Alphabetical Toss Up

LethalIsILL · 07-31-2006, 10:00 PM

ya i know papoose did somethin similiar to this. but imma try my own, and its
not in order neither

(A)Arsenals, arrogance, and arson
artillery, arthritis, autopsy, abortions
Avaricious, avenge, avarice, and asphyxiate
artistic,argumentative-less, articulate
(C)craziness, car crashes, continuously courageous
Crazy counter cultures, cuffed-in cages
(H)Hoppers, hopscotchers, Honda horsepowers
Hourly, hour hand, hourglass,hours..hours
(R)Repressed, reprobates, recapitulate
Rebels, rebellion, recede, remunerate
(F)Faggots, fake fathers, frauds, frightenin
Fires, feeling finders, furiously fightin
(S)Semi-shooters, slug slingas, snipin soldiers
seashores, sellin sickenin shells, shattered & smashed shoulders
(B)bullets blastin, bitches bitchin, brutally battered,
Bloody blades, bluffin bitches (D) don’t (M) matter
(E)Education-less, enemies earn (N) nothing, natter
(G)Georgia girls, (W)wonderful world,
(M)mutha fuckin models, (H)how (U) Hurl?
(J)jackasses, jaguar jackers, joyful, jab jaw bones
(O)offsprings, oligarchy, officiousness, O-zone
(T) techs, terrorist, terrifying, tragic, twin towers, teacher-less
(P)prayin, penalizing, penetratin penis, preacher-less
(D)danger (I)in islands (W)wakin in (L)lakes
(K)killin (N)niggas,(Q)quitters, (V)vermons
(Q)quality, queens, quarintine, (X) X-rays
(Y)York-City, youngins, yachts, zombie zappers

Skipp a.k.a Dat-Nigga · 07-31-2006, 10:05 PM

my nigga dis was nice

Tha Prophecy · 07-31-2006, 10:20 PM

hmm despite the fact that almost every multie was forced, n some things barely rhymed, this was a decent verse, because u had some pretty good vocab

SirChromeMag · 07-31-2006, 10:22 PM

like are you just naming off your vocab? or is it suppose to be a rap? i did one like this awhile back, ill post it, its actually a rap. and why is Hurl in the U's?

LethalIsILL · 07-31-2006, 10:23 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by SirChromeMag

like are you just naming off your vocab? or is it suppose to be a rap? i did one like this awhile back, ill post it, its actually a rap. and why is Hurl in the U's?

hurl is with how, i put "u" by itself i should've
made it more clearer to see

LethalIsILL · 07-31-2006, 10:43 PM

thanks for the feed skipp and prophecy

LethalIsILL · 08-01-2006, 11:31 AM

..uppin...

LadyValentine · 08-01-2006, 11:33 AM

This Is Just Vocab
Wheres The Rhyme?

LethalIsILL · 08-01-2006, 11:36 AM

^^
there is rhymin

LadyValentine · 08-01-2006, 11:50 AM

^But No Substance
It's A Bunch Of Vocab That Rhymes
Not An Actually Rap

E.G
I'm Dope Like Fiends High On Petol
Dip Low Like Riders From Gangbaging Central

LethalIsILL · 08-01-2006, 11:52 AM

^^^
if you know the vocab then you'll see the links
and it is a rhyme, if not then this is not a free for you

Babe Truth · 08-01-2006, 12:11 PM

this was the most unlyrical shit i ever seen in my life

Dan Russell · 08-01-2006, 12:15 PM

plz g dont try that again

LethalIsILL · 08-01-2006, 12:57 PM

adkahn your not lyrical at all shut the fuck up and get out my thread

LadyValentine · 08-01-2006, 01:07 PM

^You ryed To Be Lyrical With Substance
Without Substance There Is Nothing

A Bunch Of Vocabulary Rhymed Together = Unlyrical

-SS-12345 · 08-01-2006, 01:49 PM

Yo Shit Wasnt That good

Dan Russell · 08-01-2006, 01:54 PM

ha ha ha, "get outta my thread",
what happened to you G, u always been a bitch

that shit was wack seriously, check ya feed.... ha ha

The Gatfather · 08-01-2006, 05:09 PM

This free didn't make sense to me, at all, it was just words shoved together

Quote:

