Talkin That Shit

sofis2cated · 06-07-2009, 06:37 PM

It's time to rip this shit like having a twelve pound baby
My soul is hell bound maybe from all the self doubt lately
Smoke some kush, for the stress, of livin the lifestyle
Then fuck a prostitute while tryin to picture my wifes smile
Sick in the head, my brain's allergic to bullshit
So it's no wonder in school I dreamt of murdering cool kids
Not a fashion activist, just a dodger cap and white tee
Lace the piano keys and you think the Doctors back in high speed
Contracted to the beat to perform a hell-acious rhyme spree
Break away, from his grip and tell satan I’m free
Eternally locked into the mindset of a father
Dispursing my thoughts through the rhymes that I do offer
The high-points of this author is the truth behind the lyrics
Even clueless minds can hear it, right though their grimey spirits
I’ll fuck a hater through the screen with words that penetrate
But overall, I’m just smoking writing verses, sippin drank

Baller · 06-07-2009, 08:54 PM

Thought it was decent...but how is ya soul hell bound for doubtin yaself? Thought the last two lines were weak too...

sofis2cated · 06-08-2009, 04:03 PM

doubting my abilities so i fall into a life a deceit?? something along those lines is what i was going for..

anyways thanks for the feed homie

Str8Shooter · 06-08-2009, 04:14 PM

nice homie.

sofis2cated · 06-10-2009, 04:41 PM

uppin one time

06-07-2009, 06:37 PM	#1
sofis2cated California Lyricist Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Bakersfield, CA Posts: 762 Repped: 33 Repped 10 Times in 8 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	Talkin That Shit Talkin That Shit It's time to rip this shit like having a twelve pound baby My soul is hell bound maybe from all the self doubt lately Smoke some kush, for the stress, of livin the lifestyle Then fuck a prostitute while tryin to picture my wifes smile Sick in the head, my brain's allergic to bullshit So it's no wonder in school I dreamt of murdering cool kids Not a fashion activist, just a dodger cap and white tee Lace the piano keys and you think the Doctors back in high speed Contracted to the beat to perform a hell-acious rhyme spree Break away, from his grip and tell satan I’m free Eternally locked into the mindset of a father Dispursing my thoughts through the rhymes that I do offer The high-points of this author is the truth behind the lyrics Even clueless minds can hear it, right though their grimey spirits I’ll fuck a hater through the screen with words that penetrate But overall, I’m just smoking writing verses, sippin drank

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06-07-2009, 08:54 PM	#2
Baller Vulture Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: NM Posts: 3,088 Repped: 110 Repped 242 Times in 145 Posts Neg Reps: 94 Neg Repped at 61 Times in 39 Posts	Thought it was decent...but how is ya soul hell bound for doubtin yaself? Thought the last two lines were weak too...

06-08-2009, 04:03 PM	#3
sofis2cated California Lyricist Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Bakersfield, CA Posts: 762 Repped: 33 Repped 10 Times in 8 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	doubting my abilities so i fall into a life a deceit?? something along those lines is what i was going for.. anyways thanks for the feed homie

06-08-2009, 04:14 PM	#4
Str8Shooter Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: In the Dungeons of Rap Posts: 38 Repped: 0 Repped 5 Times in 5 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	nice homie.

06-10-2009, 04:41 PM	#5
sofis2cated California Lyricist Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Bakersfield, CA Posts: 762 Repped: 33 Repped 10 Times in 8 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	uppin one time