I Declare War (The Call Out)

TheMadWriter · 06-06-2009, 04:37 PM

I got a few questions bout some overrated shit/
Ya'll got me askin why like i'm fuckin Jadakiss/
Overwrought and slappin guys for their jaded bliss/
Got a good mood, now they have the right to say some shit?/
Please, don't mean to mislead or displease/
But i'll freeze your ass like a disease/
Inducin paralysis givin a need for dialysis/
You pallid bitch, your KO moment is here it's ravishin/
So lavish man, kickin my feet back/
Ya'll are some rap whores ya'll keep lickin my skeet's back/
I'm laughin at the one who attacks who's high off packs/
Dimebags and talentless hacks don't have to have macks/
More like microphones, wasted and miused/
Some of these rappers copy and pastin their verse too/
Of course I don't know, but I would like to see him/
Maybe this nigga can hit me up on the PM/
Explain the story, on some grown man shit/
And not try to get out on that 'i'm my own man' shit/
You know man? Shit it's disturbin accused of miswordin/
That nigga's a rap terrorist, someone get him a turban/
And also there's another dude with a slick tounge/
Someone please get me a verse by Shogun/
Really i'd like to compare it to somethin like a millie/
See if it's serious shit or something just silly/
I'd just once like to see the nigga post his flow up/
He might be silly, after all he's a japanese soulja..../
Well he controls em, same difference still weak/
All I need to do is shove a gat in Karate Kid's mouthpiece/
Half these dudes claim to be hard but they're so soft they're fluffy/
Can someone tell me what the fuck is a Mcduffee?/
This nigga raps like he's got nuts in his touncils/
He's a fuckin clown, I might just call him Ronald Mcdonald/
A white dude actin crazy, sounds like him and Kim/
Could it be? Mcduffee is just a whack Eminem?/(Hahhahahahaa!)
This nigga can't even put together a fuckin rhythm/
If I see you and your fat ass arm my knuckles will hit philtrums/
I could murder a beat, bitch you can't even kill drums/
Your kids will grow to be potheads just like their father real dumb.../
Keep workin kid, there's no attention that you could garner/
You'll prolly be the 60 year old raping his baby daughter/
You ain't gonna be shit, in fact you're stuck in your hole/
Like your daddy's dick when he starts jerkin the pole/(Hahahahahaaaaa)
And Protege, nigga you might need to park it../
All this beef's got your ass soundin kinda lethargic/
Komplex I ain't got shit to say to you/
Unless you give me a reason, and a day or two....

If you can't read all that than fuck you I type how much I want...hit me up on the PM! It's war bitches, choose your fuckin alliance...

Baller · 06-06-2009, 05:40 PM

You need to work on ya rhyme schemes and metaphors...they're both pretty weak

TheRealProtege · 06-07-2009, 01:13 PM

Fail......

Threyev · 06-07-2009, 02:43 PM

cosign the above two posts. this is weak as fuck, even for some of the so-called disses people put out on this site.

06-06-2009, 04:37 PM	#1
TheMadWriter Veteran Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Virginia Posts: 1,353 Repped: 146 Repped 405 Times in 238 Posts Neg Reps: 66 Neg Repped at 149 Times in 94 Posts	I Declare War (The Call Out) I Declare War (The Call Out) I got a few questions bout some overrated shit/ Ya'll got me askin why like i'm fuckin Jadakiss/ Overwrought and slappin guys for their jaded bliss/ Got a good mood, now they have the right to say some shit?/ Please, don't mean to mislead or displease/ But i'll freeze your ass like a disease/ Inducin paralysis givin a need for dialysis/ You pallid bitch, your KO moment is here it's ravishin/ So lavish man, kickin my feet back/ Ya'll are some rap whores ya'll keep lickin my skeet's back/ I'm laughin at the one who attacks who's high off packs/ Dimebags and talentless hacks don't have to have macks/ More like microphones, wasted and miused/ Some of these rappers copy and pastin their verse too/ Of course I don't know, but I would like to see him/ Maybe this nigga can hit me up on the PM/ Explain the story, on some grown man shit/ And not try to get out on that 'i'm my own man' shit/ You know man? Shit it's disturbin accused of miswordin/ That nigga's a rap terrorist, someone get him a turban/ And also there's another dude with a slick tounge/ Someone please get me a verse by Shogun/ Really i'd like to compare it to somethin like a millie/ See if it's serious shit or something just silly/ I'd just once like to see the nigga post his flow up/ He might be silly, after all he's a japanese soulja..../ Well he controls em, same difference still weak/ All I need to do is shove a gat in Karate Kid's mouthpiece/ Half these dudes claim to be hard but they're so soft they're fluffy/ Can someone tell me what the fuck is a Mcduffee?/ This nigga raps like he's got nuts in his touncils/ He's a fuckin clown, I might just call him Ronald Mcdonald/ A white dude actin crazy, sounds like him and Kim/ Could it be? Mcduffee is just a whack Eminem?/(Hahhahahahaa!) This nigga can't even put together a fuckin rhythm/ If I see you and your fat ass arm my knuckles will hit philtrums/ I could murder a beat, bitch you can't even kill drums/ Your kids will grow to be potheads just like their father real dumb.../ Keep workin kid, there's no attention that you could garner/ You'll prolly be the 60 year old raping his baby daughter/ You ain't gonna be shit, in fact you're stuck in your hole/ Like your daddy's dick when he starts jerkin the pole/(Hahahahahaaaaa) And Protege, nigga you might need to park it../ All this beef's got your ass soundin kinda lethargic/ Komplex I ain't got shit to say to you/ Unless you give me a reason, and a day or two.... If you can't read all that than fuck you I type how much I want...hit me up on the PM! It's war bitches, choose your fuckin alliance... Last edited by TheMadWriter; 06-06-2009 at 04:39 PM.

06-07-2009, 01:13 PM	#3
TheRealProtege The alias is Protege Join Date: May 2006 Location: ThA WiLd WeSt Posts: 1,962 Repped: 139 Repped 582 Times in 167 Posts Neg Reps: 135 Neg Repped at 78 Times in 67 Posts	Fail...... __________________ The new motto is...WHOEVER soundclick.com/protegerebelflag

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06-06-2009, 05:40 PM	#2
Baller Vulture Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: NM Posts: 3,040 Repped: 105 Repped 232 Times in 138 Posts Neg Reps: 67 Neg Repped at 59 Times in 39 Posts	You need to work on ya rhyme schemes and metaphors...they're both pretty weak

06-07-2009, 02:43 PM	#4
Threyev Join Date: May 2006 Location: The Bronx Posts: 553 Repped: 82 Repped 46 Times in 29 Posts Neg Reps: 3 Neg Repped at 5 Times in 5 Posts	cosign the above two posts. this is weak as fuck, even for some of the so-called disses people put out on this site.