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Old 05-25-2009, 02:32 PM   #1
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Fatmoz Told Me

I'm laughin at you...

You won't believe what Fatmoz told me!!/
Combustion's lame why would he scold me?!/
Little Combbussssstiiiiioooonnnn!/
Mr Combussssssstiiiiioonnnnn

He said fuck you writer, I know you're tighter/
If I spit that fire, then you're a firefighter/
Supply that water, i'm nothin but a martyr/
Still die without a cause cuz I was only a starter/
I feel I got robbed cuz I beefed with someone smarter/
His rhymes were goin harder mine were La La from the Carter/
Ha ha i'm your father, that's the first thing you said/
That's the first thing I read, imagined it in my head/
Fabricated reality distorted it with regrets/
Erradicated my pride because I really saw us in bed/
Writer i'm jealous of you homie, that envy is a bitch/
I look back to myself 'why did you send me to this shit'/
I was D.O.A, dead on fuckin arrival/
That writer's rhymes are primal mine are only homo-cidal/
Get it? Homo-cidal I copied his style for a reason/
He was summer and winter, I was just a rainy season/
He's still displeasin, smackin me round and beatin/
Verbally wordily murdering me for my treason/
Thought I was the second coming thought I was the legion/
He collapsed my foundation then he fucked up my whole region.../
Who is this beef really feedin? Writer eats this shit for breakfeast leaves me FUCKIN bleedin!

You won't believe what Writer told me!/
I'll slit his throat like Goldman slowly/
Fuck you Combussstiiionnnnnnnnn/
Fuck you Combussssssstiiiioonnnnn/

Now that I won the beef I have a victory to my name/
Smacked up a queef not a win I want to claim/
Cuz now my hand stinks it's leavin me in disdain/
I walked out of the beef with my shoes bloodstained/
He had to copy myself, I lost respect for this faggot/
This fag-got proud then got extorted like rackets/
I've watched him attack it, backtrackin just to match it/
But i'm immaculate, flawless and perfected/
I took his style and took my style and left his disected/
He tries to ressurect it now he clones the better man/
Boned in the mouth we see his face is redder than/
Whores out my door after i've fucked em clever and...
You won't believe what Writer told me/
There's another biter tryin to scold me/
But ask this faggot what makes him think he can hold me?/
His restraints are weak I broke em wholly/
Constrainin me? How could you fold me?/
You're just painin me, my poker's growing.../
And now i've manifested to something a little more respected/
Ace of spades your death card I think you need to check it/
I've got a full house, I can't fit your bullshit/
Royal flush so it's gone you can't pull shit/
You fail mufucka, you're simply dull kid, get off my cock you're another fool BITCH

You won't believe what MCs told me..../
This dude is whack he should get to rolling../
Back to his dumppsstttteeerrrrrr/
His tiny cum dumpppsssstttteeeeer/

I mean he's whack he's a gimmick, analyze for a second/
He's fantasized bout sex with, men, and i'd reckon/
That's the reason he's a 'homo-cidal' criminal/
The fix was a homosexuality subliminal/
He knew that the damage he was doin was minimal/
He just wanted to be close, how sick how cynnical/
Still makin diss tracks? Get fucked with tentacles/
I took you apart, but your surgery was clinical/
Kept this beef on the low, it can get big again/
Everyone on this board knows that your rhymes are sickenin...

Still bitin my style? Nigga please i'm sicker with ease i'm bigger than trees I must be you come to my knees, you wanna diss me well God Lee why can't you see i'm everything that you reaped, i'm a disaster plastered with your memories mastered, close your eyes and see my verses flippin through chapters, this isn't a torture this shit is more like a rapture because you're not elusive in fact you're easy to capture, slapped ya slapped ya, dismantled and grabbed ya, you ain't shit homie so back up....this is my last diss, you were never worth the mention, why such contention for someone who doesn't deserve my attention....
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damnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn. yo man the more i read your writings the more i can like rap along with your style and really understand they format your going for. its dope dude. would love to hear some audio

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Old 05-27-2009, 04:51 PM   #4
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damnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn. yo man the more i read your writings the more i can like rap along with your style and really understand they format your going for. its dope dude. would love to hear some audio

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