DX - The Declaration of Ascendance

DXavier23 · 05-30-2009, 02:50 AM

I outshine all competition, Imma beastly, crazy spitter
So having me as ya feature is like having a priest be ya babysitter
What I've seen has made me bitter, and altered my demeanor
My food for thought is lethal like feeding chocolate to retrievers
You call yourself a leader, when it's clear, you can't rap
Tryna maintain a facade, that people used to fear like anthrax
I cant stand cats who lead lives, with no actual autonomy
Ruled by insecurities, which breed lies, and factual anomalies
It worries me, that greed drives our capital economy
So the only way that we strive, is through rational dishonesty
We must fix the flaws in ourselves, before the flaws of the system
That's a fact, like saying most wars are caused by religion
Top-dog's my position, to drop jaws is my mission
The butterfly effect, one action can cause the world to be different
In the case of apocalypse, my lyrical exhibitions will survive
This flow will make you put everything you ever listened to, aside
Recognition will arrive, but it doesn't happen overnight
Patience is a virtue, and virtue is a habit of the mind
The ladder I have climbed, but challengers detest
Yet the matter of whose the best, can now be put to rest

Threyev · 05-30-2009, 06:37 PM

i liked that priest line a lot, and then it got weak for a bit (until that dog line, which was forced IMO). after that, though, you set on fire for the rest of the verse, with each bar better than the last.

another real good drop overall, with a limp in the middle that ended crazy dope. good shit.

DXavier23 · 05-31-2009, 01:36 PM

^alright man, i value your criticism and tweaked those bars.

DXavier23 · 06-01-2009, 10:55 PM

feed is appreciated

sofis2cated · 06-03-2009, 05:49 AM

In the case of apocalypse, my lyrical exhibitions will survive
This flow will make you put everything you ever listened to, aside
Recognition will arrive, but it doesn't happen overnight
Patience is a virtue, and virtue is a habit of the mind

my fav lines

Komplex · 06-03-2009, 09:42 AM

I outshine all competition, Imma beastly, crazy spitter
So having me as ya feature is like having a priest be ya babysitter

^sick.

You call yourself a leader, when it's clear, you can't rap
Tryna maintain a facade, that people used to fear like anthrax

Top-dog's my position, to drop jaws is my mission
The butterfly effect, one action can cause the world to be different

Maaan. This whole free was just.......insane. From the multies to vocab to the metaphors as well as the flow, you bodied this shit B.

DXavier23 · 06-03-2009, 06:58 PM

^^ appreciate that plex

Tha Truth · 06-03-2009, 07:01 PM

wuts gud DX i like this right here verse was solid with a nice flow to it

Blizzy · 06-04-2009, 06:09 AM

What I've seen has made me bitter, and altered my demeanor
My food for thought is lethal like feeding chocolate to retrievers

^thats my favourite bar DX....flowed perfectly....

This was a good drop, although I felt after the anthrax line the topic sort of changed for the rest of the verse and it didn't fit the first few bars IMO....still had solid content tho....stay up

DXavier23 · 06-05-2009, 11:07 AM

^^ good looks blizzy on the feed

DXavier23 · 06-07-2009, 07:32 PM

Watttup truth

DXavier23 · 06-09-2009, 09:13 PM

......................... last bump

Str8Shooter · 06-09-2009, 09:32 PM

everything i've seen from you has been type sick. keep doin ur thing kid

DXavier23 · 06-14-2009, 02:06 PM

appreciate that man - i will hit yawl with some new shit soon

05-30-2009, 02:50 AM	#1
DXavier23 ----------DX------------- Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: NYC Posts: 1,759 Repped: 192 Repped 1,677 Times in 142 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 1 Post	DX - The Declaration of Ascendance DX - The Declaration of Ascendance I outshine all competition, Imma beastly, crazy spitter So having me as ya feature is like having a priest be ya babysitter What I've seen has made me bitter, and altered my demeanor My food for thought is lethal like feeding chocolate to retrievers You call yourself a leader, when it's clear, you can't rap Tryna maintain a facade, that people used to fear like anthrax I cant stand cats who lead lives, with no actual autonomy Ruled by insecurities, which breed lies, and factual anomalies It worries me, that greed drives our capital economy So the only way that we strive, is through rational dishonesty We must fix the flaws in ourselves, before the flaws of the system That's a fact, like saying most wars are caused by religion Top-dog's my position, to drop jaws is my mission The butterfly effect, one action can cause the world to be different In the case of apocalypse, my lyrical exhibitions will survive This flow will make you put everything you ever listened to, aside Recognition will arrive, but it doesn't happen overnight Patience is a virtue, and virtue is a habit of the mind The ladder I have climbed, but challengers detest Yet the matter of whose the best, can now be put to rest __________________ So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in Last edited by DXavier23; 05-30-2009 at 07:57 PM.

