Rawdknee & TheMadWriter - Collaborate on that Hoe

RodKnee · 04-16-2009, 04:29 AM

[Rawdknee]
AWWW It's Rodknee and Madwriter gunna shove this shit inside her
put it in her throat, she blows so much i call her the pied piper,
she's a biter but i like her, burning rubber like a biker,
finish up then send off with her bag like a hiker,
Freestyler, got more fur on my ass than a tiger
Drench pigeons so much you can call me a hydrant
Got an army of 75 bollocks, you can call me the sergeant
or Corporal Rawdknee, whichever fits better
By the time you've finished thinking about it the pigeons getting wetter.
I hide up in the tree's then I pounce on silly hoes
Pound on them bastards til there booty focking glows
RED! you heard what rawdknee said,
madwriter coming through to smack ho in the Head

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH

[TheMadWriter]
I smack hos on the head then roll up another burner/
A money earner smackin dykes like he was Ike Turner/
A Chris Brown that likes to beat wives and then befriend em/
A Charles Manson displayin homicidal fightin symptoms/
Who likes to diss whack rappers turn around and commend em/
Who'll make em cringe their face like bad cases of down syndrome/
A crazy son of a bitch snappin necks while grabbin checks/
Who'll leave your wife a leakin bleedin piece of crap-and-mess/
Obsessed killer sittin in your yard while now undressed/
Chasin your wife around the kitchen knives stuck in his chest/
Gunshots up in his head, a fucker covered in blood/
And you wonder why they say Writer's still a sucker for love/
Come up to bitches covered in mud with intestines out of my butt/
With my brain stem out my eye and my hands smothered in drugs/
Sayin hi to the mother of sluts while I cover her brother in guts/
Watchin him scream for life say please but he's covered in cuts/
With one on his throat and his body trapped in a boat/
Rowin to sea but it turns over and now his dead bodies afloat.../
Come up with a knife in my head don't Oh-My-God me/
Fuck it, bitch come suck it, it's Mad Writer and Rodknee.....
BIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIITCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCHHHHHH!!!!

Aw yeah, don't fock with us!!

Combustion · 04-16-2009, 05:02 AM

both of u niggas is wack
dont make tracks
cuz every statement u make is a lie
non fact
this my field, and Im da quaterback
and yall getting beat, call yall cornerbacks
I brought the summer back when it got too cold
they said that it got so cold earth bout to explode
i am the buisness so niggas get with it
if u aint with it, then your bitch ass with out it
and u can't be what it is so what it is u cant be
I'm on another level, u a counter im a pantry
and all u niggas if foul like karl landry

RodKnee · 04-16-2009, 05:20 AM

why the fuck would you call yourself a pantry

YoungJ · 04-16-2009, 11:37 AM

lol..........

Threyev · 04-16-2009, 03:18 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Combustion

both of u niggas is wack
dont make tracks
cuz every statement u make is a lie
non fact
this my field, and Im da quaterback
and yall getting beat, call yall cornerbacks
I brought the summer back when it got too cold
they said that it got so cold earth bout to explode
i am the buisness so niggas get with it
if u aint with it, then your bitch ass with out it
and u can't be what it is so what it is u cant be
I'm on another level, u a counter im a pantry
and all u niggas if foul like karl landry

Hahahahahahaha damn you're ass.

J~Souljah · 04-16-2009, 09:25 PM

combustion...you suck

oh and the two collabin....you both suck

so yall are like the holy trinity of wackness

TheMadWriter · 04-16-2009, 09:29 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by J~Souljah

combustion...you suck

oh and the two collabin....you both suck

so yall are like the holy trinity of wackness

Nigga you ain't even funny, shouldn't you be off pretendin to be people's moms and shit? Fuck outta here queer ass.

And stop catchin feelings cuz you look stupid when you try to be cool, it's not my fault I shit on you when you hate.

J~Souljah · 04-16-2009, 09:31 PM

^^^and your verse didnt get any better after you typed that

well done

TheMadWriter · 04-16-2009, 10:24 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by J~Souljah

^^^and your verse didnt get any better after you typed that

well done

Neither did your criticizing it redeem your idiocy. You can leave this thread now.

