What's A Komplex Metaphor????

Bunny_Rabbit · 06-02-2009, 09:59 PM

So many of you think I can't spit crazy shit//
you can suck a fat baby's dick while his dad baby sits//
who the hell is this komplex faggot speakin' to//
If I lift up your skirt, your pussy would be leakin' through//
and I sure have the fre3dom to clown this joke//
pull out my dick and shove it down his throat//
this komplex vet's dick must be sore from being rode on//
all these rappers with no talent, you'll be so gone//
you think I care about a shitty subliminal???//
me fucking your fat bitch in her titties is typical//
Im witty and lyrical, you're strictly just pitiful//
a prissy bitch, oh the komplex missy's despicable//
makin' poetry on a message board for all these dick riders//
beat that ass till someone has to change the kid's diapers//
In conclusion, a joke is what this wussy clearly is//
a komplex menstrual cycle, you're a pussy, period//

ETHERED AGAIN!

DXavier23 · 06-02-2009, 11:09 PM

it was mediocre. U all need to chill with this childish internet beef. Even if you're just doing it for fun, use your time and energy towards lyrics that actually mean something

sofis2cated · 06-03-2009, 05:46 AM

I agree with Dx but I gotta say the shit was pretty good.. nice flow, vocab, and it made me laugh.. i say props for the last two bars

Fre3dom · 06-03-2009, 01:46 PM

...mehhh...really?....pretty weak....plus u didnt even diss me you just said my name in a sentence...smh

it aint even worth dropping a reply diss to...smh....1 yaself

Baller · 06-03-2009, 02:47 PM

smh @ rhymin pussy and wussy

Witty Qwan · 06-03-2009, 03:11 PM

you can suck a fat baby's dick while his dad baby sits//

lmfaooooooooo

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 06-03-2009, 03:26 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Witty Qwan

you can suck a fat baby's dick while his dad baby sits//

lmfaooooooooo

Hahahahhhhahhaha

TheRealProtege · 06-03-2009, 03:31 PM

anyone who says that wasnt fire is a fuckn lame.

9/10

that>>>anyshit on the board right now

Baller · 06-03-2009, 03:33 PM

^^Lol...No!

Your just equally as wack

TheRealProtege · 06-03-2009, 04:04 PM

lmao dude dont get me started on your elementary asss fucking rhymes you got on the last fucking drops you did lmaooo ur wack as fuckhomey

Bunny_Rabbit · 06-03-2009, 04:41 PM

Propz to the dudes who like this verse. And fuck you Baller and Fre3dom; lonely fags, don't make me put y'all both in assorted graveyards.

Baller · 06-03-2009, 04:58 PM

Please....get started Stan

Fre3dom · 06-03-2009, 05:19 PM

LAWWWWLLL your awful at rap

Bunny_Rabbit · 06-03-2009, 05:37 PM

Stan???? Lol, okay but Im not the one with Nas in my avatar; faggot.

Tha Truth · 06-03-2009, 06:16 PM

lmfao wack!!!!

Witty Qwan · 06-03-2009, 06:33 PM

yo truth....where u been at nicca?

Baller · 06-03-2009, 07:01 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Bunny_Rabbit

Stan???? Lol, okay but Im not the one with Nas in my avatar; faggot.

LOL @ how you thought I was talkin to you...but indeed you are a stan too.
For the Nas avatar...You sonned yaself there, take a closer look genius.

Tha Truth · 06-03-2009, 07:03 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Witty Qwan

yo truth....where u been at nicca?

just been doing me lately whts good tho

KING BHOB · 06-04-2009, 01:25 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by witty qwan

you can suck a fat baby's dick while his dad baby sits//

lmfaooooooooo

lmaoooooooooooooooo

Quote:

Originally Posted by baller

lol @ how you thought i was talkin to you...but indeed you are a stan too.
For the nas avatar...you sonned yaself there, take a closer look genius.

i c what u did thar!

Blizzy · 06-04-2009, 06:04 AM

when your not bitin Rabbit your lines be alot shorter, this flowed well, had multi's but no real hard punchlines.....and protege you overated this.....

