Feel It

Tha Pak Ataak · 06-08-2009, 04:59 PM

Its so close i can feel it,
i cant help but reveal it,
So i lock and seal it,
This loco joke ,
It aint no fun, (Fun)
I step on stage,
Break a leg and a ligament,
A got the eye of the tiger,
Am no rocky balboa,
All this flash a got,
It aint for show, (Show)
Tell me what you need,
So I can get it for you close,
I got yo back fo sho,
What the fuck you think am here for nigga,
Am not for advantage,
So take it if you get it,
Stay Back, Watch the flame,
Avoid getting clapped,
Im like Dr DRE,
I can see dead people,
I lay you down on the deathbed.
Fill yo head with lead,
Not even one tear did i shed,
At night ,
Im lyin in ma bed,
Thoughts come to me,
Then i write them down,
Rap them to you all,
Am runnin from them Brooklynites,
No more knuckle body fights,
Bandana hang from the left side,
Everyone round me know how to throw up them WESTSIDES,

Baller · 06-08-2009, 06:45 PM

You could really take yayo's spot...spittin lyrical

Tha Pak Ataak · 06-09-2009, 11:14 AM

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Originally Posted by Baller

You could really take yayo's spot...spittin lyrical

Erm, is that meant to be a complement?????:S

Threyev · 06-09-2009, 03:48 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tha Pak Ataak

Erm, is that meant to be a complement?????:S

No. yayo is garbage.

Kidss · 06-09-2009, 06:53 PM

yo propz to the westside dawg

Tha Pak Ataak · 06-10-2009, 08:12 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Threyev

No. yayo is garbage.

C'mon man yayo aint that bad, hes a good rapper

Tha Pak Ataak · 06-10-2009, 08:13 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kidss

yo propz to the westside dawg

Thanks man , You should spit some aswell

Lil Brizzle · 06-10-2009, 09:57 AM

yayo > u

yayo ain't even a dope rapper in the first place.....and this is coming from a gunit fan.....but ur just totally wack....u noe this too....stop trying to act like u duno ur wack.....ur flow is basic as hell....u have absolutely NO multies and u need to add a few punches/metaphors/wordplay to ur verse.....keep dropping verses....but stop acting mad ignorant thinking ur the best and shit....

Threyev · 06-10-2009, 03:38 PM

i love how this nigga neg's anybody who gives him negative feedback. why post if you're gonna hate on anything that doesn't praise you??

and yayo has to be one of the worst rappers ever...

ever.

Baller · 06-10-2009, 03:40 PM

Yayo isnt top 25 all time worst just for the fact he actually raps unlike a lot of people today...but duke is really wack none the less, 2/10 as an mc.

Threyev · 06-10-2009, 04:29 PM

i put him in my top 25 worst. or bottom 25...whatever. i think he's terrible.

06-08-2009, 04:59 PM	#1
Tha Pak Ataak Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: Brooklyn Posts: 113 Repped: 10 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 10 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Feel It Feel It Its so close i can feel it, i cant help but reveal it, So i lock and seal it, This loco joke , It aint no fun, (Fun) I step on stage, Break a leg and a ligament, A got the eye of the tiger, Am no rocky balboa, All this flash a got, It aint for show, (Show) Tell me what you need, So I can get it for you close, I got yo back fo sho, What the fuck you think am here for nigga, Am not for advantage, So take it if you get it, Stay Back, Watch the flame, Avoid getting clapped, Im like Dr DRE, I can see dead people, I lay you down on the deathbed. Fill yo head with lead, Not even one tear did i shed, At night , Im lyin in ma bed, Thoughts come to me, Then i write them down, Rap them to you all, Am runnin from them Brooklynites, No more knuckle body fights, Bandana hang from the left side, Everyone round me know how to throw up them WESTSIDES, __________________

06-10-2009, 09:57 AM	#8
Lil Brizzle S.F.S. Coming! Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Land Of The Latent Posts: 1,819 Repped: 80 Repped 128 Times in 70 Posts Neg Reps: 117 Neg Repped at 145 Times in 84 Posts	yayo > u yayo ain't even a dope rapper in the first place.....and this is coming from a gunit fan.....but ur just totally wack....u noe this too....stop trying to act like u duno ur wack.....ur flow is basic as hell....u have absolutely NO multies and u need to add a few punches/metaphors/wordplay to ur verse.....keep dropping verses....but stop acting mad ignorant thinking ur the best and shit.... __________________ S.F.S. to be out on 23/11/2009!!!

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06-08-2009, 06:45 PM	#2
Baller Vulture Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: NM Posts: 3,097 Repped: 111 Repped 254 Times in 149 Posts Neg Reps: 95 Neg Repped at 61 Times in 39 Posts	You could really take yayo's spot...spittin lyrical

06-09-2009, 06:53 PM	#5
Kidss Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Bloomington Posts: 380 Repped: 0 Repped 34 Times in 26 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 21 Times in 16 Posts	yo propz to the westside dawg

06-10-2009, 03:38 PM	#9
Threyev Join Date: May 2006 Location: The Bronx Posts: 553 Repped: 82 Repped 46 Times in 29 Posts Neg Reps: 3 Neg Repped at 5 Times in 5 Posts	i love how this nigga neg's anybody who gives him negative feedback. why post if you're gonna hate on anything that doesn't praise you?? and yayo has to be one of the worst rappers ever... ever.

06-10-2009, 03:40 PM	#10
Baller Vulture Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: NM Posts: 3,097 Repped: 111 Repped 254 Times in 149 Posts Neg Reps: 95 Neg Repped at 61 Times in 39 Posts	Yayo isnt top 25 all time worst just for the fact he actually raps unlike a lot of people today...but duke is really wack none the less, 2/10 as an mc.

06-10-2009, 04:29 PM	#11
Threyev Join Date: May 2006 Location: The Bronx Posts: 553 Repped: 82 Repped 46 Times in 29 Posts Neg Reps: 3 Neg Repped at 5 Times in 5 Posts	i put him in my top 25 worst. or bottom 25...whatever. i think he's terrible.