J~Souljah · 04-16-2009, 10:38 PM

well...your wording is horrible...i believe you meant "redeem your intelligence"...do redeem my idiocy would be to gain it back....which would be giving me a slight compliment by saying i was intelligent @ some point...so i believe u would like for me to retain that idiocy...then it could be a proper insult

but ehhh....i might do this text thing....out of boredom...idk half of these "hhb freshman" that post these days

eh...just work on ya lines...show some improvement and i'll have no room to "hate"

TheMadWriter · 04-16-2009, 10:45 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by J~Souljah

well...your wording is horrible...i believe you meant "redeem your intelligence"...do redeem my idiocy would be to gain it back....which would be giving me a slight compliment by saying i was intelligent @ some point...so i believe u would like for me to retain that idiocy...then it could be a proper insult

but ehhh....i might do this text thing....out of boredom...idk half of these "hhb freshman" that post these days

eh...just work on ya lines...show some improvement and i'll have no room to "hate"

I don't need to improve shit. And by redeem your idiocy I mean make up for it, you know, like the seventh definition of redeem on dictionary.reference.com?

Don't question my intelligence, or my writing, unless you have a good ass reason for doing so aside from a pointless bias and a knack for wanting to get on my bad side. k? K.

J~Souljah · 04-16-2009, 10:57 PM

^^^and once again...that implies that i was lacking that "idiocy" at one point or another...either way you used the word wrong

no need to debate it

it's plenty of reasons why i dont like your writing

one...you lack multies...your vocab is sub-par...your metaphors/punchlines are lack luster/played..."smack dykes like Ike turner"

so shall i go into more detail or will you take it for what it is?

Reddi Ree · 04-16-2009, 11:06 PM

yall fuckin suck.........

TheMadWriter · 04-17-2009, 12:43 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by J~Souljah

^^^and once again...that implies that i was lacking that "idiocy" at one point or another...either way you used the word wrong

no need to debate it

it's plenty of reasons why i dont like your writing

one...you lack multies...your vocab is sub-par...your metaphors/punchlines are lack luster/played..."smack dykes like Ike turner"

so shall i go into more detail or will you take it for what it is?

How do I lack multies? I have multies I just don't put christmas lights around them and change the colors with bolded quotation marks. Sue me.

Nothing implies you were 'lacking' anything. If I say your criticizing this drop didn't make amends for your idiocy earlier it doesn't imply you lacked idiocy at some point dumbass, it implies that coming on my threads doesn't make up for your being an idiot. It doesn't imply you lacked shit, implies you had it. Wtf are you even arguing for? You already lost.

J~Souljah · 04-17-2009, 12:59 AM

^^^your multies are sub-par...they are mediocre...and you have too little of them...no inner rhymes...your rhyme scheme is horribly simplistic

need more detail?

TheMadWriter · 04-17-2009, 03:20 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by J~Souljah

^^^your multies are sub-par...they are mediocre...and you have too little of them...no inner rhymes...your rhyme scheme is horribly simplistic

need more detail?

Just keep pickin at random shit.

Get the fuck outta this thread, you don't belong here. Lmao

J~Souljah · 04-17-2009, 05:09 PM

i didnt know that criticizing your rhymes in a thread that you posted a verse was random

.......makes sense

TheMadWriter · 04-17-2009, 06:49 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by J~Souljah

i didnt know that criticizing your rhymes in a thread that you posted a verse was random

.......makes sense

Maybe i'd show you respect if you didn't come here to purposely toss out negative shit. Unfortunately it's become increasingly obvious that it's the reason you're here.

J~Souljah · 04-17-2009, 07:21 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Reddi Ree

yall fuckin suck.........

youngking187 · 04-17-2009, 08:52 PM

shit waz wack..
keep practicing though..
*looks at MI's avy*
*Dies*

04-16-2009, 04:29 AM	#1
RodKnee Dr. Pussy Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Catsville Posts: 2,145 Repped: 714 Repped 364 Times in 202 Posts Neg Reps: 73 Neg Repped at 28 Times in 25 Posts	Rawdknee & TheMadWriter - Collaborate on that Hoe Rawdknee & TheMadWriter - Collaborate on that Hoe [Rawdknee] AWWW It's Rodknee and Madwriter gunna shove this shit inside her put it in her throat, she blows so much i call her the pied piper, she's a biter but i like her, burning rubber like a biker, finish up then send off with her bag like a hiker, Freestyler, got more fur on my ass than a tiger Drench pigeons so much you can call me a hydrant Got an army of 75 bollocks, you can call me the sergeant or Corporal Rawdknee, whichever fits better By the time you've finished thinking about it the pigeons getting wetter. I hide up in the tree's then I pounce on silly hoes Pound on them bastards til there booty focking glows RED! you heard what rawdknee said, madwriter coming through to smack ho in the Head OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH [TheMadWriter] I smack hos on the head then roll up another burner/ A money earner smackin dykes like he was Ike Turner/ A Chris Brown that likes to beat wives and then befriend em/ A Charles Manson displayin homicidal fightin symptoms/ Who likes to diss whack rappers turn around and commend em/ Who'll make em cringe their face like bad cases of down syndrome/ A crazy son of a bitch snappin necks while grabbin checks/ Who'll leave your wife a leakin bleedin piece of crap-and-mess/ Obsessed killer sittin in your yard while now undressed/ Chasin your wife around the kitchen knives stuck in his chest/ Gunshots up in his head, a fucker covered in blood/ And you wonder why they say Writer's still a sucker for love/ Come up to bitches covered in mud with intestines out of my butt/ With my brain stem out my eye and my hands smothered in drugs/ Sayin hi to the mother of sluts while I cover her brother in guts/ Watchin him scream for life say please but he's covered in cuts/ With one on his throat and his body trapped in a boat/ Rowin to sea but it turns over and now his dead bodies afloat.../ Come up with a knife in my head don't Oh-My-God me/ Fuck it, bitch come suck it, it's Mad Writer and Rodknee..... BIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIITCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCHHHHHH!!!! Aw yeah, don't fock with us!! __________________ Put me in you