Threyev · 06-04-2009, 06:45 PM

i'm impressed by this. i agree with dx that this e-beefing is wack, but you had some funny lines in there. it's pretty apparent why you named yourself what you did (the inspiration from em is pretty obvious in the best parts of this; not sure if that's a compliment or not). i think protege got it a little wet saying you're the best on the forum, since there really wasn't any substantial subject matter, but this was hot. good drop, maybe try to expand your lyrical horizons with the next one.

Bunny_Rabbit · 06-04-2009, 07:18 PM

^^^Props homie; just having a little fun. And Protege didn't say I was the best on the forum, he just said this verse was good.

06-02-2009, 09:59 PM	#1
Bunny_Rabbit Rorshak Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: The Tangent Universe Posts: 857 Repped: 42 Repped 108 Times in 47 Posts Neg Reps: 49 Neg Repped at 44 Times in 42 Posts	What's A Komplex Metaphor???? What's A Komplex Metaphor???? So many of you think I can't spit crazy shit// you can suck a fat baby's dick while his dad baby sits// who the hell is this komplex faggot speakin' to// If I lift up your skirt, your pussy would be leakin' through// and I sure have the fre3dom to clown this joke// pull out my dick and shove it down his throat// this komplex vet's dick must be sore from being rode on// all these rappers with no talent, you'll be so gone// you think I care about a shitty subliminal???// me fucking your fat bitch in her titties is typical// Im witty and lyrical, you're strictly just pitiful// a prissy bitch, oh the komplex missy's despicable// makin' poetry on a message board for all these dick riders// beat that ass till someone has to change the kid's diapers// In conclusion, a joke is what this wussy clearly is// a komplex menstrual cycle, you're a pussy, period// ETHERED AGAIN! __________________

06-02-2009, 11:09 PM	#2
DXavier23 ----------DX------------- Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: NYC Posts: 1,759 Repped: 192 Repped 1,677 Times in 142 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 1 Post	it was mediocre. U all need to chill with this childish internet beef. Even if you're just doing it for fun, use your time and energy towards lyrics that actually mean something __________________ So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in

06-03-2009, 05:46 AM	#3
sofis2cated California Lyricist Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Bakersfield, CA Posts: 762 Repped: 33 Repped 10 Times in 8 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	I agree with Dx but I gotta say the shit was pretty good.. nice flow, vocab, and it made me laugh.. i say props for the last two bars Last edited by sofis2cated; 06-03-2009 at 05:47 AM. Reason: my pc is shit

06-03-2009, 03:11 PM	#6
Witty Qwan # Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: My crib Posts: 3,041 Repped: 155 Repped 472 Times in 303 Posts Neg Reps: 21 Neg Repped at 80 Times in 74 Posts	you can suck a fat baby's dick while his dad baby sits// lmfaooooooooo __________________ [02:34PM] Lyrikcha FUCK THIS FAGGOT CHAMBERS NIGGA...IM A CUT HIS HEAD OFF AND PUT IT ON A STICK FOR MY NIGGA TIGER CAN DEFROST THE GAT AND SMOKE U

06-03-2009, 03:31 PM	#8
TheRealProtege The alias is Protege Join Date: May 2006 Location: ThA WiLd WeSt Posts: 1,962 Repped: 139 Repped 582 Times in 167 Posts Neg Reps: 135 Neg Repped at 78 Times in 67 Posts	anyone who says that wasnt fire is a fuckn lame. 9/10 that>>>anyshit on the board right now __________________ The new motto is...WHOEVER soundclick.com/protegerebelflag

06-03-2009, 01:46 PM	#4
Fre3dom Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: London Posts: 905 Repped: 59 Repped 105 Times in 57 Posts Neg Reps: 56 Neg Repped at 17 Times in 15 Posts	...mehhh...really?....pretty weak....plus u didnt even diss me you just said my name in a sentence...smh it aint even worth dropping a reply diss to...smh....1 yaself

06-03-2009, 02:47 PM	#5
Baller Vulture Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: NM Posts: 3,040 Repped: 105 Repped 232 Times in 138 Posts Neg Reps: 67 Neg Repped at 58 Times in 39 Posts	smh @ rhymin pussy and wussy

