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Old 06-08-2009, 04:59 PM   #1
 
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Feel It

Its so close i can feel it,
i cant help but reveal it,
So i lock and seal it,
This loco joke ,
It aint no fun, (Fun)
I step on stage,
Break a leg and a ligament,
A got the eye of the tiger,
Am no rocky balboa,
All this flash a got,
It aint for show, (Show)
Tell me what you need,
So I can get it for you close,
I got yo back fo sho,
What the fuck you think am here for nigga,
Am not for advantage,
So take it if you get it,
Stay Back, Watch the flame,
Avoid getting clapped,
Im like Dr DRE,
I can see dead people,
I lay you down on the deathbed.
Fill yo head with lead,
Not even one tear did i shed,
At night ,
Im lyin in ma bed,
Thoughts come to me,
Then i write them down,
Rap them to you all,
Am runnin from them Brooklynites,
No more knuckle body fights,
Bandana hang from the left side,
Everyone round me know how to throw up them WESTSIDES,
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Old 06-08-2009, 06:45 PM   #2
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You could really take yayo's spot...spittin lyrical
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Old 06-09-2009, 11:14 AM   #3
 
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You could really take yayo's spot...spittin lyrical

Erm, is that meant to be a complement?????:S
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Old 06-09-2009, 03:48 PM   #4
 
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Erm, is that meant to be a complement?????:S
No. yayo is garbage.
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Old 06-09-2009, 06:53 PM   #5
 
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yo propz to the westside dawg
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Old 06-10-2009, 08:12 AM   #6
 
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No. yayo is garbage.
C'mon man yayo aint that bad, hes a good rapper
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Old 06-10-2009, 08:13 AM   #7
 
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Thanks man , You should spit some aswell
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Old 06-10-2009, 09:57 AM   #8
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yayo > u

yayo ain't even a dope rapper in the first place.....and this is coming from a gunit fan.....but ur just totally wack....u noe this too....stop trying to act like u duno ur wack.....ur flow is basic as hell....u have absolutely NO multies and u need to add a few punches/metaphors/wordplay to ur verse.....keep dropping verses....but stop acting mad ignorant thinking ur the best and shit....
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Old 06-10-2009, 03:38 PM   #9
 
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i love how this nigga neg's anybody who gives him negative feedback. why post if you're gonna hate on anything that doesn't praise you??

and yayo has to be one of the worst rappers ever...

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Old 06-10-2009, 03:40 PM   #10
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Yayo isnt top 25 all time worst just for the fact he actually raps unlike a lot of people today...but duke is really wack none the less, 2/10 as an mc.
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Old 06-10-2009, 04:29 PM   #11
 
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i put him in my top 25 worst. or bottom 25...whatever. i think he's terrible.
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