fuck givng dudes a pass, there's no Steve Nash in me

TheRealProtege · 04-19-2009, 04:50 PM

LoL@ homey tryin ta clash wit me...
fuck if yu a soldier, still no match for me =)

so fuck givng dudes a pass, there's no Steve Nash in me
my drive isnt to the basket but i've dished out your casket fees
i beg you little fractions to start springing into action please
and get your white jacket looking like flags for the Japanese
i dont even hafta sneeze to know i'm iller than a bad disease
your best padded couldnt be packaged with my average frees
my Cubans are more savage than the dude payin the Dallas G's
style's an S550 while your budget's trying to crack the 3's
my punches snappin trees, your swings arent strong enough to craft a breeze
I raise Hell and you could probably beat me the day that'll freeze
add my pad to the data the DEA would hafta seize
sorry son, i know you're waiting for your dad to leave...

quit being wack.

J~Souljah · 04-19-2009, 05:04 PM

so fuck givng dudes a pass, there's no Steve Nash in me
my drive isnt to the basket but i've dished out your casket fees

"drive"..."basket"...."casket"....would have made for good wordplay if it was worded differently...the multie is a bit of a reach

i beg you little fractions to start springing into action please
and get your white jacket looking like flags for the Japanese

"red dot"...i admire the effort...but the "white jacket" part was out of place...stretchin it too far for a meta

i dont even hafta sneeze to know i'm iller than a bad disease
your best padded couldnt be packaged with my average frees

"im ill...sneezes...disease"...horribly played....best padded what?....padded bras?...padded room?....you shouldnt leave words out to compliment the flow

my Cubans are more savage than the dude payin the Dallas G's
style's an S550 while your budget's trying to crack the 3's

ehhh

my punches snappin trees, your swings arent strong enough to craft a breeze
I raise Hell and you could probably beat me the day that'll freeze

"craft a breeze"...too much...going out of your way to make a multie work...dont like the wording...and it's forced...craft a breeze/that'll freeze..."when hell freezes over"...played

add my pad to the data the DEA would hafta seize
sorry son, i know you're waiting for your dad to leave...

last line didnt even fit in with the bar

ehh

it seems that multies are the only thing you're concerned with...even then, they're forced and redundant

TheMadWriter · 04-19-2009, 05:11 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by J~Souljah

so fuck givng dudes a pass, there's no Steve Nash in me
my drive isnt to the basket but i've dished out your casket fees

"drive"..."basket"...."casket"....would have made for good wordplay if it was worded differently...the multie is a bit of a reach

i beg you little fractions to start springing into action please
and get your white jacket looking like flags for the Japanese

"red dot"...i admire the effort...but the "white jacket" part was out of place...stretchin it too far for a meta

i dont even hafta sneeze to know i'm iller than a bad disease
your best padded couldnt be packaged with my average frees

"im ill...sneezes...disease"...horribly played....best padded what?....padded bras?...padded room?....you shouldnt leave words out to compliment the flow

my Cubans are more savage than the dude payin the Dallas G's
style's an S550 while your budget's trying to crack the 3's

ehhh

my punches snappin trees, your swings arent strong enough to craft a breeze
I raise Hell and you could probably beat me the day that'll freeze

"craft a breeze"...too much...going out of your way to make a multie work...dont like the wording...and it's forced...craft a breeze/that'll freeze..."when hell freezes over"...played

add my pad to the data the DEA would hafta seize
sorry son, i know you're waiting for your dad to leave...

last line didnt even fit in with the bar

ehh

it seems that multies are the only thing you're concerned with...even then, they're forced and redundant

So where's your freestyle Souljah? Yeah, thought you hadn't spit anything yet. To be dissing any verse of this standard you sure are creating a challenge you don't wanna step up to.

J~Souljah · 04-19-2009, 05:13 PM

you're completely right...i've never dropped anything in here b4

and for that, im ashamed

TheMadWriter · 04-19-2009, 05:33 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by J~Souljah

you're completely right...i've never dropped anything in here b4

and for that, im ashamed

No no no no no no, I mean drop something now. Raise the status quo Souljah!

J~Souljah · 04-19-2009, 05:38 PM

^^^if i ever stop recording...sure i will

TheMadWriter · 04-19-2009, 05:48 PM

Oooh back off he's cool now, recording songs puts you on a pedistool. I don't think you have room to be commenting on text drops if you're not dropping anything.

