Combustion

man I use to wake up every morning
feeling horny
but now I get pussy by the door ring
don't even care about bitches no more they all whoring
Your raps are spoiled, they been out too long
New material from me is harsh like hits from a new Bong
This hip hop, what you on is shit rock
So when U decide to keep it real change ya shift ock
cuz we don't reconcile our differences in this sport
we manuever with gats like mvp with rock on the court
It's the kid, who is he? he's the realest
who's gonna top this flow? ain't no one near-him
They all fear him but they hear him
he black balls the spirit, battle him ur death is in mirror
I end careers
like an assistant manager firing someone for the boss
Nigga U ain't Rick, U ain't even Ross
battling combustion results in your biggest loss
don't fuck with me, in order to beat me u pay the biggest cost!

Blizzy

OK....it flowed well but any multi's you used seemed to be forced....metaphors used as well were poor but you got potential if you take a little longer to write your material....stay up

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