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Poetic Swagger
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[Komplex]
From what I've heard what I embody is quite beserk Lyrically aneurysmal, widely know to "strike a nerve" To kick a tight verse bodyin faggots is light work My shit is guaranteed to kill, you throw shots that MIGHT work Soon after I put you to death, the hearse'll come-for-ya Permanently put you to rest....reverse insomnia My peaceful side was reduced, sadly constant war took it Personality is now Slaughterhouse, I'm one-fourth crooked Enemies feel like their rising to what seems to be a challenge Long as real niggas outnumber haters, everything is balanced Lyricism don't appeal to those who grudge against mental pictures I call em Thurgood Marshalls, a bunch of "judgemental niggas" Like a vulture on a corpse my movements are so sudden Kidnappning rivals for ransom like I'm beefin with Joe Budden Easily crush your defenses, come fight with your best shield Versatility allows me to come write/right out of left-field Styllistically real, you late bloomers can't even rival my skill Even without a terminal disease, I'mma still die ill If I ain't the best Lord strike me down with lightning now but if you gave me the gift, then who am I to fight the crown? I'm true to the artform, deep in love with lyrical scriptures Living in times where rappers lie like their thugs to get richer That niggas rhymes ain't deep, yall niggas minds just weak I'm the good shepherd restoring vision to you blinded sheep [DXavier] Im like two emcees put together, some people's enemy So put me into the equation, and Ill equal energy The feeble envy me, and pretend their the best But I tend to think of it as identity theft You want beef? fall back, or you'll regret it like Kennedy When he took the limo instead of the SUV I'm in a class by myself, so you cant sit next to me My flows a disease, you can transmit sexually Keep fucking you lyrically, can be considered rape But you're the one who asked me on this dinner date Thinking you could take all the food off my plate Not knowing doing so, would fuel and create A monster, who ensues to cremate Any so called rapper, whose music is fake My rhymes show maturity, but still show some impurity Cause my pen sin (pension) like social security When I kill rappers, I splatter their brains on my shoes So I can think on my feet, do I have to explain that to you? Intoxicated on lyrics, so I can abstain from the booze It aint complicated physics, but you remain all confused Its gravity, you fell off, you dont matter to us anymore I make so much cake, that I give the batter to the very poor And that would be you guys, I put you out of business But I still have many enemies that Ive vowed to finish I don't doubt my limits but the edges Im still rough around Dont put a crown on my head, instead put a mushroom cloud That'll serve the function to stop those discussin who I am I'm the same damn thing that caused destruction in Japan The same man, responsible for the abduction of your fans You couldn't stop my flow with a construction of a dam To go on for this long, fuck it wasn't planned But I aint gunna stop, no reduction, I expand Im gunna leave out nothing for the fans Even if there only a few, but I have just began Im highly motivated, but Im truly not inspired when I see these wack ass rappers polluting our environment The solutions not retirement, not gunna leave it alone Instead Ill prove to everybody Im in a league of my own
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"Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz Last edited by Komplex; 06-18-2009 at 08:29 PM. |
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Join Date: May 2006
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damn.... you both came hard as hell on this one... i can't decide whose was hotter. you both dropped hot shit, did your thing, and kept things going the whole time. hate to give this rating out, but this is definitely a 10/10. i tried to figure out some lines to highlight as the dopest but this is all fire. hope yall keep collabing
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Wordsmith
Join Date: May 2008
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Dope collab but Plex came that bit harder IMO....DX you're verse was good but had a few weak lines in there and a few bars felt rushed half way through....Plex you're verse was consistant and had witty meta's and a strong flow....both of you're multi's were tight to....stay up
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^^ good looks - i wrote this long ass verse in a 15 minute span so I didnt really polish it. Be that as it may, I think its hard to deny that both these verses are lyrically ill
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``Enlightened Emcee::..
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A proposition; I'm the opposition, you oughta listen
taking down these 2's a modest mission, you not as gifted I'm hot as liquid from a volcano, i'm flop resistant I got a sickness, you 2 to me's No Competition A hostile vision; I'm instillin a drought, killin the doubt I administer skill from the mouth, I'll deminish ya clout We battle for decisions and in minutes its out DX's list of wack drops 'keeps growin' like Plex's syllable count ByaaaaAtTTTTCh ahahaha just playin with yall. ![]() On the real, nice drop, you two of my favourite MC's. Anybody wanna collab with me? Hit me up I'm down. I know your resumes, you know me. Let's get it.