Dema Burt Redux · 04-19-2009, 06:24 PM

Dis Shytt Wacker than J-Souljah on tha micc

YA DEEEGGGG

DannyBoy316 · 04-19-2009, 06:53 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dema Burt Redux

Dis Shytt Wacker than J-Souljah on tha micc

YA DEEEGGGG

lmao ur picture is whack...ya digg! clown

Witty Qwan · 04-19-2009, 06:54 PM

so fuck givng dudes a pass, there's no Steve Nash in me
my drive isnt to the basket but i've dished out your casket fees

i dont even hafta sneeze to know i'm iller than a bad disease
your best padded couldnt be packaged with my average frees

liked those lines..

*50 voice*

get em protege

Blizzy · 04-19-2009, 07:43 PM

multi's at times were forced but that seems to be the case when tryna stay on the same ones for a fair few bars.....flowed well IMO....nice to see you droppin again protege

J~Souljah · 04-19-2009, 08:39 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by TheMadWriter

Oooh back off he's cool now, recording songs puts you on a pedistool. I don't think you have room to be commenting on text drops if you're not dropping anything.

just like fans of music arent able to comment since they dont rap/sing/etc.

congrats...there's no arguing with that

Tom Chambers · 04-19-2009, 08:48 PM

^summed up perfectly... =D

cupcake..learn to think out your arguements first

TheMadWriter · 04-19-2009, 09:45 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tom Chambers

^summed up perfectly... =D

cupcake..learn to think out your arguements first

You're obsessed Tom, get off my dick. And secondly, to be frank with you Souljah, if you're going around criticizing everyone then you should have something to say for it. You always act like you're on some sort of throne, I just feel you should prove it rather then using a cop out 'well i'm only doing this as a fan' thing to make yourself look innocent.

J~Souljah · 04-19-2009, 10:18 PM

never said "im only doing this as a fan"

now like i said....YOU POST YOUR FUCKIN VERSES UP TO GET CRITICIZED!

how idiotic does it sound to tell someone "you go around criticizing shit"

i mean damn...i even broke your fuckin verse down bar by bar

and you're crying about my feed?

do i have to break it down into syllables now for you to shut up and just take the feed?

"i feel you should just prove it"

that's great for someone who has never posted in here

but i've done it...im not interested in doing it...im focused on recording

and if you get a text verse...it'll just be a throwaway audio verse

stop crying and just take the criticism......

TheMadWriter · 04-19-2009, 10:42 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by J~Souljah

never said "im only doing this as a fan"

now like i said....YOU POST YOUR FUCKIN VERSES UP TO GET CRITICIZED!

how idiotic does it sound to tell someone "you go around criticizing shit"

i mean damn...i even broke your fuckin verse down bar by bar

and you're crying about my feed?

do i have to break it down into syllables now for you to shut up and just take the feed?

"i feel you should just prove it"

that's great for someone who has never posted in here

but i've done it...im not interested in doing it...im focused on recording

and if you get a text verse...it'll just be a throwaway audio verse

stop crying and just take the criticism......

This isn't my verse, first of all. I'm only here because you go around tossing about biased criticism on people's verses. From what I saw this looked like a shot at you. Lol @ you getting mad over me attacking you for your type of criticism. That's like Fox getting mad at someone for attacking them because of their "news". Anyways, i'ma wrap this arguement up because I don't want to fuck up Protege's verse page further by rantin with your stupid ass over you pointless vendettas. Fuck you J Souljah, Protege the verse was fire, and Tom keep rockin Fubu and camo t's. I'm out.

J~Souljah · 04-19-2009, 10:56 PM

^^^lol i thought you were protege

you're both equally wack

stop actin like "im the innocent bystander that just happened to see you criticizing"

no i called your shit wack and now you hopped in here cause you're mad

grow up

cant sugar coat everything

ComplicatedMind · 04-19-2009, 11:15 PM

fuck steve nash ima squeeze past in a ski mask
n leave tracks in need of rehab when i relapse
mind ur bees wax before i peel caps i wont feel bad
when i reach back n bring forawrd ur weak raps
this kids a faggot still ima collapse the bill-ding
must be chinese how many cats i grilled
i got an abundance u got a lack of skill
u couldnt spit some shit if u popped a laxative pill

TheRealProtege · 04-20-2009, 03:21 AM

j soulja stay out of my threads faggot.
fuckn ur careers going nowhere homey, so just stfu actin like you somethn.

