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Join Date: Aug 2008
Location: Virginia
Posts: 1,379
Repped: 149
Repped 414 Times in 245 Posts
Neg Reps: 68
Neg Repped at 154 Times in 98 Posts
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Damn, on some Only God Can Judge Me shit...rock with me now...all you other muthafuckas stay out of my business...hahaha..
I kill faggots, fuck you assholes i'm still it/ I rat-a-tat it lyrically i've been illmatic/ The room's padded in here we're rockin straight jackets/ I hate maggots I guess you're just my bait package/ Sleepin with the fishes while i'm fishin for these bitches/ Nigga riches belong to snitches now you got me diggin ditches/ Cuz I left one of these insignificant midgets with stitches/ And now he's knocked out, wakin up to dial digits/ And what the fuck was I to do when he could file slick shit/ Have the police catch me slippin in midst of his trippin/ Talkin that bull now he's Pippen, waitin for the flippin/ So the tide of battle can turn to the direction that he's grippin/ And now I did my job with a shovel, he made some trouble/ But I still managed to bury him down in the rubble, and then I did it subtle/ But a woman saw, I saw her runnin and she almost lost her footin ya'll/ Some days later I was hit with a taser got me walkin in the court lookin like a fuckin hater/ Only wanted to feed my mother make my family now greater but the jaws of law have chomped me like another alligator/ But how can I blame the judge, lookin at me with my sluts/ On the text of law i'm just a smudge, holdin a grudge/ Soon to face the white out when I close my eyes realizin i'm everything they all dispise, now I lose my disguise...Only God Can Judge Me I had addictions that took away my convictions, my life was portrayed in fiction through pretty bits of diction/ They think they know me cuz I faced a damn eviction succumbin to all the friction with the media and their verbal crucifixion/ And as a kid with bad decision popped some shit up in my nose or arm and now I feel affliction/ So with the precision I produced a plan with a vision to rob a jewlrey store at night and get money for dereliction/ Unfortunately, my plannin was invalid cuz the moment the window fell the alarm muthafuckin shouted/ The sound that it spouted flew away and then it mounted the police station now I got cops comin like Ross and DJ Khaled/(no homo) Tried to make a run but I realized I was done when the cops pulled their guns surroundin me like a dunce/ And all I can say is sorry, to them i'm should be on fuckin Maury cause I had to feed a monster that was calling... Only God Can Judge Me I'm a lyricist myself, a muthafuckin legend/ Commend those before me plus the record store we met in/ And i'ma keep reppin, never get 2 steppin/ Cuz Unk's for punks so fuck that cunt this is a test man/ Tupac, Biggie, Nas and KRS/ Big Daddy Kane, SPICE 1, Wu Tang plus all that mess/ R.I.P to some, have the best rest, but hip hop will never die the vitals are immortalized... Last edited by TheMadWriter; 05-05-2009 at 06:31 PM. |
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Join Date: Nov 2008
Location: utah
Posts: 162
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dereliction means to abandon right? so why did you say that? it dont make sense. glad to see you continually writing. keep up the good work, it seems like your verse didnt even start out as a story then grew into one.
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Join Date: Aug 2008
Location: Virginia
Posts: 1,379
Repped: 149
Repped 414 Times in 245 Posts
Neg Reps: 68
Neg Repped at 154 Times in 98 Posts
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Dereliction, to my knowledge, is carelessness or recklessness.
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