DX - Sunset (Beers and Blunts)

DXavier23 · 05-26-2009, 06:20 PM

Private Beach, Sunset
Cold Beers, Blunts, check
Good times having fun together
With good friends, in summer weather
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With a view like this, the only way Im looking is up
I saw God, and said thank you for hooking me up
He didn't reply, but I knew that he tried
To show his reciprocation, with a beautiful sky
Burgers and steaks on the grill, the vibe is chill
We all think to ourselves, damn, this life is ill
Are you seeing this view of the sun's gradual decline
My journey to the top involved no catapult, I climbed
I'm affable and kind, attracting girls with my sense of wit
Since some are sensitive, i leave out the offensive shit
Smoking on the water, listening to Jimmy Hend-r-ix
The best weekend ever, is what we quickly rendered it
The party life, I was meant for it, we're living the dreamin'
Say cheers to the life we have the privilege of leadin'
Surrounded by women in bikinis, and most are tens
Most importantly Im here, with my closest friends
We smoke and than, chase the weed with the brew
Head down to the beach, theres no need for ya shoes
Pretty girls on our arms, we're leaving in twos
Plan to all get some, before the evening is through

Threyev · 05-26-2009, 07:01 PM

liked this. you keep stretching your limits as an emcee and dropping some dope shit. this reminded me of some old school tribe called quest or sumshit. well done, enjoyed this one. keep testing your borders

Baller · 05-26-2009, 08:04 PM

Overall it was pretty good...concept was coo but you forced a couple multies

Komplex · 05-26-2009, 11:27 PM

He didn't reply, but I knew that he tried
To show his reciprocation, with a beautiful sky

I'm affable and kind, attracting girls with my sense of wit
Since some are sensitive, i leave out the offensive shit
Smoking on the water, listening to Jimmy Hend-r-ix
The best weekend ever, is what we quickly rendered it

I dug this drop. Even with the subject matter (women, smokin, chillin, etc.) you still managed to work it into a solid verse. Pretty good multies, decent imagery, etc. Keep doin ya thing fam.

GILoTINE · 05-27-2009, 04:17 PM

the last couple bars were a bit shaby, but it was an amazing verse none the less, i dont think i've ever givin you or komplex less then a 10 you can tell you 2 really think about what your gona say, Do you go to college or do some type of writing class, cuz when i read your rhymes there like rap poetry is the best way to describe it its amazing man. love it,

10 outa 10

DXavier23 · 05-28-2009, 05:06 PM

^^ good looks

Kidss · 05-31-2009, 01:46 PM

yo good looking

05-26-2009, 06:20 PM	#1
DXavier23 ----------DX------------- Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: NYC Posts: 1,765 Repped: 192 Repped 1,682 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 1 Post	DX - Sunset (Beers and Blunts) DX - Sunset (Beers and Blunts) Private Beach, Sunset Cold Beers, Blunts, check Good times having fun together With good friends, in summer weather ------------------------------------------------- With a view like this, the only way Im looking is up I saw God, and said thank you for hooking me up He didn't reply, but I knew that he tried To show his reciprocation, with a beautiful sky Burgers and steaks on the grill, the vibe is chill We all think to ourselves, damn, this life is ill Are you seeing this view of the sun's gradual decline My journey to the top involved no catapult, I climbed I'm affable and kind, attracting girls with my sense of wit Since some are sensitive, i leave out the offensive shit Smoking on the water, listening to Jimmy Hend-r-ix The best weekend ever, is what we quickly rendered it The party life, I was meant for it, we're living the dreamin' Say cheers to the life we have the privilege of leadin' Surrounded by women in bikinis, and most are tens Most importantly Im here, with my closest friends We smoke and than, chase the weed with the brew Head down to the beach, theres no need for ya shoes Pretty girls on our arms, we're leaving in twos Plan to all get some, before the evening is through __________________ So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in Last edited by DXavier23; 05-27-2009 at 07:21 PM.

05-26-2009, 11:27 PM	#4
Komplex Poetic Swagger Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 1,164 Repped: 117 Repped 99 Times in 50 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	He didn't reply, but I knew that he tried To show his reciprocation, with a beautiful sky I'm affable and kind, attracting girls with my sense of wit Since some are sensitive, i leave out the offensive shit Smoking on the water, listening to Jimmy Hend-r-ix The best weekend ever, is what we quickly rendered it I dug this drop. Even with the subject matter (women, smokin, chillin, etc.) you still managed to work it into a solid verse. Pretty good multies, decent imagery, etc. Keep doin ya thing fam. __________________ "Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz

05-27-2009, 04:17 PM	#5
GILoTINE Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: utah Posts: 162 Repped: 14 Repped 8 Times in 8 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	re the last couple bars were a bit shaby, but it was an amazing verse none the less, i dont think i've ever givin you or komplex less then a 10 you can tell you 2 really think about what your gona say, Do you go to college or do some type of writing class, cuz when i read your rhymes there like rap poetry is the best way to describe it its amazing man. love it, 10 outa 10

05-28-2009, 05:06 PM	#6
DXavier23 ----------DX------------- Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: NYC Posts: 1,765 Repped: 192 Repped 1,682 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 1 Post	^^ good looks __________________ So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in

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05-26-2009, 07:01 PM	#2
Threyev Join Date: May 2006 Location: The Bronx Posts: 553 Repped: 82 Repped 46 Times in 29 Posts Neg Reps: 3 Neg Repped at 5 Times in 5 Posts	liked this. you keep stretching your limits as an emcee and dropping some dope shit. this reminded me of some old school tribe called quest or sumshit. well done, enjoyed this one. keep testing your borders

05-26-2009, 08:04 PM	#3
Baller Vulture Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: NM Posts: 3,096 Repped: 111 Repped 252 Times in 148 Posts Neg Reps: 95 Neg Repped at 61 Times in 39 Posts	Overall it was pretty good...concept was coo but you forced a couple multies

05-31-2009, 01:46 PM	#7
Kidss Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Bloomington Posts: 380 Repped: 0 Repped 34 Times in 26 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 21 Times in 16 Posts	yo good looking