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london up your speed uk up your speed usa up your speed hhe p-p-p-plz dnt kill anybody plz

lord give me a sign let me no wats mine is mine/
cots i bin tryin 4 a while thru a trial n im fine/
nuffin they can tell me now puts me down/
3 weeks in the game n i alredy hold the crown/
some say ma bars are way too long/
well for u mothafukers "suk ma shlong"/
i got it goin on n wen its on its on/
n wen i pik up da crome n get 2 blowin/
fragments from ya chest/(chest)
bullets lost in ya vest/(vest)
dressed to impress(press)
east side south side west side gess/
im on the front page of the daily news/
sellin more copies than rocafella shoes/
wen i cum thru ya shitty city/
burn mo' than fitty/(Fitty)
punchlines be witty/(Witty)
ill hav ur bitch suckin titty/(titty)
one phone call youll be layin six feet deep/
goin to the mall we rollin sixty deep/
imma switch ma style up now cos i got 90 bars left/
wots da point 2 bars n mothafukers be outta breath/
ma jewels n ice be glowin/
the mac n da gat i be showin/
but the hk be tucked........./
ran up in yo crib n ur bitch ass dukd/
ma ak is hidden cum 2 ya weddin/
as soon as i hear "i do" im lettin/
off-shots...im throwin slugs while ur throwin rocks/
ill kill u at 10 o clock n leeve ur body at the docks/
imma put em in they place like mobb deep/
a few bullets in the face ur in a permenant sleep/
im storin bread in the safe/
jus in case if im dead/
the kids gotta summat 2 eat/
cos wot i say n im still alive is a major feat/
ill be shot soon this i no but before i go i gotta fuk ya hoe/
then blow a hole thru da *doh'* wid a big ass 44 lets go/
im sellin blow at ma show wen i step thru tha door u betta "get low"/
im a subliminal criminal .....im a additional missil/
sellin diamonds n cristal ...sharp as a thistle/
i bought a new gun for fun but in the long run/
iv already won shine brighter than the sun want beef? its on!!!/
im smokin chronic demonic drinkin gin n tonic/
u got it man i want it gotta flaunt it/
nah that aint me im in2 gin n juice im loose/
big up proof in the booth...raise the motherfukin roof/
fuk wid me ur losin more than a tooth ill make u go POOF/
n dissapear ma futures crystal clear u cn it in the sphere/
never bow down to peers wid no fear no homo like game wid da fukin tear/
im a bit vivid wen i hid i kik it n shit it n wipe ma ass wid it/
sos 50 i jus nikd dat bit im so sorry but im krazy wid it/
so i gess ull let dat pass n imma kik his ass/
n lay him down in da grass not dat grass puff puff pass/
make it last imma fite like king kongs baby/
imma get crazy n do karate on yo ass like sway-ze/
dats all bout da weed dat part is over/
now lets get on 2 the pussy aka doja/
pull up in the roverimma lean over/
pull out a glock n leeve his brains spilled all over/
jakin beats jackin streets n automobiles/
i cn drive anyfin if its got a fukin wheel/
im losin it now n only bout 30 bars from me/
make that 33 i dont even do a kickstyle for free/
fuk it u want it wid me step ya game up/
the police blame it on the way we came up/
patrollin thru tha hood ridin on wood/
fuk it its all hood ma rhymes r better thn good/
self boastins a crime.....y?
say that agen u gotta be ready to die/
im open to any body whoeva wanna fite/
any time any place maybe the middle of the nite/
heres a list of bitches to fuck wid/
p.s NYC123 livs in a bin kid/(haha)
MAC20 who the fuck he fink he is/
he darent use a curse word he has 2 say shiz/
1007gta gon pay for sayin what he say/
we ad a battle 5-5 i gess its ok/
but its kinda dispespectfull that i didnt win/
imma dice his ass up stik him in a lil tin/
i dont no y im dissin now i aint in GLK/
cos dem bitch boys turned on me cos i was inactive a day/
marcko u dum ho finkin u da shit/
u still a lil bitch still sukin mommys tit/
gnasta daniel i dont no u n i dont care/
but i herd u made a crew fuk up now dat aint fair/
so imma rip u in 2 cos i hate 2faced people/
imma kidnap u n push u off a church steeple/
im all about the benjamins reppin the uk/
stomp on you wid ma timberlands fuk glk all day/
i used to bee subliminal like "war with god"/
but id rather rip into u leeve a bullet in ya bod/
ano in a battle soon as i enter imma win/
but i aint gon' do a pastor n start singin a hymn/
i make no sense im sicker thn 50 pence/
hence uve got no sense ma raps be all tense/
throw u ova ya fence this the jungle luk its very dense/
i see mothafukin dead people like the six sense/
so from now on u gotta respect that im a veteran/