Hourly, hour hand, hourglass,hours..hours

that line right there is a good example

suggestions
don't force anything, when you right a free like this one you don't have to add multies you need the lines to be expanded a lot, if your gonna add multies make sure the lines are real long
free's like this one take a long time to write since you can only use one letter to make a few bars, if you write a free like this one you need to take time on it it's not gonna just come to you it takes a while

if your gonna make anotha one like this take that into consideration but you have done better than this

Dan Russell · 08-01-2006, 05:11 PM

this is hilarious

07-31-2006, 10:00 PM	#1
LethalIsILL Go play somewhere im busy Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: in the air i dont hear niggas corny raps Posts: 6,965 Repped: 138 Repped 1,014 Times in 218 Posts Neg Reps: 56 Neg Repped at 81 Times in 57 Posts	Alphabetical Toss Up Alphabetical Toss Up ya i know papoose did somethin similiar to this. but imma try my own, and its not in order neither (A)Arsenals, arrogance, and arson artillery, arthritis, autopsy, abortions Avaricious, avenge, avarice, and asphyxiate artistic,argumentative-less, articulate (C)craziness, car crashes, continuously courageous Crazy counter cultures, cuffed-in cages (H)Hoppers, hopscotchers, Honda horsepowers Hourly, hour hand, hourglass,hours..hours (R)Repressed, reprobates, recapitulate Rebels, rebellion, recede, remunerate (F)Faggots, fake fathers, frauds, frightenin Fires, feeling finders, furiously fightin (S)Semi-shooters, slug slingas, snipin soldiers seashores, sellin sickenin shells, shattered & smashed shoulders (B)bullets blastin, bitches bitchin, brutally battered, Bloody blades, bluffin bitches (D) don’t (M) matter (E)Education-less, enemies earn (N) nothing, natter (G)Georgia girls, (W)wonderful world, (M)mutha fuckin models, (H)how (U) Hurl? (J)jackasses, jaguar jackers, joyful, jab jaw bones (O)offsprings, oligarchy, officiousness, O-zone (T) techs, terrorist, terrifying, tragic, twin towers, teacher-less (P)prayin, penalizing, penetratin penis, preacher-less (D)danger (I)in islands (W)wakin in (L)lakes (K)killin (N)niggas,(Q)quitters, (V)vermons (Q)quality, queens, quarintine, (X) X-rays (Y)York-City, youngins, yachts, zombie zappers __________________ [12:55AM] sbrecords: ziz is there an ignore button for a member in the chatbox? [12:56AM] Mixtape Assassin: if there wuz one i wouldnt even have read your message just now lol

07-31-2006, 10:43 PM	#6
LethalIsILL Go play somewhere im busy Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: in the air i dont hear niggas corny raps Posts: 6,965 Repped: 138 Repped 1,014 Times in 218 Posts Neg Reps: 56 Neg Repped at 81 Times in 57 Posts	thanks for the feed skipp and prophecy __________________ [12:55AM] sbrecords: ziz is there an ignore button for a member in the chatbox? [12:56AM] Mixtape Assassin: if there wuz one i wouldnt even have read your message just now lol

08-01-2006, 11:31 AM	#7
LethalIsILL Go play somewhere im busy Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: in the air i dont hear niggas corny raps Posts: 6,965 Repped: 138 Repped 1,014 Times in 218 Posts Neg Reps: 56 Neg Repped at 81 Times in 57 Posts	..uppin... __________________ [12:55AM] sbrecords: ziz is there an ignore button for a member in the chatbox? [12:56AM] Mixtape Assassin: if there wuz one i wouldnt even have read your message just now lol

08-01-2006, 11:36 AM	#9
LethalIsILL Go play somewhere im busy Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: in the air i dont hear niggas corny raps Posts: 6,965 Repped: 138 Repped 1,014 Times in 218 Posts Neg Reps: 56 Neg Repped at 81 Times in 57 Posts	^^ there is rhymin __________________ [12:55AM] sbrecords: ziz is there an ignore button for a member in the chatbox? [12:56AM] Mixtape Assassin: if there wuz one i wouldnt even have read your message just now lol

