aight.. maybe i fit the cocky mold..

TheRealProtege · 05-05-2009, 02:49 AM

aight.. im no longer replying to hate comments in my threads.
ima post for people who enjoy readin mah shit. and haters.. im postin for you too <3 . Just postin, cuz I like to rhyme. I can actually rhyme better then i can talk. Good way to express mahself. so enjoy. haters.. you too..enjoy

just listen...
aight.. maybe i fit the cocky mold
but i'm peepin the copies sold.. wonderin' how it can not be gold
i guess the monotony's old, perhaps i'm stuck in a daze
received a bundle of praise, yet get a couple of hate
so humble he stays.. thinkin the game would feel his wrath
til i was peelin cash, my window's closing like i feel a draft
pretty sure the deal has passed..n i've come to terms with..
but when i grip a mic, the other hand is where the Earth sits
maybe these words aint worth shit.. so i face all the weather
with more Juice than Pac and all of Baseball together
some may call him clever.. some think it's average shit
but coincidentally i've heard my lines in yuh favorite rapper's scripts
thats the facts of it.. i dont care if you're likin it money
cuz my punches will part your wig like when Tyson was 20
except not fighting with honeys.. it's all a show to me
because that LV logo aint shit without the O and E
so i put that emotion in wah? .. nigga tha poetry
just notice me.. focused n as calm as the open sea
cuz Lately I've been ripping like I ghost for Jodeci
hope to be... mentioned as the one that held the crown
with written bars of gold n uh flow to melt em down
many have felt the sound n think these jotted rhymes
should be enough to sign on the dotted lines...

but if not im fine..
i know im bright, i aint gotta shine... (-_-)

GILoTINE · 05-05-2009, 01:21 PM

when i read the better rappers on this site, i hold them to a higher stander. They set the bar for themselves. so if you ever seem me give one person an 8 and the verse was an honest 5, and then turn around n give a top rapper an 8 for a verse that would be 3 times as good. Its for that reason, so basically i've read better from protege, but this was still nice.

at first the pac line i dont care for those but you did 2 different plays on one line about the juice so it was a very nice, i would imagine most everybody picked that up, you had a couple lines that if you just heard in a song you might not get um, but if you read it you pick um up right away anyways

7.7 outa 10

TheRealProtege · 05-05-2009, 07:40 PM

respect bro^^

YungMI08 · 05-05-2009, 11:19 PM

more wack juice

JPeppz · 05-06-2009, 03:20 AM

yo M when u become a hater?? da fuck, i leave for a minute n peepz different up in here.

TheRealProtege · 05-06-2009, 03:42 AM

been a while jpeppz.
what up mah dude?

JPeppz · 05-06-2009, 03:58 AM

not much b just got a new comp. where reddi @ we gotta own this freestyle shit again. wit some fresh new breed rhymez

05-05-2009, 02:49 AM	#1
TheRealProtege The alias is Protege Join Date: May 2006 Location: ThA WiLd WeSt Posts: 2,026 Repped: 165 Repped 593 Times in 171 Posts Neg Reps: 149 Neg Repped at 86 Times in 74 Posts	aight.. maybe i fit the cocky mold.. aight.. maybe i fit the cocky mold.. aight.. im no longer replying to hate comments in my threads. ima post for people who enjoy readin mah shit. and haters.. im postin for you too <3 . Just postin, cuz I like to rhyme. I can actually rhyme better then i can talk. Good way to express mahself. so enjoy. haters.. you too..enjoy just listen... aight.. maybe i fit the cocky mold but i'm peepin the copies sold.. wonderin' how it can not be gold i guess the monotony's old, perhaps i'm stuck in a daze received a bundle of praise, yet get a couple of hate so humble he stays.. thinkin the game would feel his wrath til i was peelin cash, my window's closing like i feel a draft pretty sure the deal has passed..n i've come to terms with.. but when i grip a mic, the other hand is where the Earth sits maybe these words aint worth shit.. so i face all the weather with more Juice than Pac and all of Baseball together some may call him clever.. some think it's average shit but coincidentally i've heard my lines in yuh favorite rapper's scripts thats the facts of it.. i dont care if you're likin it money cuz my punches will part your wig like when Tyson was 20 except not fighting with honeys.. it's all a show to me because that LV logo aint shit without the O and E so i put that emotion in wah? .. nigga tha poetry just notice me.. focused n as calm as the open sea cuz Lately I've been ripping like I ghost for Jodeci hope to be... mentioned as the one that held the crown with written bars of gold n uh flow to melt em down many have felt the sound n think these jotted rhymes should be enough to sign on the dotted lines... but if not im fine.. i know im bright, i aint gotta shine... (-_-) __________________ The new motto is...WHOEVER soundclick.com/protegerebelflag

05-05-2009, 01:21 PM	#2
GILoTINE Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: utah Posts: 162 Repped: 14 Repped 8 Times in 8 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	re when i read the better rappers on this site, i hold them to a higher stander. They set the bar for themselves. so if you ever seem me give one person an 8 and the verse was an honest 5, and then turn around n give a top rapper an 8 for a verse that would be 3 times as good. Its for that reason, so basically i've read better from protege, but this was still nice. at first the pac line i dont care for those but you did 2 different plays on one line about the juice so it was a very nice, i would imagine most everybody picked that up, you had a couple lines that if you just heard in a song you might not get um, but if you read it you pick um up right away anyways 7.7 outa 10

05-05-2009, 07:40 PM	#3
TheRealProtege The alias is Protege Join Date: May 2006 Location: ThA WiLd WeSt Posts: 2,026 Repped: 165 Repped 593 Times in 171 Posts Neg Reps: 149 Neg Repped at 86 Times in 74 Posts	respect bro^^ __________________ The new motto is...WHOEVER soundclick.com/protegerebelflag

05-05-2009, 11:19 PM	#4
YungMI08 Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Bmore Posts: 854 Repped: 26 Repped 211 Times in 117 Posts Neg Reps: 25 Neg Repped at 55 Times in 51 Posts	more wack juice __________________ Crank Dat Bawwsy Bawwse http://hhboard.ihiphop.com/reputation.php?p=3930236 ^^^NEG HIM TO DEATH!!!!

05-06-2009, 03:20 AM	#5
JPeppz Invest in Rhymes Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Toronto Posts: 232 Repped: 27 Repped 12 Times in 12 Posts Neg Reps: 7 Neg Repped at 3 Times in 3 Posts	yo M when u become a hater?? da fuck, i leave for a minute n peepz different up in here. __________________

05-06-2009, 03:42 AM	#6
TheRealProtege The alias is Protege Join Date: May 2006 Location: ThA WiLd WeSt Posts: 2,026 Repped: 165 Repped 593 Times in 171 Posts Neg Reps: 149 Neg Repped at 86 Times in 74 Posts	been a while jpeppz. what up mah dude? __________________ The new motto is...WHOEVER soundclick.com/protegerebelflag

05-06-2009, 03:58 AM	#7
JPeppz Invest in Rhymes Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Toronto Posts: 232 Repped: 27 Repped 12 Times in 12 Posts Neg Reps: 7 Neg Repped at 3 Times in 3 Posts	not much b just got a new comp. where reddi @ we gotta own this freestyle shit again. wit some fresh new breed rhymez __________________

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