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06-02-2009, 09:19 PM
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+++More Lyrical Homicide+++
Too many garbage niggas here. Who the fuck are these losers?
Everytime I open a verse I open my heart And everytime a nigga dissed me, I broke em apart Scribble my lyrics onto a canvas, my flow is an art A few things I expect them lames to know from the start.. I expose fakers and liars, turn haters into admirers Make rivals say "Fuck him. I can't wait till he retires" I'm eminent, My epic downfall's their blatant desire You say you're hot but then retreat once you play with fire They wait for it to expire but food for thought is forever good Verbal eloquence helps me make statements that you never would Your heart ain't in rap, under that lies even darker facts You ain't a rabbit son, I think your teeth are sharper than that Take a bite out of my rhymes and try to come with something better I'll spot you a bar or two, don't steal every word and letter My thoughts are non-restricted, I hate to be contradicted Wanna dethrone me for this spot?..Mufucka come and get it Your lyrics suck, what the fuck else am I supposed to say? I usually slaughter masters, but once I murdered a protege Ever since he's been bitchin "Plex's style is overrated" That same style kicked his ass in a battle, I know he hates it Making statements out of hatred, loser accept defeat I know that battle left you in grief but quietly rest in peace Shogun is not my foe since he's the same towards everybody But wack rookies like you two? Please, never again try me
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06-02-2009, 09:30 PM
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This is Dope..
The Flow was nasty, vocab & metaphors were nice.. I'm eminent, My epic downfall's their blatant desire You say you're hot but then retreat once you play with fire They wait for it to expire but food for thought is forever good Verbal eloquence helps me make statements that you never would Your heart ain't in rap, under that lies even darker facts You ain't a rabbit son, I think your teeth are sharper than that Take a bite out of my rhymes and try to come with something better I'll spot you a bar or two, don't steal every word and letter My thoughts are non-restricted, I hate to be contradicted Wanna dethrone me for this spot?..Mufucka come and get it Your lyrics suck, what the fuck else am I supposed to say? I usually slaughter masters, but once I murdered a protege Ever since he's been bitchin "Plex's style is overrated"
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06-02-2009, 09:35 PM
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Rorshak
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^^^Dickridin faggot
Oh Komplexy, don't make me put you in a casket; your internet rap career will be done.
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06-02-2009, 09:37 PM
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stfu ^^^^^^^^^^
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06-02-2009, 09:57 PM
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bunny rabbit gonna get bodied the same way I did to protege.....komplex u already know what I think of this
sick shit whats good with that long awaited thugsy and komplex collab |
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06-02-2009, 10:18 PM
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good shit once again my dude.
Everytime I open a verse I open my heart And everytime a nigga dissed me, I broke em apart Scribble my lyrics onto a canvas, my flow is an art A few things I expect them lames to know from the start.. -Perfect introduction. The rest was aggressive and the flow remained solid, with one or two misfires mixed in. Overall, good content and should either shut your 'haters' up or ignite them even more -If you dont mind, leave some feed on my new drop "Declaration of Ascendance" - thanks man
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06-03-2009, 10:57 AM
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Poetic Swagger
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good looks on the feedback.
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06-03-2009, 03:34 PM
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that shit looks like something a 12 year old would write. these dudes need tohope off ur dick, ur subpar at best. n lmao@ u randomly dissing me. wtf is ur deal? lmao u act like i mention you, i never do. nor do i ever peep ur wack ass drops. get a life
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06-03-2009, 03:42 PM
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^but yet you peeped this one hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
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06-03-2009, 04:02 PM
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The alias is Protege
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dude sent me a PM dumbfuck
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06-03-2009, 05:42 PM
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Poetic Swagger
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Don't act like you haven't dissed me in a few threads nigga. PS....the verse is full of multies and internal rhymes (two different things.) some are meant to be perfectly matching multies while others are internal rhymes.
Lol, I love how niggas change tone when someone disses them...12? supbar? "i admit ya skilled" ^those are your words junior.fall back.
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06-03-2009, 06:15 PM
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This shit was ill everything was on point bodied them lames with ease
good drop
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06-03-2009, 06:46 PM
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How the fuck did this chump "body me?" He only uttered my fuckin name; punk ass trick. oh, did I mention this shit was garbage? Your multi's are horrible, homie. The syllables didn't even match up, and the way you pussied out on dissing Shogun was a bitch move. And just so we're clear, Proteges multi's shit on yours; Im just being straight up.
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06-03-2009, 07:22 PM
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Poetic Swagger
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lol if you didn't get bodied, why so defensive? stop replyin.
BS@everything else you said. not even worth proving wrong or goin into detail about.
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06-03-2009, 07:28 PM
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Shit was good...Flow and vocabulary especially. People make too big of a deal matching up syllables perfect though. Yes you should try to do it but not if its gonna sacrifice what your actually tryin to say. Eventually though I think you will get it but theres lots of dope mc's that are sometimes off syllables; nas, az, mega, even emeinem lol...but if I had anything to critique it still would be that....
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06-03-2009, 07:35 PM
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sickkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
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06-03-2009, 07:40 PM
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this is hot. the beefing continues.
this was one of your best drops, IMO. the multies and flow were on point, and each bar had a dope punch while maintaing that. good shit |
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06-03-2009, 08:04 PM
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this was pretty nice, smashin the terrible new textcees that ruined this section, i like it propz man
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06-04-2009, 05:56 AM
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This had some good lines in it and yes it was full of multi's....PS I was gonna do the master/protege line lol, stay up Plex
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06-04-2009, 12:06 PM
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Poetic Swagger
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no doubt. appreciate the feed.
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06-04-2009, 07:32 PM
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FUCK'EM ALL
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So what I want to know is, Why are you a mod? You don't do shit as far as I can see.
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06-04-2009, 10:15 PM
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^Has nothing to do with the verse as far as I'm concerned.
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06-05-2009, 06:26 PM
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uppin.....
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06-09-2009, 10:10 AM
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FUCK'EM ALL
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Sorry I don't feed on text verses. No point in doing so, and this is damn near the only place I can find your ass.
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06-18-2009, 01:08 AM
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Poetic Swagger
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uppin one last time...
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