05-30-2009, 06:37 PM	#2
Threyev Join Date: May 2006 Location: The Bronx Posts: 553 Repped: 82 Repped 46 Times in 29 Posts Neg Reps: 3 Neg Repped at 5 Times in 5 Posts	i liked that priest line a lot, and then it got weak for a bit (until that dog line, which was forced IMO). after that, though, you set on fire for the rest of the verse, with each bar better than the last. another real good drop overall, with a limp in the middle that ended crazy dope. good shit. Last edited by Threyev; 05-30-2009 at 10:13 PM.

05-31-2009, 01:36 PM	#3
DXavier23 ----------DX------------- Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: NYC Posts: 1,759 Repped: 192 Repped 1,677 Times in 142 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 1 Post	^alright man, i value your criticism and tweaked those bars. __________________ So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in

06-01-2009, 10:55 PM	#4
DXavier23 ----------DX------------- Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: NYC Posts: 1,759 Repped: 192 Repped 1,677 Times in 142 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 1 Post	feed is appreciated __________________ So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in

06-03-2009, 09:42 AM	#6
Komplex Poetic Swagger Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 1,164 Repped: 117 Repped 99 Times in 50 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	I outshine all competition, Imma beastly, crazy spitter So having me as ya feature is like having a priest be ya babysitter ^sick. You call yourself a leader, when it's clear, you can't rap Tryna maintain a facade, that people used to fear like anthrax Top-dog's my position, to drop jaws is my mission The butterfly effect, one action can cause the world to be different Maaan. This whole free was just.......insane. From the multies to vocab to the metaphors as well as the flow, you bodied this shit B. __________________ "Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz

06-03-2009, 05:49 AM	#5
sofis2cated California Lyricist Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Bakersfield, CA Posts: 762 Repped: 33 Repped 10 Times in 8 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	In the case of apocalypse, my lyrical exhibitions will survive This flow will make you put everything you ever listened to, aside Recognition will arrive, but it doesn't happen overnight Patience is a virtue, and virtue is a habit of the mind my fav lines

06-03-2009, 06:58 PM	#7
DXavier23 ----------DX------------- Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: NYC Posts: 1,759 Repped: 192 Repped 1,677 Times in 142 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 1 Post	^^ appreciate that plex __________________ So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in

06-03-2009, 07:01 PM	#8
Tha Truth ..:General Truth:... Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: at ya girl crib Posts: 5,225 Repped: 675 Repped 1,045 Times in 251 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 3 Times in 2 Posts	wuts gud DX i like this right here verse was solid with a nice flow to it __________________ {~Undisputed G$~}/Mechanical workin, Hechler handle's jerkin That'll pull the Gate in after you Heavenly church him-Bank$

06-04-2009, 06:09 AM	#9
Blizzy Wordsmith Join Date: May 2008 Location: In Battlefield's Posts: 3,338 Repped: 680 Repped 343 Times in 156 Posts Neg Reps: 24 Neg Repped at 25 Times in 24 Posts	What I've seen has made me bitter, and altered my demeanor My food for thought is lethal like feeding chocolate to retrievers ^thats my favourite bar DX....flowed perfectly.... This was a good drop, although I felt after the anthrax line the topic sort of changed for the rest of the verse and it didn't fit the first few bars IMO....still had solid content tho....stay up __________________ MY MUSIC CHECK IT OUT myspace.com/ttpbloodshot

06-05-2009, 11:07 AM	#10
DXavier23 ----------DX------------- Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: NYC Posts: 1,759 Repped: 192 Repped 1,677 Times in 142 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 1 Post	^^ good looks blizzy on the feed __________________ So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in

06-07-2009, 07:32 PM	#11
DXavier23 ----------DX------------- Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: NYC Posts: 1,759 Repped: 192 Repped 1,677 Times in 142 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 1 Post	Watttup truth __________________ So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in

06-09-2009, 09:13 PM	#12
DXavier23 ----------DX------------- Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: NYC Posts: 1,759 Repped: 192 Repped 1,677 Times in 142 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 1 Post	......................... last bump __________________ So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in

06-09-2009, 09:32 PM	#13
Str8Shooter Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: In the Dungeons of Rap Posts: 38 Repped: 0 Repped 5 Times in 5 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	everything i've seen from you has been type sick. keep doin ur thing kid

06-14-2009, 02:06 PM	#14
DXavier23 ----------DX------------- Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: NYC Posts: 1,759 Repped: 192 Repped 1,677 Times in 142 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 1 Post	appreciate that man - i will hit yawl with some new shit soon __________________ So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in

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