'I Hate Jay Z, Nas, Big Pun, and Rakim'

Bunny_Rabbit · 06-08-2009, 10:15 PM

J/K

This kid is forever inclined to never confine//
to pressure when I write clever designed veteran rhymes//
the most intriguing emcee breathing in beats//
a demon that'll creep in ya streets this evening for meat//
the hoards of metaphors I spit are scorchin' rookies//
I break fags in half for the 'paper' like 'fortune cookies'//
I got sick facts so get back before I click clack//
this big gat and split your fuckin' whig fast you bitch ass//
a mis-matched quick cat to give you whiplash//
perform lyrical witch craft and leave you dispatched//
you're dealin' with a volatile but iconic gremlin//
I smoke out and get 'stoned' like 'unfaithful Islamic women'//
all I need is lots of kush and a worthy block to mush//
equipped with more 'firearms' than a 'burning octopus'//
and you geeks'll be eatin' through a straw for weeks//
I'll put you fags in an 'all white cast' like 'Dawsons Creek'//

Baller · 06-08-2009, 11:28 PM

"I'll put you in an all white cast like Seinfield" 40 Cal

Bunny_Rabbit · 06-08-2009, 11:45 PM

I don't even listen to 40 Cal, man.

Threyev · 06-08-2009, 11:53 PM

good thing you put the jk, i was about to shit myself.

multies were tight, flow was decent, and had a few good metaphors in there (like that line baller brought up). still, considering some of the absolute donkey shit on this board in the past week, this is pretty good. keep posting, you're definitely getting better.

Baller · 06-09-2009, 12:08 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Bunny_Rabbit

I don't even listen to 40 Cal, wigger.

Neither do I...but I've seen people post this punchline you don't know how many times saying its dope.

Bunny_Rabbit · 06-09-2009, 12:16 AM

Well the punchline's completely useless seeing as how there's a black lawyer in Seinfeld; thus defeating the whole purpose of the punchline.

Baller · 06-09-2009, 02:20 AM

I'm sure there's been a couple instances where a black person was part of the script....

B DONington · 06-09-2009, 06:25 AM

seen mad niggas in dawsons creek

but that all white cast shit is aging...shit old as mother

how many all white cast shows are there really...theres no creativity behind it

other than all that...shit was aight

sofis2cated · 06-09-2009, 07:22 PM

good read dude, multi's, metas and all that shit

oatmeal · 06-09-2009, 07:58 PM

is seem like ppl today only like those fony rappers but dont like the rappers that started the rap game

Bunny_Rabbit · 06-10-2009, 04:51 PM

uppin this

Str8Shooter · 06-10-2009, 06:42 PM

This kid is forever inclined to never confine//
to pressure when I write clever designed veteran rhymes//

you're dealin' with a volatile but iconic gremlin//
I smoke out and get 'stoned' like 'unfaithful Islamic women'//
all I need is lots of kush and a worthy block to mush//
equipped with more 'firearms' than a 'burning octopus'//

u killed the multies and the punches. sick shit dude. leave some feedback on my insanity freestyle bro.

Bunny_Rabbit · 06-10-2009, 10:33 PM

^^^Props homie

06-08-2009, 10:15 PM	#1
Bunny_Rabbit Rorshak Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: The Tangent Universe Posts: 857 Repped: 42 Repped 108 Times in 47 Posts Neg Reps: 49 Neg Repped at 44 Times in 42 Posts	'I Hate Jay Z, Nas, Big Pun, and Rakim' 'I Hate Jay Z, Nas, Big Pun, and Rakim' J/K This kid is forever inclined to never confine// to pressure when I write clever designed veteran rhymes// the most intriguing emcee breathing in beats// a demon that'll creep in ya streets this evening for meat// the hoards of metaphors I spit are scorchin' rookies// I break fags in half for the 'paper' like 'fortune cookies'// I got sick facts so get back before I click clack// this big gat and split your fuckin' whig fast you bitch ass// a mis-matched quick cat to give you whiplash// perform lyrical witch craft and leave you dispatched// you're dealin' with a volatile but iconic gremlin// I smoke out and get 'stoned' like 'unfaithful Islamic women'// all I need is lots of kush and a worthy block to mush// equipped with more 'firearms' than a 'burning octopus'// and you geeks'll be eatin' through a straw for weeks// I'll put you fags in an 'all white cast' like 'Dawsons Creek'// __________________

