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Old 04-10-2009, 03:06 PM   #1
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SHo Gun Get At Me Lil Nigga

My Name is Combustion, Explosion, Erruption
Mind Is Corrupted, fuck It I'm Blunted
But today I wanna talk to yall about a little hoe
She claim she got a gun but does she ever Show?(Where Ya Lines At Nigga"
SHe all up in the threads talking shit like she got flow
But when's the last time I even seen one of your posts
Yeah U ain't even american buy yourself shades and a coat
and keep trying to to promote yourself as some1 who knows
You ain't shit, you a fag, every post you make makes u sound sad
I'm getting at you your career is in a mcdonalds bag
I get money, and i don't need to be super lyrical to murk you
Shit, it's that easy he don't need to miracle to hurt you
I could use the same scheme
cuz in real life your foreign ass would see my face and scream
and everyone can see I'm going hard
your face is my jeans, no fucking homo u know what I mean
I'm bout to cream, only time u fuck bitches is when you dream!
Don't diss plex cause he consistent and don't rap about shit
you probably yapped more than rapped, go sap about it bitch
Don't nobody address this clown, she got no life
check all her posts, she's so negative but she plays "so bright"
Nigga U ain't smart, u probably some depressed nerd
Smoke some cess, herb ,do something other than typing up text nerd
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Old 04-10-2009, 05:20 PM   #2
 
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This is pretty good I guess. You took a few good shots in there, but a lot of the lines were forced and the first two were recycled. Still, solid drop. Stay up.
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Old 04-10-2009, 07:09 PM   #3
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Yeah U ain't even american buy yourself shades and a coat


wtf? looooooooool
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Old 04-10-2009, 07:13 PM   #4
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Yeah U ain't even american buy yourself shades and a coat


wtf? looooooooool
hahahahahah
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Old 04-10-2009, 10:34 PM   #5
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This made me laugh.....don't understand why you fightin Plex's battles tho???
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Old 04-11-2009, 01:18 AM   #6
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Old 04-11-2009, 07:19 PM   #7
 
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SHe all up in the threads talking shit like she got flow
But when's the last time I even seen one of your posts
You assert that I'm "all up in the threads talking shit" but you can't recall when you last seen a post of mine? Short term memory loss?

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Yeah U ain't even american buy yourself shades and a coat
and keep trying to to promote yourself as some1 who knows
"U ain't even american" - best insult ever.

"shades and a coat" - sunshine & cold? Are we just covering all weather conditions here in our shopping spree?


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You ain't shit, you a fag, every post you make makes u sound sad
I'm getting at you your career is in a mcdonalds bag
Is that because my "career" is so toy? Nah? Because it's double cheesy? Because it's burger'y goodness? Salty?

No, I've got it. My "career" is filled with ludicrous pretensions of nutritional value?

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I get money, and i don't need to be super lyrical to murk you
Shit, it's that easy he don't need to miracle to hurt you
You're right. He - you, yes? - would be completely overcompensating if he "miracled".

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I could use the same scheme
cuz in real life your foreign ass would see my face and scream
Did you just call yourself disgusting/horrifying to the eye??

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and everyone can see I'm going hard
your face is my jeans, no fucking homo u know what I mean
Homosexual introduction + "going hard" + "your face is my jeans".

Unfortunately I think I do "know" what you mean.

When you asked me to buy "shades and a coat", you really didn't want me to wear anything else, did you?

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I'm bout to cream, only time u fuck bitches is when you dream!
Don't diss plex cause he consistent and don't rap about shit
"I'm bout to cream" - rofl. I really hope this is one of those semi-funny aliases.


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Don't nobody address this clown, she got no life
check all her posts, she's so negative but she plays "so bright"
Yeah, "don't nobody address this clown"...he's got this. He doesn't need "to miracle" to hurt me. My "career" is already "in a mcdonalds bag".

The punchline just barely makes sense. It might have been salvageable if you had tightened that up a bit. Tough break.

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Nigga U ain't smart, u probably some depressed nerd
Smoke some cess, herb ,do something other than typing up text nerd
I really am smart. Honest. Oh golly, I'm a real boy!

Man that nigga "lil Pinocchio" is hilarious.

But you're not.

I win. Again.
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Old 04-12-2009, 12:09 PM   #8
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lmao@ admitting ur a she by responding to every bar like i knew u would u fucking bitch


gg i win son
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Old 04-16-2009, 05:23 AM   #9
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My Name is Combustion, Explosion, Erruption
Is that your first, middle and last name?
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