06-03-2009, 03:33 PM	#9
Baller Vulture Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: NM Posts: 3,040 Repped: 105 Repped 232 Times in 138 Posts Neg Reps: 67 Neg Repped at 58 Times in 39 Posts	^^Lol...No! Your just equally as wack

06-03-2009, 04:04 PM	#10
TheRealProtege The alias is Protege Join Date: May 2006 Location: ThA WiLd WeSt Posts: 1,962 Repped: 139 Repped 582 Times in 167 Posts Neg Reps: 135 Neg Repped at 78 Times in 67 Posts	lmao dude dont get me started on your elementary asss fucking rhymes you got on the last fucking drops you did lmaooo ur wack as fuckhomey __________________ The new motto is...WHOEVER soundclick.com/protegerebelflag

06-03-2009, 04:41 PM	#11
Bunny_Rabbit Rorshak Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: The Tangent Universe Posts: 857 Repped: 42 Repped 108 Times in 47 Posts Neg Reps: 49 Neg Repped at 44 Times in 42 Posts	Propz to the dudes who like this verse. And fuck you Baller and Fre3dom; lonely fags, don't make me put y'all both in assorted graveyards. __________________

06-03-2009, 04:58 PM	#12
Baller Vulture Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: NM Posts: 3,040 Repped: 105 Repped 232 Times in 138 Posts Neg Reps: 67 Neg Repped at 58 Times in 39 Posts	Please....get started Stan

06-03-2009, 05:19 PM	#13
Fre3dom Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: London Posts: 905 Repped: 59 Repped 105 Times in 57 Posts Neg Reps: 56 Neg Repped at 17 Times in 15 Posts	LAWWWWLLL your awful at rap

06-03-2009, 05:37 PM	#14
Bunny_Rabbit Rorshak Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: The Tangent Universe Posts: 857 Repped: 42 Repped 108 Times in 47 Posts Neg Reps: 49 Neg Repped at 44 Times in 42 Posts	Stan???? Lol, okay but Im not the one with Nas in my avatar; faggot. __________________

06-03-2009, 06:16 PM	#15
Tha Truth ..:General Truth:... Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: at ya girl crib Posts: 5,225 Repped: 675 Repped 1,045 Times in 251 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 3 Times in 2 Posts	lmfao wack!!!! __________________ {~Undisputed G$~}/Mechanical workin, Hechler handle's jerkin That'll pull the Gate in after you Heavenly church him-Bank$

06-03-2009, 06:33 PM	#16
Witty Qwan # Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: My crib Posts: 3,041 Repped: 155 Repped 472 Times in 303 Posts Neg Reps: 21 Neg Repped at 80 Times in 74 Posts	yo truth....where u been at nicca?

06-04-2009, 06:04 AM	#20
Blizzy Wordsmith Join Date: May 2008 Location: In Battlefield's Posts: 3,338 Repped: 680 Repped 343 Times in 156 Posts Neg Reps: 24 Neg Repped at 25 Times in 24 Posts	when your not bitin Rabbit your lines be alot shorter, this flowed well, had multi's but no real hard punchlines.....and protege you overated this..... __________________ MY MUSIC CHECK IT OUT myspace.com/ttpbloodshot

06-04-2009, 06:45 PM	#21
Threyev Join Date: May 2006 Location: The Bronx Posts: 553 Repped: 82 Repped 46 Times in 29 Posts Neg Reps: 3 Neg Repped at 5 Times in 5 Posts	i'm impressed by this. i agree with dx that this e-beefing is wack, but you had some funny lines in there. it's pretty apparent why you named yourself what you did (the inspiration from em is pretty obvious in the best parts of this; not sure if that's a compliment or not). i think protege got it a little wet saying you're the best on the forum, since there really wasn't any substantial subject matter, but this was hot. good drop, maybe try to expand your lyrical horizons with the next one.

06-04-2009, 07:18 PM	#22
Bunny_Rabbit Rorshak Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: The Tangent Universe Posts: 857 Repped: 42 Repped 108 Times in 47 Posts Neg Reps: 49 Neg Repped at 44 Times in 42 Posts	^^^Props homie; just having a little fun. And Protege didn't say I was the best on the forum, he just said this verse was good. __________________

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