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 04-20-2009, 07:48 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by TheMadWriter

This isn't my verse, first of all. I'm only here because you go around tossing about biased criticism on people's verses. From what I saw this looked like a shot at you. Lol @ you getting mad over me attacking you for your type of criticism. That's like Fox getting mad at someone for attacking them because of their "news". Anyways, i'ma wrap this arguement up because I don't want to fuck up Protege's verse page further by rantin with your stupid ass over you pointless vendettas. Fuck you J Souljah, Protege the verse was fire, and Tom keep rockin Fubu and camo t's. I'm out.

lmfaoooo ahahahahahahahah

TheRealProtege · 04-21-2009, 02:39 AM

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04-19-2009, 04:50 PM	#1
TheRealProtege The alias is Protege Join Date: May 2006 Location: ThA WiLd WeSt Posts: 2,029 Repped: 166 Repped 593 Times in 171 Posts Neg Reps: 149 Neg Repped at 86 Times in 74 Posts	fuck givng dudes a pass, there's no Steve Nash in me fuck givng dudes a pass, there's no Steve Nash in me LoL@ homey tryin ta clash wit me... fuck if yu a soldier, still no match for me =) so fuck givng dudes a pass, there's no Steve Nash in me my drive isnt to the basket but i've dished out your casket fees i beg you little fractions to start springing into action please and get your white jacket looking like flags for the Japanese i dont even hafta sneeze to know i'm iller than a bad disease your best padded couldnt be packaged with my average frees my Cubans are more savage than the dude payin the Dallas G's style's an S550 while your budget's trying to crack the 3's my punches snappin trees, your swings arent strong enough to craft a breeze I raise Hell and you could probably beat me the day that'll freeze add my pad to the data the DEA would hafta seize sorry son, i know you're waiting for your dad to leave... quit being wack. __________________ The new motto is...WHOEVER soundclick.com/protegerebelflag

04-19-2009, 06:24 PM	#8
Dema Burt Redux No parkin' baby! Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Zapp Posts: 202 Repped: 24 Repped 20 Times in 11 Posts Neg Reps: 3 Neg Repped at 18 Times in 5 Posts	Dis Shytt Wacker than J-Souljah on tha micc YA DEEEGGGG __________________ Permanance cant exist in a temporary conscious

04-19-2009, 06:54 PM	#10
Witty Qwan # Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: My crib Posts: 3,051 Repped: 155 Repped 484 Times in 311 Posts Neg Reps: 21 Neg Repped at 82 Times in 75 Posts	so fuck givng dudes a pass, there's no Steve Nash in me my drive isnt to the basket but i've dished out your casket fees i dont even hafta sneeze to know i'm iller than a bad disease your best padded couldnt be packaged with my average frees liked those lines.. 50 voice get em protege __________________ [02:34PM] Lyrikcha FUCK THIS FAGGOT CHAMBERS NIGGA...IM A CUT HIS HEAD OFF AND PUT IT ON A STICK FOR MY NIGGA TIGER CAN DEFROST THE GAT AND SMOKE U

04-19-2009, 07:43 PM	#11
Blizzy Wordsmith Join Date: May 2008 Location: In Battlefield's Posts: 3,359 Repped: 687 Repped 345 Times in 158 Posts Neg Reps: 25 Neg Repped at 26 Times in 25 Posts	multi's at times were forced but that seems to be the case when tryna stay on the same ones for a fair few bars.....flowed well IMO....nice to see you droppin again protege __________________ MY MUSIC CHECK IT OUT myspace.com/ttpbloodshot

04-20-2009, 03:21 AM	#19
TheRealProtege The alias is Protege Join Date: May 2006 Location: ThA WiLd WeSt Posts: 2,029 Repped: 166 Repped 593 Times in 171 Posts Neg Reps: 149 Neg Repped at 86 Times in 74 Posts	j soulja stay out of my threads faggot. fuckn ur careers going nowhere homey, so just stfu actin like you somethn. __________________ The new motto is...WHOEVER soundclick.com/protegerebelflag

