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06-26-2009, 02:19 PM
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So Michaels Dead...
people claiming hes ruthless to others an icon, so they makin excuses no not a rapist.. just another soul lost in the matrix tried to keep his head up, so he got a face lift just goes 2 show, if u got a dream.. chase it.. beat it till you top the charts hard to show love if you aint got a heart a morning of mourning, go on punch a hater.. lemme ask whats your major? or did it stop at crayons n construction paper yeah you know what the motto is.. just stay home. wait, till you hit the lotto kids. but please don't follow this..lost soul at a cross road.. between the bouldavard of broken dreams n writers block get around the world like firefox.. go on try 2 pop find a plot where you ride inside a drop.. that matches yuh shoes.. really though its time 2 stop fuck the backseat, start assuming the lead.. sure you'll hit some bumps, every1 needs a few 2 succeed.. ..twas kind of like a freewrite.. ... RIP .... 
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06-26-2009, 02:49 PM
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lemme ask whats your major?
or did it stop at crayons n construction paper ^^ liked this line. some multies were forced, but not too bad for a quickie (pause)
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06-26-2009, 03:29 PM
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dude kickass Freestyle i especially like the just another soul lost in the matrix
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06-27-2009, 04:09 AM
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LoL..aren't you the did that randomly disses people in their threads^^??
anyways, thnx for the feed! Lol..
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06-27-2009, 09:03 AM
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just another soul lost in the matrix
tried to keep his head up, so he got a face lift ^dope lemme ask whats your major? or did it stop at crayons n construction paper but please don't follow this..lost soul at a cross road.. between the bouldavard of broken dreams n writers block good shit. flow was spot on, caught some good metaphors along the way. nice job of stick with the content/theme throught the verse. overall solid. be easy.
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06-30-2009, 04:29 AM
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props 4 da feed
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07-01-2009, 04:23 PM
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lol...............
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07-01-2009, 09:38 PM
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i usually dont come in here but i read this and i liked it specially that major/crayons line
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07-01-2009, 10:57 PM
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great drop.....flow was dope as usual....so were the multies....i definitely felt the concept and emotion u dropped in this piece as well.....stay up....
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07-02-2009, 04:24 AM
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thnx guys.. this seriously was like a freewrite lol..
didnt even bother making a solid intro, n kind of got lazy the last bars... thnx anyways tho.
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