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Old 04-20-2009, 03:38 PM   #1
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DX - Still My Bitch (She Get Around)

DX - Still My Bitch (She Get Around)

Chorus:
Can't stop thinking about you , thinking about you
Its almost like I wish that I wasn't allowed to
Sitting here, rolling the piff, scrolling through pics
Even tho you get around, you know your my bitch
Its no fun drinking without you, drinking without you
Take a sip, but it tastes like shit
Can't stop thinking about you, thinking about you
Even tho you get around, your still my bitch

Verse:
No extended metaphors, this is just a letter for
A girl Imma bout to meet up with on the eleventh floor
You knew I was fond of you, but I didnt come on to you
Your the one responsible, you made the moves, that I responded to
Talkin bout our past history, I knew she was diggin me
Sayin that she wishes I was the one who took her virginity
She wrapped her legs around me, and I stare in between
Wonder how it would feel, if I got in them jeans
Talking in the day, sippin drinks, discussing life
Then we got drunk and start touchin in the night
Mutual attraction, playing wit me in the taxi
Talking dirty in my ear, sayin i bet they gunna catch me
She makes me happy, but it's complicated son
She likes many boys, but says I'm her favorite one
Should I pretend not to care where she sticks her tongue
Its like every single night she has a different one
She tells me shit thats intimate, like who shes with n shit
Than tells me im the one she wants to be hittin it
While she gettin me hard, Im gettin mentally scarred
Its like your mouth is always open, no entry is barred
My concerns subside, when you let me inside
But when I slide back out, the same thoughts re-enter my mind
So where does it leave me now? I have no clue
She says I have so many things that I can show you
Damn dont I feel special, parenthesis, sarcasm
Still I daydream about how I can make you orgasm
Maybe Im just horny, or maybe what we have is real
But the doubts seem to obscure how I really feel
Im gunna ignore the past, leave it, just let it be
And shift my attention to us being together presently

Chorus:
Can't stop thinking about you , thinking about you
Its almost like I wish that I wasn't allowed to
Sitting here, rolling the piff, scrolling through pics
Even tho you get around, you know your my bitch
Its no fun drinking without you, drinking without you
Take a sip, but it tastes like shit
Can't stop thinking about you, thinking about you
Even tho you get around, your still my bitch
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Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley
We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion
You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in

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Old 04-20-2009, 05:34 PM   #2
 
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Nicely done, as usual. This is a change of pace for you, content-wise, and isn't as strong lyrically as usual with you. The first verse started off hot, but it kind of wavered a little bit as it went on. Still, good stuff, keep on doing your shit.
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Old 04-24-2009, 12:10 AM   #3
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I hear u man and I appreciate the helpful feed. Sometimes I go for the real lyrical approach, other times I just write about what I'm going through. This one was a representation of the latter , which could have been executed maybe a little better but still IMO was good enough to post for others to see.
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