insanity!!!!!!!!

Str8Shooter · 06-09-2009, 09:58 PM

on and on i go as a natural born psycho
i turn dreams into reality for people who want to die slow
stuck in a jaded life twist - i put blades to my wrist
drink cyanide for kicks slash my neck nape with icepicks
i stabbed my back with a sword in the psychiatric ward
strangled my best friend and left his body wrapped in chords
i felt like my luck was over so i stole a truck from Hova
Saw Nas walkin down the street and ran him the fuck over!!
got much closer and saw it who really was-Little Scrappy
since all his tracks are wack i started feelin really happy
my riddle raps be insane - facts for your little brains
i'll cut myself then swallow some acid to kill the pain
i do this shit to death while i do crystal meth
go to childrens soccer games high just to boo the ref
my lyrics widly delirious - some are mildly serious
ill murder any faggot who doubts me period

Threyev · 06-10-2009, 03:31 PM

hm.... there were some good lines, but this seemed a lot like a bite of em/old cage/ necro more than something you actually felt. on top of that, a bunch of the punches were forced like a motherfucker. it's easy to see you can rhyme, just hope you do your own thing with it. try to push yourself and see what you get.

Str8Shooter · 06-10-2009, 06:39 PM

aite bro. thanks for the advice.

Bunny_Rabbit · 06-10-2009, 10:36 PM

Pretty good drop. I wasn't really feeling some lines, but other than that, good to see you're using multi's.

Str8Shooter · 06-12-2009, 02:25 PM

cool. thanks man.

06-09-2009, 09:58 PM	#1
Str8Shooter Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: In the Dungeons of Rap Posts: 38 Repped: 0 Repped 5 Times in 5 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	insanity!!!!!!!! insanity!!!!!!!! on and on i go as a natural born psycho i turn dreams into reality for people who want to die slow stuck in a jaded life twist - i put blades to my wrist drink cyanide for kicks slash my neck nape with icepicks i stabbed my back with a sword in the psychiatric ward strangled my best friend and left his body wrapped in chords i felt like my luck was over so i stole a truck from Hova Saw Nas walkin down the street and ran him the fuck over!! got much closer and saw it who really was-Little Scrappy since all his tracks are wack i started feelin really happy my riddle raps be insane - facts for your little brains i'll cut myself then swallow some acid to kill the pain i do this shit to death while i do crystal meth go to childrens soccer games high just to boo the ref my lyrics widly delirious - some are mildly serious ill murder any faggot who doubts me period

06-10-2009, 10:36 PM	#4
Bunny_Rabbit Rorshak Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: The Tangent Universe Posts: 886 Repped: 44 Repped 117 Times in 52 Posts Neg Reps: 52 Neg Repped at 59 Times in 54 Posts	Pretty good drop. I wasn't really feeling some lines, but other than that, good to see you're using multi's. __________________

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06-10-2009, 03:31 PM	#2
Threyev Join Date: May 2006 Location: The Bronx Posts: 553 Repped: 82 Repped 46 Times in 29 Posts Neg Reps: 3 Neg Repped at 5 Times in 5 Posts	hm.... there were some good lines, but this seemed a lot like a bite of em/old cage/ necro more than something you actually felt. on top of that, a bunch of the punches were forced like a motherfucker. it's easy to see you can rhyme, just hope you do your own thing with it. try to push yourself and see what you get.

06-10-2009, 06:39 PM	#3
Str8Shooter Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: In the Dungeons of Rap Posts: 38 Repped: 0 Repped 5 Times in 5 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	aite bro. thanks for the advice.

06-12-2009, 02:25 PM	#5
Str8Shooter Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: In the Dungeons of Rap Posts: 38 Repped: 0 Repped 5 Times in 5 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	cool. thanks man.