Komplex [sic]

Komplex · 04-20-2009, 10:47 PM

Honestly I've wasted years, unable to face my fears
Quickly labeled an outcast due to a hatred for my peers
I've tasted tears of a loser, felt the pain of blatant jeers
Don't deserve to go to hell, I've encountered Satan here
Even battled him brutally, with blood my face was smeared
Looked to the sky & asked God "Are you sure that my place is here?"
He replied "No need to worry, your enemy's fate is near"
Since then I've worked my hardest to reach the greatest tier
On life's road I'm tryna find a vehicle that's safe to steer
and drive to that good life, beatiful wife and great career
Help to create a better me down the line in later years
Give him wisdom, point to the stars and say "Son, take it here
Reach your destination in luxury, shit..maybe a leer
Avoid lames fakes and queers because their hate is so mere"
Revenge is a great dish and I hold it's taste dear
I remain the frontrunner, yall niggas stay in the rear

Threyev · 04-21-2009, 03:22 PM

I liked this a lot. Good storytelling, nice multies, excellent flow. Well done.

Komplex · 04-25-2009, 12:11 PM

no doubt. thanks fam.

youngking187 · 04-25-2009, 03:19 PM

Don't deserve to go to hell, I've encountered Satan here
Even battled him brutally, with blood my face was smeared
Looked to the sky & asked God "Are you sure that my place is here?"
He replied "No need to worry, your enemy's fate is near"
Since then I've worked my hardest to reach the greatest tier
On life's road I'm tryna find a vehicle that's safe to steer
and drive to that good life, beatiful wife and great career
Help to create a better me down the line in later years

that whole middle part waz sick..
i waz feeling the whole thing..
lyrical content is nice as shit..
seem like this could flow great on audio if executed right..

good drop fam..stay up..

Reddi Ree · 04-25-2009, 04:55 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Komplex

Honestly I've wasted years, unable to face my fears
Quickly labeled an outcast due to a hatred for my peers
I've tasted tears of a loser, felt the pain of blatant jeers
Don't deserve to go to hell, I've encountered Satan here
Even battled him brutally, with blood my face was smeared
Looked to the sky & asked God "Are you sure that my place is here?"
He replied "No need to worry, your enemy's fate is near"
Since then I've worked my hardest to reach the greatest tier

^^^Fav Part....Dis shit is crazy...I ca picture dis shit in ma head happenin as i was readin it....Overall dis was a Flamer...keep comin wit da hot shit ma nig

Komplex · 04-26-2009, 10:09 PM

good looks yall.

Tha Pak Ataak · 04-29-2009, 10:35 AM

No word for it man, yo flow was sick ,
keep up the good stuff homie

GILoTINE · 04-29-2009, 01:24 PM

damn man, love readin you stuff, I hardly ever login here, n maybe i've asked you before but do you record anything or just write? damn one of the few people on here that actually got somthing to say. yo love that shit, ima have to go back n see if i missed any of your raps the past couple months its been a minute since i been on. yo 8.5 outa 10. bet

Komplex · 05-01-2009, 01:38 AM

lol, wish I had the leisure to record fam.

Good looks on the feedback yall.

Komplex · 05-02-2009, 07:50 PM

up.....................

Witty Qwan · 05-02-2009, 08:04 PM

did u attentionally make each line rhyme with "fear"....this waz ill

YungMI08 · 05-02-2009, 09:34 PM

wtf didnt i type lmao?

niggas deletin my shit

Komplex · 05-10-2009, 11:04 PM

up....................

Blizzy · 05-11-2009, 12:34 PM

Good Drop Plex....some multis were forced but strong throughout....

Witty Qwan · 05-11-2009, 02:11 PM

yea u did...sumbody deleted ya post lol....was that "lmao" directed towards my post?

cuz wut i ment by it was...keeping the same multie flow rhyme scheme through a whole drop while telling a story aint a ez task

(dont mean to spam)

Ya Boy · 05-13-2009, 03:47 AM

fiyaaaaaaaaaaaaah

Komplex · 05-15-2009, 10:19 AM

good looks fam.

GILoTINE · 05-15-2009, 03:38 PM

yo komplex this was a dope verse but why dont ya write somthing new? gettin kinda old dont ya think?