04-16-2009, 05:20 AM	#3
RodKnee Dr. Pussy Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Catsville Posts: 2,145 Repped: 714 Repped 364 Times in 202 Posts Neg Reps: 73 Neg Repped at 28 Times in 25 Posts	why the fuck would you call yourself a pantry __________________ Put me in you

04-16-2009, 10:57 PM	#12
J~Souljah Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Baltimore, Maryland Posts: 1,826 Repped: 11 Repped 97 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 22 Times in 17 Posts	^^^and once again...that implies that i was lacking that "idiocy" at one point or another...either way you used the word wrong no need to debate it it's plenty of reasons why i dont like your writing one...you lack multies...your vocab is sub-par...your metaphors/punchlines are lack luster/played..."smack dykes like Ike turner" so shall i go into more detail or will you take it for what it is? Last edited by J~Souljah; 04-16-2009 at 11:21 PM.

04-16-2009, 11:06 PM	#13
Reddi Ree Everybody'z Favorite Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: C-M-D, Nu Jerzey Posts: 1,000 Repped: 230 Repped 29 Times in 24 Posts Neg Reps: 3 Neg Repped at 9 Times in 4 Posts	yall fuckin suck......... __________________ myspace.com/reeyaboy

04-17-2009, 08:52 PM	#20
youngking187 ***** IM AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 2,522 Repped: 305 Repped 607 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 12 Times in 11 Posts	shit waz wack.. keep practicing though.. looks at MI's avy Dies __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

04-16-2009, 05:02 AM	#2
Combustion Im da best Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: LA Posts: 643 Repped: 2 Repped 105 Times in 72 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 183 Times in 64 Posts	both of u niggas is wack dont make tracks cuz every statement u make is a lie non fact this my field, and Im da quaterback and yall getting beat, call yall cornerbacks I brought the summer back when it got too cold they said that it got so cold earth bout to explode i am the buisness so niggas get with it if u aint with it, then your bitch ass with out it and u can't be what it is so what it is u cant be I'm on another level, u a counter im a pantry and all u niggas if foul like karl landry

04-16-2009, 11:37 AM	#4
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	lol..........

04-16-2009, 09:25 PM	#6
J~Souljah Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Baltimore, Maryland Posts: 1,826 Repped: 11 Repped 97 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 22 Times in 17 Posts	combustion...you suck oh and the two collabin....you both suck so yall are like the holy trinity of wackness

04-16-2009, 09:31 PM	#8
J~Souljah Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Baltimore, Maryland Posts: 1,826 Repped: 11 Repped 97 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 22 Times in 17 Posts	^^^and your verse didnt get any better after you typed that well done

04-16-2009, 10:38 PM	#10
J~Souljah Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Baltimore, Maryland Posts: 1,826 Repped: 11 Repped 97 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 22 Times in 17 Posts	well...your wording is horrible...i believe you meant "redeem your intelligence"...do redeem my idiocy would be to gain it back....which would be giving me a slight compliment by saying i was intelligent @ some point...so i believe u would like for me to retain that idiocy...then it could be a proper insult but ehhh....i might do this text thing....out of boredom...idk half of these "hhb freshman" that post these days eh...just work on ya lines...show some improvement and i'll have no room to "hate"

04-17-2009, 12:59 AM	#15
J~Souljah Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Baltimore, Maryland Posts: 1,826 Repped: 11 Repped 97 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 22 Times in 17 Posts	^^^your multies are sub-par...they are mediocre...and you have too little of them...no inner rhymes...your rhyme scheme is horribly simplistic need more detail?

04-17-2009, 05:09 PM	#17
J~Souljah Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Baltimore, Maryland Posts: 1,826 Repped: 11 Repped 97 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 22 Times in 17 Posts	i didnt know that criticizing your rhymes in a thread that you posted a verse was random .......makes sense

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