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..:General Truth:...
Join Date: Aug 2006
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Yo this was good Plex really went in on this drop and DX verse was ill too
Lyricism don't appeal to those who grudge against mental pictures I call em Thurgood Marshalls, a bunch of "judgemental niggas" Like a vulture on a corpse my movements are so sudden Kidnappning rivals for ransom like I'm beefin with Joe Budden my fav part frm plex verse That'll serve the function to stop those discussin who I am I'm the same damn thing that caused destruction in Japan The same man, responsible for the abduction of your fans You couldn't stop my flow with a construction of a dam To go on for this long, fuck it wasn't planned But I aint gunna stop, no reduction, I expand fav frm dx good drop ya stay up
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Poetic Swagger
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My rhymes show maturity, but still show some impurity
Cause my pen sin (pension) like social security When I kill rappers, I splatter their brains on my shoes So I can think on my feet, do I have to explain that to you? Intoxicated on lyrics, so I can abstain from the booze It aint complicated physics, but you remain all confused My favorite part of DX's verse. murdered that shit homie.
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Soon after I put you to death, the hearse'll come-for-ya
Permanently put you to rest....reverse insomnia -ILL line Long as real niggas outnumber haters, everything is balanced Lyricism don't appeal to those who grudge against mental pictures I call em Thurgood Marshalls, a bunch of "judgemental niggas" --Strong line If I ain't the best Lord strike me down with lightning now but if you gave me the gift, then who am I to fight the crown? -Could be the best bar in here. Flowed perfectly That niggas rhymes ain't deep, yall niggas minds just weak I'm the good shepherd restoring vision to you blinded sheep _Perfect way to end it -Overall the verse was fuego and lyrically very strong. im glad we both approve of each others shit haha.
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So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in |
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``Enlightened Emcee::..
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Join Date: Mar 2009
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well no doh Plex you just suck sit back and take a break before your shit turns gay
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Join Date: Oct 2008
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Soon after I put you to death, the hearse'll come-for-ya
Permanently put you to rest....reverse insomnia My peaceful side was reduced, sadly constant war took it Personality is now Slaughterhouse, I'm one-fourth crooked Easily crush your defenses, come fight with your best shield Versatility allows me to come write/right out of left-field Styllistically real, you late bloomers can't even rival my skill Even without a terminal disease, I'mma still die ill The feeble envy me, and pretend their the best But I tend to think of it as identity theft My rhymes show maturity, but still show some impurity Cause my pen sin (pension) like social security When I kill rappers, I splatter their brains on my shoes So I can think on my feet, do I have to explain that to you? Intoxicated on lyrics, so I can abstain from the booze It aint complicated physics, but you remain all confused all i can say is damn. both of yall cats blacked out on this shit. my only problem with it is that i didn't get to be on it. lol im kiddin. good job guys. |
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Ronaldo
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Text rap is ghey
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^^^ As is Canada
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So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in |
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``Enlightened Emcee::..
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^^ watch it..................
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The alias is Protege
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where y0u been at virus?
haven't seen you actually drop shit in a while
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feed is appreciated.
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So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in |
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Vulture
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Both had good flow n multies...I actually liked Dx verse better, not knockin komplex...
Might have to get a collab with one of you, if not both Good to see some decent people still droppin lol |
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Block Hugga - Glock Bussa
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I aint really into text shit gave dat shit up like early 2000, but ima keep it a 100 yall both murdered dat shit. I hope yall doin audios cuz dat shit would be a waste if not thats just my take.
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^^ good looks on the feed
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So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in |
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Blissful Poetry
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sick collabo, both came out and did ya thang. Plex, as always you never cease to amaze me with that intellectual shit. And DX, u come on a pretty flamable level, especially if it was merely a 15 min unpolished rip. Solid piece from both to make a completely ill collab. Give me feed on my drop if y'all can, I haven't dropped on here in a hot minute so I'm curious to see how much I've fell off haha. 1
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Knowledge is Bliss...Poetic Pimpin' Biatch!!! Battle Record: 10-1 |
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Poetic Swagger
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good looks Reflexion.
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"Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz |
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whattup baller - appreciate the love
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So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in |
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this was some dope shit Plex
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So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in |
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