to the ER'
Ive already delivered dope lines, the rest shouldnt be far
I've seen the glass ceiling yet i dared to go higher
Dope lyrics are new cell phones; there's only one provider
People always say theyre the best..followed by "next to you"
This text is true, everybody likes me but i still went ghost, I'm Pepsi Blue
I shatter guidelines, break barriers and always am ignoring the rules
Sickness in store for the fools, 'everybody feelin me' im the 'whore at ya school' (pause...

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Feedback is appreciated.

One Love.

Kidss · 06-26-2009, 03:25 PM

yo how the fuck you are cause dawg you aint tupac so quit while your a head already in the red before i come after you show you how the fuck is really bad

ThA ViiRu5 · 06-26-2009, 03:37 PM

^^ Much appreciated. Uppin

Blizzy · 06-26-2009, 04:46 PM

Dope drop V....had some funny and well delivered lines....had a couple of forced multis but this was tight....

I shatter guidelines, break barriers and always am ignoring the rules
Sickness in store for the fools, 'everybody feelin me' im the 'whore at ya school'

I've seen the glass ceiling yet i dared to go higher
Dope lyrics are new cell phones; there's only one provider

my^favourite bars....

ThA ViiRu5 · 06-26-2009, 05:47 PM

Appreciated, thank you..

Komplex · 06-27-2009, 02:33 AM

People always say theyre the best..followed by "next to you"
This text is true, everybody likes me but i still went ghost, I'm Pepsi Blue

^favorite line. Overall, nice quick drop. I could tell you weren't trying to do too much. still managed some solid punches and a great flow. dope shit fam.

ThA ViiRu5 · 06-27-2009, 03:01 AM

^^ Thank you and exactly right my friend. Uppin

TheRealProtege · 06-27-2009, 04:08 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ThA ViiRu5

People always say theyre the best..followed by "next to you"
This text is true, everybody likes me but i still went ghost, I'm Pepsi Blue
I shatter guidelines, break barriers and always am ignoring the rules
Sickness in store for the fools, 'everybody feelin me' im the 'whore at ya school' (pause...

)

liked those. ive seen you come way harder then this b4 though (II)

DXavier23 · 06-28-2009, 01:01 AM

Solid drop my man. I enjoyed reading it because the flow was fluent, strong, and overall entertaining. The cell phone/ one provider line was nice as well as the final punch. Good work

06-26-2009, 03:12 PM	#1
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 2,617 Repped: 525 Repped 179 Times in 104 Posts Neg Reps: 81 Neg Repped at 21 Times in 16 Posts	The Appetizer - [V] The Appetizer - [V] You might love this, I eat MC's for light lunches.. ive got more classic lines comin than the upcoming Mike punches.. I disappear for a minute and people are revering my image as clear as a vision you should rly fear a collision cause of course they'll be takin ya 'chest to the ER' Ive already delivered dope lines, the rest shouldnt be far I've seen the glass ceiling yet i dared to go higher Dope lyrics are new cell phones; there's only one provider People always say theyre the best..followed by "next to you" This text is true, everybody likes me but i still went ghost, I'm Pepsi Blue I shatter guidelines, break barriers and always am ignoring the rules Sickness in store for the fools, 'everybody feelin me' im the 'whore at ya school' (pause...) Feedback is appreciated. One Love. __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT Last edited by ThA ViiRu5; 06-26-2009 at 03:17 PM.

06-26-2009, 03:37 PM	#3
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 2,617 Repped: 525 Repped 179 Times in 104 Posts Neg Reps: 81 Neg Repped at 21 Times in 16 Posts	^^ Much appreciated. Uppin __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT

06-26-2009, 04:46 PM	#4
Blizzy Wordsmith Join Date: May 2008 Location: In Battlefield's Posts: 3,359 Repped: 687 Repped 345 Times in 158 Posts Neg Reps: 25 Neg Repped at 26 Times in 25 Posts	Dope drop V....had some funny and well delivered lines....had a couple of forced multis but this was tight.... I shatter guidelines, break barriers and always am ignoring the rules Sickness in store for the fools, 'everybody feelin me' im the 'whore at ya school' I've seen the glass ceiling yet i dared to go higher Dope lyrics are new cell phones; there's only one provider my^favourite bars.... __________________ MY MUSIC CHECK IT OUT myspace.com/ttpbloodshot

06-26-2009, 05:47 PM	#5
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 2,617 Repped: 525 Repped 179 Times in 104 Posts Neg Reps: 81 Neg Repped at 21 Times in 16 Posts	Appreciated, thank you.. __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT

06-27-2009, 02:33 AM	#6
Komplex Poetic Swagger Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 1,164 Repped: 117 Repped 99 Times in 50 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	People always say theyre the best..followed by "next to you" This text is true, everybody likes me but i still went ghost, I'm Pepsi Blue ^favorite line. Overall, nice quick drop. I could tell you weren't trying to do too much. still managed some solid punches and a great flow. dope shit fam. __________________ "Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz

06-26-2009, 03:25 PM	#2
Kidss Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Bloomington Posts: 380 Repped: 0 Repped 34 Times in 26 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 21 Times in 16 Posts	yo how the fuck you are cause dawg you aint tupac so quit while your a head already in the red before i come after you show you how the fuck is really bad

06-27-2009, 03:01 AM	#7
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 2,617 Repped: 525 Repped 179 Times in 104 Posts Neg Reps: 81 Neg Repped at 21 Times in 16 Posts	^^ Thank you and exactly right my friend. Uppin __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT

06-28-2009, 01:01 AM	#9
DXavier23 ----------DX------------- Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: NYC Posts: 1,765 Repped: 192 Repped 1,682 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 1 Post	Solid drop my man. I enjoyed reading it because the flow was fluent, strong, and overall entertaining. The cell phone/ one provider line was nice as well as the final punch. Good work __________________ So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in

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