Threats (Death to cowards)

TheMadWriter · 04-29-2009, 07:46 AM

I hear you cowards speakin/
I spit for hours then I make your week end/
Shit and devour leave your bodies leakin/
I am the fire with the heat you missiles ain't seekin/
Take you to Memphis fuck your rocks i'll leave you bleak -in-/
Bleak out, expose you completely without a doubt/
You can cry and pout you weakling you ain't really stout/
Unless you're short, full of tea but you don't want that route/
Becuase I shatter cups like dreams with the rhymes I spout/
Brussel the hate off of my shoulder with the shine I sprout/
Then you the see the light see that line made you devout/
I guess we can assume that's what the fuck my sign's about/
I let the music boom you're hooked as if you're dinin out/
And then I FUCK your mind with this fight that i'm cryin out/
You don't want your boys to have your back if they're dyin out/
Cuz that's the weight on your shoulders and it won't balance out/
You're too late little soldier the horse that you surmount/
Was dead weight growin older I guess it's dyin now/
You're goin nowhere fuckin fools I hate your criticism/
You're raisin ruckus tools you only have your cynicism/
And me to assist, grippin Desert Eagles with hurt wrists/
Willin to lose an arm to make death kiss your bitch/
Shit, I have no mercy I only have a list/
And a sniper that'll leave Sierra lost in the mist/
Her tiara's over my dick, get it you pricks?/
I have no mercy nigga i'm sick, a bomb that ticks/
My fists are tounges I might hit two licks/
Might throw three kicks, i'll bring your empire down you snitch/
There's nothin left you tit, you Abercrombie Fitch bitch not rich/
You were irksome like an itch, but I turned you down like a thoughtless pitch/
You wrought this grip, talkin shit with that useless lisp/
I guess I just had to bust your lip, because you lied to me/
So little nigga I say RIP, because you just might die with me/
Cry with me, deprive you of oxygen until you wheeze/
I can't feel you i'm too fresh like Febreeze/
Leave you deceased, watch the meek inherit the Earth you geek/
You're too weak, you inherit the ground with a coffin and no teeth/
Put the sword back in it's sheathe, nigga i'm done/
Laugh to your tombstone, word to Jigga and one...

GILoTINE · 04-29-2009, 04:56 PM

Take you to Memphis fuck your rocks i'll leave you bleak -in-/
I understand what you ment with this punchline, maybe im just dumb but what do you mena leave you bleak in? how do you leave someone bleak in?

And a sniper that'll leave Sierra lost in the mist

this line was funny, but who is sierra? is it someone on this board?

6.1 outa 10

TheMadWriter · 04-30-2009, 08:34 AM

Bleak
1: exposed and barren and often windswept
2: cold, raw <a bleak November evening>
3 a: lacking in warmth, life, or kindliness : grim b: not hopeful or encouraging : depressing <a bleak outlook> c: severely simple or austere

All three could fit...plus the Sierra line wasn't aimed at no one, just a general line referring to the soda. Lol. Thanks for the constructive criticism though.

YungMI08 · 04-30-2009, 02:57 PM

^^^^still doesnt make sense cause you didnt even finish the idea

bleak in what?

TheMadWriter · 04-30-2009, 09:09 PM

I meant to leave someone exposed inside as well as outside..if that makes any sense. I guess referring to a facade, exposing the outside as who they claim to be and the inside as who they really are.

