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Old 06-01-2009, 05:26 PM   #1
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I'm white like Eminem, I like dude's penmanship
I even got baby mama drama like Kim n' him
A couple of differences and similars listen in
Momma loved to sniff da shit, travel size crystal kit
Not so much poppin pills, momma liked to hit the fix
From wicked bitch to simpleness, momma changed the instant it
Entered in her system quick, tweekerville citizen
Then there was the fittin in in a hood that wouldn't give an inch
To a kid who's skin isn't, just like the other misfit kids
Until I started playin ball and shocked em' like a prison fence
Infected with athletes feet only sportin the sickest kicks
I ain't never flipped the bricks, jsut all nets like fishin trips
Trick em' with the dribblin then pull it up and finish it
Then later on the pencil tip began to rhyme in scribbles n'
The homies were all diggin his rhymin of terrificness
So I'ma take a sip of gin, hit da spliff and begin this spit

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Old 06-03-2009, 05:56 AM   #2
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Old 06-03-2009, 06:44 PM   #3
 
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Tight so far work on it
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i liked this one better than the first. there seemed to be more heart in this than the other. you forced a few of the multies, it seemed, but i bet it woulda sounded dope if this was just audio. good drop, definite improvement, keep doing this
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