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Old 06-08-2009, 12:47 AM   #1
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Streets Is Watchin

The Streets are watchin, restin in charge/
Eastern to western the esp-ion-age/
Saw a dude in a Hyndae wearin a suit/
What is this? James Bond at a rendezvous?/

MCs are readin my rhymes, analyzin lines/
Tantalizin crimes they mention in their prime/
Like enzymes I catalyze their chimes/
Break it down to these mimes, give em dirt and grime/
Show em straight gutter that I utter in this time/
Make em shudder wings just flutter bitch I take flight/
Hate me, don't need a puzzle I put words together/
Wordsmith assassin guzzle rhymes and lines by every letter/
Multi syllabic feel a fit when I kill you i'm illin it/
Drillin it wreckin it leavin you attention deficit/
MCs wanna attack me, my lyrics are lethal/
I'll lock you and keep you and make you bow down and pray to the steeple/
Temple of Hip Hop, made by me and other people/
Leave you in deep holes until you realize we still see you/
We're watchin you too we read you you're still feeble/
Agreeable? More like deceivable and nobody believes you/
And by the way Baller I see you i'll Jay Z you/
Straight takeover give you a bloody makeover retieve you/
You're easy, I don't even have to pet peeve you or see you/
I just keep ignoring you and I STILL beat you/
Come on man, I thought you were the best statistic/
Now I see you ain't shit, just pessimistic/
Same for the other haters, say I fail/
You're baited you're all in jail get on your knees and hail/
Before you get raped derailed and fail watch me excel/
I know you hate me I hate you too bitch go to hell/
I give you my emotion, contribute expression/
Debut my guessin on your next moves i'm testin/
Testin on purpose, just to see if I leave you wordless/
Speechless, Protege's absurd I know your heard this/
But it ain't beef nigga, don't get a misconception/
Don't want rivalry? What, you want me to list affection?/
This is a rap election for the biggest erection/
Nigga i'm better than you, or i'm egocentric/
Either way the narcissism leaves these dweebs defensive/
I don't wanna be a hater, I just send a playful challenge/
What the fuck you cryin for, the memories I couldn't salvage?/
Man the fuck up, how about lookin for postives/
Instead of takin the spirit robbin it while i'm droppin it/
Nigga you're burstin in tears, you bafoons are all a poppin bitch/
Explodin when verbally raped, there's no stoppin when i'm rockin it/
To think, ya'll can't handle bein dismantled/
I'm a verbal bandit destroyin your rhymes a vandal/
If I declare a takeover, i'm givin entertainment respiration/
Whack rappers in disdain these shit stains need the restoration/
Because while I show brains they give brains hell they taste it/
I'm a rap holy spirit, ya'll are just lyrical satans/
Nah i'm just beratin, don't take it offensive/
Some niggas are dense and some are pleadin for my attention/
But over and all, I love all the haters of my bars/
I got more than Kanye's glasses, keep makin a hatin mirage....

I love you fuckin chumps man.....keep hatin...it makes me better. Shouts out to Baller, you're my number one hater fam. I'ma sign you a fuckin autograph...Protege I love you too man i'ma take you to the baseball field and we're gonna have some father son time...son...lmao...and Therye or whatever the hell that Afrika Bambatta ass username is...I love you too bro...keep makin my hits...i'ma ghostwrite for you one day.

Lets been friends mufuckas...

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Old 06-08-2009, 01:51 AM   #2
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Wait....I'm your #1 hater because I said your rhyme schemes and metas were weak? Your trippin. If your ignoring me you wouldn't write some shit about me so.......


You rhymed a lot better but it seem pretty forced...had no punches or metas that were good...to diss someone u need that shit or personals...u had neither.

Also keep in mind your posting texts on a message board...don't take this shit too serious
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And by the way Baller I see you i'll Jay Z you/
Straight takeover give you a bloody makeover retieve you/
You're easy, I don't even have to pet peeve you or see you/
I just keep ignoring you and I STILL beat you/
Come on man, I thought you were the best statistic/
Now I see you ain't shit, just pessimistic/
Same for the other haters, say I fail/
You're baited you're all in jail get on your knees and hail/
Before you get raped derailed and fail watch me excel/
I know you hate me I hate you too bitch go to hell/
I give you my emotion, contribute expression/
Debut my guessin on your next moves i'm testin/
Testin on purpose, just to see if I leave you wordless/



nice warning shots can't wait to see Baller's lyrical response
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