04-29-2009, 07:46 AM	#1
TheMadWriter Veteran Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Virginia Posts: 1,381 Repped: 149 Repped 414 Times in 245 Posts Neg Reps: 68 Neg Repped at 156 Times in 100 Posts	Threats (Death to cowards) Threats (Death to cowards) I hear you cowards speakin/ I spit for hours then I make your week end/ Shit and devour leave your bodies leakin/ I am the fire with the heat you missiles ain't seekin/ Take you to Memphis fuck your rocks i'll leave you bleak -in-/ Bleak out, expose you completely without a doubt/ You can cry and pout you weakling you ain't really stout/ Unless you're short, full of tea but you don't want that route/ Becuase I shatter cups like dreams with the rhymes I spout/ Brussel the hate off of my shoulder with the shine I sprout/ Then you the see the light see that line made you devout/ I guess we can assume that's what the fuck my sign's about/ I let the music boom you're hooked as if you're dinin out/ And then I FUCK your mind with this fight that i'm cryin out/ You don't want your boys to have your back if they're dyin out/ Cuz that's the weight on your shoulders and it won't balance out/ You're too late little soldier the horse that you surmount/ Was dead weight growin older I guess it's dyin now/ You're goin nowhere fuckin fools I hate your criticism/ You're raisin ruckus tools you only have your cynicism/ And me to assist, grippin Desert Eagles with hurt wrists/ Willin to lose an arm to make death kiss your bitch/ Shit, I have no mercy I only have a list/ And a sniper that'll leave Sierra lost in the mist/ Her tiara's over my dick, get it you pricks?/ I have no mercy nigga i'm sick, a bomb that ticks/ My fists are tounges I might hit two licks/ Might throw three kicks, i'll bring your empire down you snitch/ There's nothin left you tit, you Abercrombie Fitch bitch not rich/ You were irksome like an itch, but I turned you down like a thoughtless pitch/ You wrought this grip, talkin shit with that useless lisp/ I guess I just had to bust your lip, because you lied to me/ So little nigga I say RIP, because you just might die with me/ Cry with me, deprive you of oxygen until you wheeze/ I can't feel you i'm too fresh like Febreeze/ Leave you deceased, watch the meek inherit the Earth you geek/ You're too weak, you inherit the ground with a coffin and no teeth/ Put the sword back in it's sheathe, nigga i'm done/ Laugh to your tombstone, word to Jigga and one...

04-29-2009, 04:56 PM	#2
GILoTINE Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: utah Posts: 162 Repped: 14 Repped 8 Times in 8 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	re Take you to Memphis fuck your rocks i'll leave you bleak -in-/ I understand what you ment with this punchline, maybe im just dumb but what do you mena leave you bleak in? how do you leave someone bleak in? And a sniper that'll leave Sierra lost in the mist this line was funny, but who is sierra? is it someone on this board? 6.1 outa 10

04-30-2009, 02:57 PM	#4
YungMI08 Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Bmore Posts: 854 Repped: 26 Repped 211 Times in 117 Posts Neg Reps: 25 Neg Repped at 55 Times in 51 Posts	^^^^still doesnt make sense cause you didnt even finish the idea bleak in what? __________________ Crank Dat Bawwsy Bawwse http://hhboard.ihiphop.com/reputation.php?p=3930236 ^^^NEG HIM TO DEATH!!!!

Thread Tools
Show Printable Version Email this Page
Display Modes
Linear Mode Switch to Hybrid Mode Switch to Threaded Mode

04-30-2009, 08:34 AM	#3
TheMadWriter Veteran Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Virginia Posts: 1,381 Repped: 149 Repped 414 Times in 245 Posts Neg Reps: 68 Neg Repped at 156 Times in 100 Posts	Bleak 1: exposed and barren and often windswept 2: cold, raw <a bleak November evening> 3 a: lacking in warmth, life, or kindliness : grim b: not hopeful or encouraging : depressing <a bleak outlook> c: severely simple or austere All three could fit...plus the Sierra line wasn't aimed at no one, just a general line referring to the soda. Lol. Thanks for the constructive criticism though.

04-30-2009, 09:09 PM	#5
TheMadWriter Veteran Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Virginia Posts: 1,381 Repped: 149 Repped 414 Times in 245 Posts Neg Reps: 68 Neg Repped at 156 Times in 100 Posts	I meant to leave someone exposed inside as well as outside..if that makes any sense. I guess referring to a facade, exposing the outside as who they claim to be and the inside as who they really are.