Shogun · 05-15-2009, 06:44 PM

"lmao".

You still don't get it. The opening lines themselves see you displaying a lack of syllable count awareness...again. All the old wack hallmarks are here too. It's sad.

Witty Qwan · 05-16-2009, 10:12 AM

yea shogun....we know your da greatest -_-

"lmao"...he said that before i said nething about syllable count...fail...but now dat i relook at it...u right....it wasnt exactly the "same" scheme...but....still nice

*shrugs shoulders*

(no tom)

Shogun · 05-16-2009, 12:35 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by YoungSparks

yea shogun....we know your da greatest -_-

"lmao"...he said that before i said nething about syllable count...fail...but now dat i relook at it...u right....it wasnt exactly the "same" scheme...but....still nice

*shrugs shoulders*

(no tom)

You're right, you never said anything about syllable count - so why do you think I was talking to you, or even know who you are, little guy?

Clowns hyping clowns. Nice.

Witty Qwan · 05-16-2009, 01:14 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by YoungSparks

yea u did...sumbody deleted ya post lol....was that "lmao" directed towards my post?

cuz wut i ment by it was...keeping the same multie flow rhyme scheme through a whole drop while telling a story aint a ez task

(dont mean to spam)

ez mistake mr. shogun sir

04-20-2009, 10:47 PM	#1
Komplex Poetic Swagger Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 1,164 Repped: 117 Repped 99 Times in 50 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	Komplex [sic] Komplex [sic] Honestly I've wasted years, unable to face my fears Quickly labeled an outcast due to a hatred for my peers I've tasted tears of a loser, felt the pain of blatant jeers Don't deserve to go to hell, I've encountered Satan here Even battled him brutally, with blood my face was smeared Looked to the sky & asked God "Are you sure that my place is here?" He replied "No need to worry, your enemy's fate is near" Since then I've worked my hardest to reach the greatest tier On life's road I'm tryna find a vehicle that's safe to steer and drive to that good life, beatiful wife and great career Help to create a better me down the line in later years Give him wisdom, point to the stars and say "Son, take it here Reach your destination in luxury, shit..maybe a leer Avoid lames fakes and queers because their hate is so mere" Revenge is a great dish and I hold it's taste dear I remain the frontrunner, yall niggas stay in the rear __________________ "Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz

04-21-2009, 03:22 PM	#2
Threyev Join Date: May 2006 Location: The Bronx Posts: 553 Repped: 82 Repped 46 Times in 29 Posts Neg Reps: 3 Neg Repped at 5 Times in 5 Posts	I liked this a lot. Good storytelling, nice multies, excellent flow. Well done. Last edited by Komplex; 04-25-2009 at 12:10 PM.

04-25-2009, 12:11 PM	#3
Komplex Poetic Swagger Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 1,164 Repped: 117 Repped 99 Times in 50 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	no doubt. thanks fam. __________________ "Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz

04-25-2009, 03:19 PM	#4
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,517 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	Don't deserve to go to hell, I've encountered Satan here Even battled him brutally, with blood my face was smeared Looked to the sky & asked God "Are you sure that my place is here?" He replied "No need to worry, your enemy's fate is near" Since then I've worked my hardest to reach the greatest tier On life's road I'm tryna find a vehicle that's safe to steer and drive to that good life, beatiful wife and great career Help to create a better me down the line in later years that whole middle part waz sick.. i waz feeling the whole thing.. lyrical content is nice as shit.. seem like this could flow great on audio if executed right.. good drop fam..stay up.. __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

04-26-2009, 10:09 PM	#6
Komplex Poetic Swagger Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 1,164 Repped: 117 Repped 99 Times in 50 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	good looks yall. __________________ "Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz

04-29-2009, 10:35 AM	#7
Tha Pak Ataak Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: Brooklyn Posts: 113 Repped: 10 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 10 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	? No word for it man, yo flow was sick , keep up the good stuff homie __________________

04-29-2009, 01:24 PM	#8
GILoTINE Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: utah Posts: 162 Repped: 14 Repped 8 Times in 8 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	re damn man, love readin you stuff, I hardly ever login here, n maybe i've asked you before but do you record anything or just write? damn one of the few people on here that actually got somthing to say. yo love that shit, ima have to go back n see if i missed any of your raps the past couple months its been a minute since i been on. yo 8.5 outa 10. bet

