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Join Date: Aug 2008
Location: Virginia
Posts: 1,381
Repped: 149
Repped 414 Times in 245 Posts
Neg Reps: 68
Neg Repped at 156 Times in 100 Posts
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Ya'll could have clocks on your chest like Flava Flav/
You still wouldn't get the time of the day,/ Or the right of the way, understand I got light in my way/ The end of the tunnel leads to, the brightest of the days/ And as I emerge from the darkness/ Haters converge from a mosh pit/ Slowly risin but surely stalkin/ Whisperin but never talkin, runnin but they're never walkin/ Rhymes are tired but I never call em Falken/ Spit at the ground and make em dance like their waltzin, give em signs to stop and soon enough they're haltin/ Show em the shit that they are caught in, release em from the pitcher's mit then they're still hardened/ Why don't they understand that I made em?/ I created em and planned em now I have to lay em invade em.../ Ace of spades em, downgrade em and escapade em/ Bade em a farewell before I kill and tase them/ Before I dazzle and amaze em, I hate them.../ Because they assume that I am slower b.../ I don't misrepresent my shit as poetry/ Perhaps it's another form of mental gravity/ To say my shit is poetry would be a travesty/ If I came here to drop like Hovito/ To say my shit is poetry would be so incognito.../ Please yo, give me room to breathe i'm le-thal/ Give you imagery that'll leave-you, fe-tal.../ Deceitful, this game is something that'll beat you/ How could I ever say I give this my one hundred?/ When i'm 300 bars and RUNNIN rather than gunnin?/ Sonnin while i'm sittin up under the sun and/ Thinking, what if whack writers were really my son man?/ Would I shun them too? Diss them dismiss them run them too?/ It's strange, I think I need a nun/ Feelin punished yet my whole rap is a Big Pun.../ Diss me for my rhyme scheme criticism so stinky/ These niggas pretendin they can outhink me/ It's funny cuz i'll soon have more cream than a twinkie/ Call me a whack rapper but they're biased and when they're blinking/ I'm gone, I vanish soon i'll be with the 'outlandish' while they bandish and i'll be laughin cuz the shit I spit is vantage... Why are we even fighting? I don't consider my hardest shit even my real writing....I love this rap shit it takes a mind and convictions, but really my talent lies in writing that fiction...so how do I go about people's jurisdictions? I guess I remain stupid and ignorant, sit back and light another ciggerette...maybe to calm the stress, I never smoked i'm so confused but I guess it's for the best... Last edited by TheMadWriter; 04-18-2009 at 09:10 PM. |
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