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Old 06-13-2009, 03:29 PM   #1
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Mc Who?

I feel like putting a nail in your coffin...

I heard this scrub Mcduffee piss and moan like his mother/
After I fucked her with the rubber and smacked her right on her blubber/
This niggas a sucker, inherited it from my lover/
How come Mcduffee sounds like a Mc Jonas Brother?/
When he's rappin he can't form a rhythm the lonely fucker/
I own this gutter, he's bout as serious as Chris Tucker/
Nah really, who the fuck are you supposed to be?/
Slow motherfucker i've roasted you for a weak/
And boasted it to the board hoisted you by your feet/
But apparently you lack understanding because you're weak/
Mentally inept when you slept you met defeat/
You reap what you sow so what the fuck did I reap?/
I killed you in your sleep, dropped this verse so read it and weep/
You were apart of the invasion, the part I could just sweep/
You took the bait you must be feelin ample/
Because this is a sample and even now you're just a fuckin example/
Look at your verses bitch, I could wipe you OFF the grid/
Good thing you ain't a rapper, you slid into shit/
Your best verse is rapin a 10 year old kid/
And unless you mean mental health, your shit ain't sick/
As a mtter of fact, on the body of rap you're the DICK/
And your other best two, out of a slew of garbage/
Were using Wayne's and Fergie's flow, shit I could target/
Instead of waitin until I had forgot, your ass had to drop a verse so you could get verbally shot/
And manipulated to stipulations where your usual crotch/
Er your verses, can be splattered and laid out in surges/
And I didn't mean to call your verse crotch, you heard it/
I just meant your verses are balls, therefore it's reworded/
And how dare you step to a professional/
When you look like somethin from Dashboard Confessional/
Seriously, this nigga looks like a fuckin Hyena/
You rappin piece of shit rip off of John Cena/
Nah, I don't ever see you really emergin/
People pick apart your piss-worthy halfrate verses/
And like surgeons they have the contradictions convergin/
So instead of an actual rhyme it's shunned as bird shit/
Please you ain't even worth a response from me/
Hell, you were hardly worth a taunt from me/
But just to make you feel better, i'll tell you whatever/

You're not clever, in fact it's over get it together

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