06-08-2009, 11:45 PM	#3
Bunny_Rabbit Rorshak Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: The Tangent Universe Posts: 857 Repped: 42 Repped 108 Times in 47 Posts Neg Reps: 49 Neg Repped at 44 Times in 42 Posts	I don't even listen to 40 Cal, man. __________________ Last edited by Bunny_Rabbit; 06-09-2009 at 02:53 AM.

06-09-2009, 12:16 AM	#6
Bunny_Rabbit Rorshak Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: The Tangent Universe Posts: 857 Repped: 42 Repped 108 Times in 47 Posts Neg Reps: 49 Neg Repped at 44 Times in 42 Posts	Well the punchline's completely useless seeing as how there's a black lawyer in Seinfeld; thus defeating the whole purpose of the punchline. __________________

06-09-2009, 06:25 AM	#8
B DONington Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: 613...oTTawA fukaz Posts: 409 Repped: 27 Repped 10 Times in 7 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	seen mad niggas in dawsons creek but that all white cast shit is aging...shit old as mother how many all white cast shows are there really...theres no creativity behind it other than all that...shit was aight __________________ MYSPACE.COM/ITSBDON

06-10-2009, 04:51 PM	#11
Bunny_Rabbit Rorshak Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: The Tangent Universe Posts: 857 Repped: 42 Repped 108 Times in 47 Posts Neg Reps: 49 Neg Repped at 44 Times in 42 Posts	uppin this __________________

06-08-2009, 11:28 PM	#2
Baller Vulture Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: NM Posts: 3,040 Repped: 105 Repped 232 Times in 138 Posts Neg Reps: 67 Neg Repped at 58 Times in 39 Posts	"I'll put you in an all white cast like Seinfield" 40 Cal

06-08-2009, 11:53 PM	#4
Threyev Join Date: May 2006 Location: The Bronx Posts: 553 Repped: 82 Repped 46 Times in 29 Posts Neg Reps: 3 Neg Repped at 5 Times in 5 Posts	good thing you put the jk, i was about to shit myself. multies were tight, flow was decent, and had a few good metaphors in there (like that line baller brought up). still, considering some of the absolute donkey shit on this board in the past week, this is pretty good. keep posting, you're definitely getting better.

06-09-2009, 02:20 AM	#7
Baller Vulture Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: NM Posts: 3,040 Repped: 105 Repped 232 Times in 138 Posts Neg Reps: 67 Neg Repped at 58 Times in 39 Posts	I'm sure there's been a couple instances where a black person was part of the script....

06-09-2009, 07:22 PM	#9
sofis2cated California Lyricist Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Bakersfield, CA Posts: 762 Repped: 33 Repped 10 Times in 8 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	good read dude, multi's, metas and all that shit

06-09-2009, 07:58 PM	#10
oatmeal Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: b-more Posts: 3 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	is seem like ppl today only like those fony rappers but dont like the rappers that started the rap game

06-10-2009, 06:42 PM	#12
Str8Shooter Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: In the Dungeons of Rap Posts: 38 Repped: 0 Repped 5 Times in 5 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	This kid is forever inclined to never confine// to pressure when I write clever designed veteran rhymes// you're dealin' with a volatile but iconic gremlin// I smoke out and get 'stoned' like 'unfaithful Islamic women'// all I need is lots of kush and a worthy block to mush// equipped with more 'firearms' than a 'burning octopus'// u killed the multies and the punches. sick shit dude. leave some feedback on my insanity freestyle bro.

06-10-2009, 10:33 PM	#13
Bunny_Rabbit Rorshak Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: The Tangent Universe Posts: 857 Repped: 42 Repped 108 Times in 47 Posts Neg Reps: 49 Neg Repped at 44 Times in 42 Posts	^^^Props homie __________________

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