04-19-2009, 05:04 PM	#2
J~Souljah Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Baltimore, Maryland Posts: 1,826 Repped: 11 Repped 97 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 22 Times in 17 Posts	so fuck givng dudes a pass, there's no Steve Nash in me my drive isnt to the basket but i've dished out your casket fees "drive"..."basket"...."casket"....would have made for good wordplay if it was worded differently...the multie is a bit of a reach i beg you little fractions to start springing into action please and get your white jacket looking like flags for the Japanese "red dot"...i admire the effort...but the "white jacket" part was out of place...stretchin it too far for a meta i dont even hafta sneeze to know i'm iller than a bad disease your best padded couldnt be packaged with my average frees "im ill...sneezes...disease"...horribly played....best padded what?....padded bras?...padded room?....you shouldnt leave words out to compliment the flow my Cubans are more savage than the dude payin the Dallas G's style's an S550 while your budget's trying to crack the 3's ehhh my punches snappin trees, your swings arent strong enough to craft a breeze I raise Hell and you could probably beat me the day that'll freeze "craft a breeze"...too much...going out of your way to make a multie work...dont like the wording...and it's forced...craft a breeze/that'll freeze..."when hell freezes over"...played add my pad to the data the DEA would hafta seize sorry son, i know you're waiting for your dad to leave... last line didnt even fit in with the bar ehh it seems that multies are the only thing you're concerned with...even then, they're forced and redundant

04-19-2009, 05:13 PM	#4
J~Souljah Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Baltimore, Maryland Posts: 1,826 Repped: 11 Repped 97 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 22 Times in 17 Posts	you're completely right...i've never dropped anything in here b4 and for that, im ashamed

04-19-2009, 05:38 PM	#6
J~Souljah Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Baltimore, Maryland Posts: 1,826 Repped: 11 Repped 97 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 22 Times in 17 Posts	^^^if i ever stop recording...sure i will

04-19-2009, 05:48 PM	#7
TheMadWriter Veteran Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Virginia Posts: 1,381 Repped: 149 Repped 414 Times in 245 Posts Neg Reps: 68 Neg Repped at 155 Times in 99 Posts	Oooh back off he's cool now, recording songs puts you on a pedistool. I don't think you have room to be commenting on text drops if you're not dropping anything.

04-19-2009, 08:48 PM	#13
Tom Chambers AkA Sur-Vis-U-All Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: pittsburgh Posts: 11,280 Repped: 132 Repped 477 Times in 296 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 68 Times in 54 Posts	^summed up perfectly... =D cupcake..learn to think out your arguements first

04-19-2009, 10:18 PM	#15
J~Souljah Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Baltimore, Maryland Posts: 1,826 Repped: 11 Repped 97 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 22 Times in 17 Posts	never said "im only doing this as a fan" now like i said....YOU POST YOUR FUCKIN VERSES UP TO GET CRITICIZED! how idiotic does it sound to tell someone "you go around criticizing shit" i mean damn...i even broke your fuckin verse down bar by bar and you're crying about my feed? do i have to break it down into syllables now for you to shut up and just take the feed? "i feel you should just prove it" that's great for someone who has never posted in here but i've done it...im not interested in doing it...im focused on recording and if you get a text verse...it'll just be a throwaway audio verse stop crying and just take the criticism......

04-19-2009, 10:56 PM	#17
J~Souljah Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Baltimore, Maryland Posts: 1,826 Repped: 11 Repped 97 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 22 Times in 17 Posts	^^^lol i thought you were protege you're both equally wack stop actin like "im the innocent bystander that just happened to see you criticizing" no i called your shit wack and now you hopped in here cause you're mad grow up cant sugar coat everything

04-19-2009, 11:15 PM	#18
ComplicatedMind Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 35 Repped: 0 Repped 3 Times in 2 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	fuck steve nash ima squeeze past in a ski mask n leave tracks in need of rehab when i relapse mind ur bees wax before i peel caps i wont feel bad when i reach back n bring forawrd ur weak raps this kids a faggot still ima collapse the bill-ding must be chinese how many cats i grilled i got an abundance u got a lack of skill u couldnt spit some shit if u popped a laxative pill

04-21-2009, 02:39 AM	#21
TheRealProtege The alias is Protege Join Date: May 2006 Location: ThA WiLd WeSt Posts: 2,029 Repped: 166 Repped 593 Times in 171 Posts Neg Reps: 149 Neg Repped at 86 Times in 74 Posts	=]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]] __________________ The new motto is...WHOEVER soundclick.com/protegerebelflag

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