cos u no ma rap who i beat n who im better then/
fuk people always claimin they click hard/
a cuple chest shots will leeve u scarred/
fuck GAYME aka the g-unot/
fuck all the mothafukers that are on his cock/
u internet thugs sellin drugs yeah righ/
fukin roaches fukin bugs yeah im ready to fight/
im an adrenaline rush laid back smokin kush/
bodys buried in bush turn ur brains to mush/
im the devils advocate nah im jus the prequel/
im a kill motherfukers n this aint even the sequel/
hers to LEATHER 2-K-6/
needs 2 get off a dat bulllshit/
ladies and gentlemen this is a hip hop elite production/
introduction into the mind of a maniacs induction/
iv dun made up ma own dance/
catch me bumpin n grindin in france/
n the uk its ok /
mck motherfukers we dont play/
the dance is the trend of a popular gangsta band/
its a 2 step wid a shouldah lean n the tony yayo hand/
haha u dont believe me right/
i bin doin dat dance many a night/
n now iv reverted back into ma storytellin style/
a knew this lil niccer well jus for a while/
one day he was strollin thru his neighberhood/
saw his main man he was like sup..its all good/
little did he no that his man was packing/
he was a fed n ma frends drugs he be tracking/
told him to put his gun down or hell let off a full clip/
but ma lil homie didnt listen he fort he was a crip/
not a trick motherfukin fed/
nex fing u no lil homie dead/
so dont trust ya niccers unless u bin wid dem fo' life/
cos itll be a shot in the dark or stabbed wid a knife/
i got luv for the ppl locked up like beanie sigel/
wen u get out we gon get u a brand new eagle***/
im blowin mo' haze for days/
i lite dat shit up n it blaze/
g-unit is the click right now dat you should be reppin/
100 bars mothafuker n this is only jus da preppin/
no1 will have read all this way so imma say wat i say/
fuk glk all day mkc gon pay glk u lucky cos id of put mo heat on u than a sun ray/
i dont give a fuck wereva u see me lets go/
cos imma kill u n ya hoe yas gots to go/
2 the pearly gates/
hold on 1 minute wait/
ur goin 2 hell n imma piss on ya grave/
be fryin like fuk ur fukin satans slave/
im pavin the way for ma entire click/
fuck wid me or FATKILLA bullets be flyin quick/
fukin bitch ass tricks say ther runnin the game/
im a lion in this game game ur a pussy n tame/
im in it for the riches your in it for the fame/
n ur even mo' lame than the mothafukin game/
you can run but you cannot hide/
be one of the many that fukd wid me n died/
n FAT PUN who da fuck you fink u are/
fat mothafuker i bet you cant fit into a car/
no disrespect to the real big pun/
but this dum bitch makess me wanna grab the gun/
but i cant do that cos then id be on the run/
fat motherfucker tryna chase me n leather2006 down wen he ways a tonne/
1007 its gon' be a 187 imma lay u in heaven me n ma ak47/
from london to devon we party till 11/
in the mornin ill hav ur bitch groanin/
n moanin while we bonin/
ma momma used 2 say keep it real son n do what you do/
its so simple cos u aint been thru what i do/
n iv seen cos ma life aint as it seems/
been torn at the seams broken dreams/
all of this pain cos of the fiends/
make money by any means ........nessecary/
ma rap skills be legendary ppl always be testin me/
all thats in ma life now is ma vest n me/
i got gunz for sale aint leavin no trail/
got wot u need shit datll make em bleed 4 send em thru tha mail/(haha syke)
its a dangerous life the life of an outlaw/
gotta carry ma knife soon a i step out da door/
we up in this bitch like 50 n 2PAC/
sellin out tickets at ma shows like 50 n 2pac/
not long left so imma skip to some gangsta shit/
fuk wid me n ma click bitch i got a full clip/
so dont trip i got a pistol n hk by ma hip/
dont beg wid me sayin "its ok" cos imma flip/
n leeve yo ass bleedin by the side ............wishin youd died/
ur baby momma dun cried seen the pain in your eyes bullets in yo side/
its homocide......5 bars left n im feelin this shit/
bitches n ******s feel ma shit mo' than a lil bit/
giv me feedback n imma rep you/
disrespect me n imma get at you/
this an internet forum not tha hood/
but it aint boredom jus misunderstood/
i bet none of yall can actually rap/
claimin da south like t.i. sayin u "trap"/
so this is the end of 100 bars the best by far/
bullets aimed at ya car freshly burnt tir on the tar downloadin files in .rar/
thats the life of an outlaw............haha yeah motherfucker 100 fukin bars n runnin u no the fukin deal
g--g-g-g-g-g-g-g-g-gg G-UNIT MERCILESS KILLERS CLICK!!!!!!! REP YO CITY!!!!!!!