05-01-2009, 01:38 AM	#9
Komplex Poetic Swagger Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 1,164 Repped: 117 Repped 99 Times in 50 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	lol, wish I had the leisure to record fam. Good looks on the feedback yall. __________________ "Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz

05-02-2009, 07:50 PM	#10
Komplex Poetic Swagger Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 1,164 Repped: 117 Repped 99 Times in 50 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	up..................... __________________ "Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz

05-02-2009, 08:04 PM	#11
Witty Qwan # Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: My crib Posts: 3,050 Repped: 155 Repped 483 Times in 311 Posts Neg Reps: 21 Neg Repped at 82 Times in 75 Posts	did u attentionally make each line rhyme with "fear"....this waz ill __________________ [02:34PM] Lyrikcha FUCK THIS FAGGOT CHAMBERS NIGGA...IM A CUT HIS HEAD OFF AND PUT IT ON A STICK FOR MY NIGGA TIGER CAN DEFROST THE GAT AND SMOKE U Last edited by Witty Qwan; 05-02-2009 at 08:09 PM.

05-02-2009, 09:34 PM	#12
YungMI08 Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Bmore Posts: 854 Repped: 26 Repped 211 Times in 117 Posts Neg Reps: 25 Neg Repped at 55 Times in 51 Posts	wtf didnt i type lmao? niggas deletin my shit __________________ Crank Dat Bawwsy Bawwse http://hhboard.ihiphop.com/reputation.php?p=3930236 ^^^NEG HIM TO DEATH!!!!

05-10-2009, 11:04 PM	#13
Komplex Poetic Swagger Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 1,164 Repped: 117 Repped 99 Times in 50 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	up.................... __________________ "Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz

05-11-2009, 12:34 PM	#14
Blizzy Wordsmith Join Date: May 2008 Location: In Battlefield's Posts: 3,359 Repped: 687 Repped 345 Times in 158 Posts Neg Reps: 25 Neg Repped at 25 Times in 24 Posts	Good Drop Plex....some multis were forced but strong throughout.... __________________ MY MUSIC CHECK IT OUT myspace.com/ttpbloodshot

05-11-2009, 02:11 PM	#15
Witty Qwan # Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: My crib Posts: 3,050 Repped: 155 Repped 483 Times in 311 Posts Neg Reps: 21 Neg Repped at 82 Times in 75 Posts	yea u did...sumbody deleted ya post lol....was that "lmao" directed towards my post? cuz wut i ment by it was...keeping the same multie flow rhyme scheme through a whole drop while telling a story aint a ez task (dont mean to spam)

05-13-2009, 03:47 AM	#16
Ya Boy Veteran Join Date: May 2006 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 1,236 Repped: 0 Repped 432 Times in 159 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 25 Times in 18 Posts	fiyaaaaaaaaaaaaah __________________

05-15-2009, 10:19 AM	#17
Komplex Poetic Swagger Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 1,164 Repped: 117 Repped 99 Times in 50 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	good looks fam. __________________ "Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz

05-15-2009, 03:38 PM	#18
GILoTINE Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: utah Posts: 162 Repped: 14 Repped 8 Times in 8 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	re yo komplex this was a dope verse but why dont ya write somthing new? gettin kinda old dont ya think?

05-15-2009, 06:44 PM	#19
Shogun Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 718 Repped: 0 Repped 13 Times in 12 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	"lmao". You still don't get it. The opening lines themselves see you displaying a lack of syllable count awareness...again. All the old wack hallmarks are here too. It's sad.

05-16-2009, 10:12 AM	#20
Witty Qwan # Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: My crib Posts: 3,050 Repped: 155 Repped 483 Times in 311 Posts Neg Reps: 21 Neg Repped at 82 Times in 75 Posts	yea shogun....we know your da greatest -_- "lmao"...he said that before i said nething about syllable count...fail...but now dat i relook at it...u right....it wasnt exactly the "same" scheme...but....still nice shrugs shoulders (no tom) Last edited by Witty Qwan; 05-16-2009 at 10:39 AM.

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