"The Verseful Storm"

sofis2cated · 06-10-2009, 04:15 PM

Approach the page, like a storm front ready to unleash
A fire from the belly of raps, deadliest of beasts
So steady like a beat, my thunders pounding in your ears
No lightning, this mother fuckers sound is what you fear
You wonder how is he so near, I can’t even see the clouds
No even stevens sound, just the screams from people drowned
The scene of evil pounds down in the fashion of hail
Take cover under the beat cuz my words are smashing the brail
A second of calmness but don’t slip and get caught in
The treacherous strong winds that this pencil is offerin
I bet your astonished at this vortex of syllables
Damaging everything in sight like when Jordan was still a Bull
Murdering as I hurl this absurd, whirlwind of words
Eardrums are curl-in, emersed in a swirl’n of bursts
The worst is at birth but it goes roaring past by
Your town in 16 bars, back to your boring ass lives

sofis2cated · 06-12-2009, 08:35 PM

was this at least a decent concept?

Bunny_Rabbit · 06-12-2009, 09:09 PM

That was sick, man. Your multi's were dope, and was really nice to read seeing as how there's nothing but bullshit on this board. I'll give it a 8/10

Stay up.

mcduffee420 · 06-13-2009, 02:23 AM

mice homie props fucking nice sound effects too it lmao So steady like a beat, my thunders pounding in your ears
No lightning, this mother fuckers sound is what you fear

Bunny_Rabbit · 06-13-2009, 03:36 AM

^^^You look like a major tool in your avatar, lol.

mcduffee420 · 06-13-2009, 11:01 AM

majorly,huh?

06-10-2009, 04:15 PM	#1
sofis2cated California Lyricist Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Bakersfield, CA Posts: 762 Repped: 33 Repped 10 Times in 8 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	"The Verseful Storm" "The Verseful Storm" Approach the page, like a storm front ready to unleash A fire from the belly of raps, deadliest of beasts So steady like a beat, my thunders pounding in your ears No lightning, this mother fuckers sound is what you fear You wonder how is he so near, I can’t even see the clouds No even stevens sound, just the screams from people drowned The scene of evil pounds down in the fashion of hail Take cover under the beat cuz my words are smashing the brail A second of calmness but don’t slip and get caught in The treacherous strong winds that this pencil is offerin I bet your astonished at this vortex of syllables Damaging everything in sight like when Jordan was still a Bull Murdering as I hurl this absurd, whirlwind of words Eardrums are curl-in, emersed in a swirl’n of bursts The worst is at birth but it goes roaring past by Your town in 16 bars, back to your boring ass lives

06-12-2009, 09:09 PM	#3
Bunny_Rabbit Rorshak Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: The Tangent Universe Posts: 857 Repped: 42 Repped 108 Times in 47 Posts Neg Reps: 49 Neg Repped at 44 Times in 42 Posts	That was sick, man. Your multi's were dope, and was really nice to read seeing as how there's nothing but bullshit on this board. I'll give it a 8/10 Stay up. __________________

06-13-2009, 03:36 AM	#5
Bunny_Rabbit Rorshak Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: The Tangent Universe Posts: 857 Repped: 42 Repped 108 Times in 47 Posts Neg Reps: 49 Neg Repped at 44 Times in 42 Posts	^^^You look like a major tool in your avatar, lol. __________________

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06-12-2009, 08:35 PM	#2
sofis2cated California Lyricist Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Bakersfield, CA Posts: 762 Repped: 33 Repped 10 Times in 8 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	was this at least a decent concept?

06-13-2009, 02:23 AM	#4
mcduffee420 Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: minnesota_st.cloud Posts: 686 Repped: 169 Repped 81 Times in 40 Posts Neg Reps: 10 Neg Repped at 31 Times in 22 Posts	mice homie props fucking nice sound effects too it lmao So steady like a beat, my thunders pounding in your ears No lightning, this mother fuckers sound is what you fear

06-13-2009, 11:01 AM	#6
mcduffee420 Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: minnesota_st.cloud Posts: 686 Repped: 169 Repped 81 Times in 40 Posts Neg Reps: 10 Neg Repped at 31 Times in 22 Posts	majorly,huh?