08-01-2006, 11:52 AM	#11
LethalIsILL Go play somewhere im busy Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: in the air i dont hear niggas corny raps Posts: 6,965 Repped: 138 Repped 1,014 Times in 218 Posts Neg Reps: 56 Neg Repped at 81 Times in 57 Posts	^^^ if you know the vocab then you'll see the links and it is a rhyme, if not then this is not a free for you __________________ [12:55AM] sbrecords: ziz is there an ignore button for a member in the chatbox? [12:56AM] Mixtape Assassin: if there wuz one i wouldnt even have read your message just now lol

07-31-2006, 10:05 PM	#2
Skipp a.k.a Dat-Nigga INT.~Rhymers~Council Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: The Council Board Room Posts: 2,678 Repped: 0 Repped 36 Times in 26 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	my nigga dis was nice

07-31-2006, 10:20 PM	#3
Tha Prophecy a.k.a. Nervous~Breakdown Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 192 Repped: 0 Repped 1 Time in 1 Post Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	hmm despite the fact that almost every multie was forced, n some things barely rhymed, this was a decent verse, because u had some pretty good vocab

07-31-2006, 10:22 PM	#4
SirChromeMag Kritikal Mindz Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Da' Ville, GA Posts: 295 Repped: 0 Repped 1 Time in 1 Post Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	like are you just naming off your vocab? or is it suppose to be a rap? i did one like this awhile back, ill post it, its actually a rap. and why is Hurl in the U's?

08-01-2006, 11:33 AM	#8
LadyValentine Veteran Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Throw A TV At You Crazy Posts: 3,948 Repped: 82 Repped 1,918 Times in 381 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 36 Times in 31 Posts	This Is Just Vocab Wheres The Rhyme?

08-01-2006, 11:50 AM	#10
LadyValentine Veteran Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Throw A TV At You Crazy Posts: 3,948 Repped: 82 Repped 1,918 Times in 381 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 36 Times in 31 Posts	^But No Substance It's A Bunch Of Vocab That Rhymes Not An Actually Rap E.G I'm Dope Like Fiends High On Petol Dip Low Like Riders From Gangbaging Central

08-01-2006, 12:11 PM	#12
Babe Truth Da Truth Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 2,912 Repped: 296 Repped 82 Times in 26 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	this was the most unlyrical shit i ever seen in my life

08-01-2006, 12:15 PM	#13
Dan Russell D-Block 4 Life Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Perth City Posts: 1,374 Repped: 6 Repped 34 Times in 32 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	plz g dont try that again

08-01-2006, 12:57 PM	#14
LethalIsILL Go play somewhere im busy Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: in the air i dont hear niggas corny raps Posts: 6,965 Repped: 138 Repped 1,014 Times in 218 Posts Neg Reps: 56 Neg Repped at 81 Times in 57 Posts	adkahn your not lyrical at all shut the fuck up and get out my thread __________________ [12:55AM] sbrecords: ziz is there an ignore button for a member in the chatbox? [12:56AM] Mixtape Assassin: if there wuz one i wouldnt even have read your message just now lol

08-01-2006, 01:07 PM	#15
LadyValentine Veteran Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Throw A TV At You Crazy Posts: 3,948 Repped: 82 Repped 1,918 Times in 381 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 36 Times in 31 Posts	^You ryed To Be Lyrical With Substance Without Substance There Is Nothing A Bunch Of Vocabulary Rhymed Together = Unlyrical

08-01-2006, 01:49 PM	#16
-SS-12345 ~Grimy~Lyrical~Kingz~ Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 858 Repped: 34 Repped 14 Times in 11 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Yo Shit Wasnt That good

08-01-2006, 01:54 PM	#17
Dan Russell D-Block 4 Life Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Perth City Posts: 1,374 Repped: 6 Repped 34 Times in 32 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	ha ha ha, "get outta my thread", what happened to you G, u always been a bitch that shit was wack seriously, check ya feed.... ha ha

08-01-2006, 05:11 PM	#19
Dan Russell D-Block 4 Life Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Perth City Posts: 1,374 Repped: 6 Repped 34 Times in 32 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	this is hilarious

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