FEEDBACK N ILL GIVE YOU REP
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leather2006

This is gd man took me ages to read but i like it!!!!

2006mtowers2006

fuk me took me bout 10 mins to read nyway its propa class. but i think yu shud go for tha 300 nxt time lol

{Hip}{Hop}[e][l][i][t]e]

lmao 300 bars n runnin lol jus loan me ya ears for 15 minutes walk wit me hit a breakdown ggggg unit lol

MC MIDGE

its 2 long 2 read...no hate...i jus dont hav that time 2 stay focused

KiLLa_CuMMr

100 bars of wack shit propz

Dan Russell

lol killa........

Tha Prophecy

there is no shot in hell I can stay reading one thing that long.What Ive read has a good flow thou, its OK besides that nothing spetacular but then again Ive only read the first few lines.Just out of curiosity, is that 100 lines or 100 bars?

{Hip}{Hop}[e][l][i][t]e]

100 bars........200 lines

{Hip}{Hop}[e][l][i][t]e]

btw not reppin if ya not feedin bak n jus sayin shit

FATKILLA

yo man hott shit keep it up BRUH

FATKILLA

Mkc Takeova Young Guns On Tha Rize!!!

{Hip}{Hop}[e][l][i][t]e]

thnks fatkilla

MC MIDGE

i would edit my post but i wanna make sure u read this and take it as a pointer


if u want people 2 read ur shit and leave props then make it a length that people will read

cos i bet half the people that said "aw this was great man" didnt read shit. its too long

SirChromeMag

i feel asleep as soon as i read u jockin on g-unit,lol

{Hip}{Hop}[e][l][i][t]e]

aiight man thanks ......i jus fort dat sum1 wud like respect da fact i done 200 lines wich tuook sum time 2 do but anyways chek out ma smaller thread ....

dtale253

ugh
thats like 50 freestyles threads

.::Mc-TaZo::.

!!:)2 long man but i like the part i read try makin the 50 bars ppl mite read it all :)
!!

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aiight man thnks 4 feedback

~KILLA~

put it on audio n ill listen to it...

im illiterate when it comes to long shit like dat

{Hip}{Hop}[e][l][i][t]e]

kk cn sum1 tell me wot shit i shud get for good audio

~KILLA~

Get A Mic....dats Da First Thing


Then D/l Cool Edit Pro..n U Set To Go

Jea

{Hip}{Hop}[e][l][i][t]e]

thnks any links...?

Young tipS

yo this is MIDGE im uppin this shit cos i wanted 2 read some of this, thought i was a bit harsh on what i said (coulda sed it in a better way)

i thought u flowed well, really well. some tight multis also. i like the way u can link 3 or 4 bars together if u know what i mean. it reminded me of a typical english rappers style, i liked it man

stay up

props man