Low Down Dirty

TheMadWriter · 04-19-2009, 11:18 PM

I'm inconsiderate, leavin whack rappers steamin mad at me/
Quick to shoot a bullet misarrange someone's anatomy/
Turn a rappin travesty into a savage tragedy/
This savagery can also lead to patterns of more casualties/
Remorseless extortionist, leave you disproportionate/
Killin insubordinates while findin other coordinates/
Have you deported bitch, my sickness perfected/
You're so dumb they call your hiding witless protection/
Have you scared shitless runnin in some dumb direction/
Flattened in front of semi trucks from the intersection/
Flat line, a tyrant that'll converse with your mind/
Shoot the hollow tip watch it disperse into your spine/
You got Cowboy'd and you ain't even from no Dallas bitch/
Taunt you fuck your wife and have you watch in calloused paralysis/
Cognitively dissonant? No conscience so no war there/
Shoot you up with pathogens it's biological warfare/
Psychological core rocked to a psycho's logical door here/
Nothing's ever wrong and if there is I really don't care/
The hottest prey on my prayers then assume it is my downfall/
Snakes and 'foxes' think that they should blame it on the alcohol/
So the more that they send to me, the more I praise my enemy/
The bullets graze but never into me this is my remedy/
They're limting but I just break that mess cuz they ain't bendin me/
Never ever effected, in fact the intellect is/
Rather high I only pretend i'm a mindless sexist/
Or heartless racist, or even a retarded patient/
To get the best reactions from the haters ambi-valent/
Do we hate em or do we love em? Are we below or above him?/
Maybe we Danny Glove him take out our lethal weapons/
Sever them from the legs then tell em 'hey bitch get to steppin'/
Now I am relentless rhymes are hardened like cement bitch/
The cynical writer devious conniving demented...

Please let me repent kid...

ComplicatedMind · 04-19-2009, 11:24 PM

wow man ur trying way to hard to use such big words. work on ur flow n tone it down. there was some tite lines in there but jeez do u just pull out a dictionary n look for words? only use words u would use in ur every day life. thats my moto n it makes u more relatable.

i'll force an abortion on a foreign poor bitch
force feed the aborted fetus to orphans like pork ribs

ThA ViiRu5 · 04-20-2009, 01:00 AM

lol this dude sound like Jus Allah

04-19-2009, 11:18 PM	#1
TheMadWriter Veteran Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Virginia Posts: 1,381 Repped: 149 Repped 414 Times in 245 Posts Neg Reps: 68 Neg Repped at 154 Times in 98 Posts	Low Down Dirty Low Down Dirty I'm inconsiderate, leavin whack rappers steamin mad at me/ Quick to shoot a bullet misarrange someone's anatomy/ Turn a rappin travesty into a savage tragedy/ This savagery can also lead to patterns of more casualties/ Remorseless extortionist, leave you disproportionate/ Killin insubordinates while findin other coordinates/ Have you deported bitch, my sickness perfected/ You're so dumb they call your hiding witless protection/ Have you scared shitless runnin in some dumb direction/ Flattened in front of semi trucks from the intersection/ Flat line, a tyrant that'll converse with your mind/ Shoot the hollow tip watch it disperse into your spine/ You got Cowboy'd and you ain't even from no Dallas bitch/ Taunt you fuck your wife and have you watch in calloused paralysis/ Cognitively dissonant? No conscience so no war there/ Shoot you up with pathogens it's biological warfare/ Psychological core rocked to a psycho's logical door here/ Nothing's ever wrong and if there is I really don't care/ The hottest prey on my prayers then assume it is my downfall/ Snakes and 'foxes' think that they should blame it on the alcohol/ So the more that they send to me, the more I praise my enemy/ The bullets graze but never into me this is my remedy/ They're limting but I just break that mess cuz they ain't bendin me/ Never ever effected, in fact the intellect is/ Rather high I only pretend i'm a mindless sexist/ Or heartless racist, or even a retarded patient/ To get the best reactions from the haters ambi-valent/ Do we hate em or do we love em? Are we below or above him?/ Maybe we Danny Glove him take out our lethal weapons/ Sever them from the legs then tell em 'hey bitch get to steppin'/ Now I am relentless rhymes are hardened like cement bitch/ The cynical writer devious conniving demented... Please let me repent kid...

04-20-2009, 01:00 AM	#3
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 2,617 Repped: 525 Repped 179 Times in 104 Posts Neg Reps: 81 Neg Repped at 21 Times in 16 Posts	lol this dude sound like Jus Allah __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT

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04-19-2009, 11:24 PM	#2
ComplicatedMind Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 35 Repped: 0 Repped 3 Times in 2 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	wow man ur trying way to hard to use such big words. work on ur flow n tone it down. there was some tite lines in there but jeez do u just pull out a dictionary n look for words? only use words u would use in ur every day life. thats my moto n it makes u more relatable. i'll force an abortion on a foreign poor bitch force feed the aborted fetus to orphans like pork ribs