What I think is real

thastickiesteva · 04-08-2009, 01:14 PM

a young king in his youth is more like made man
This year i'm Kobe Bryant in 2007 with a new game plan
I'm staring out my window looking at the future
where I'm going, is not where I'm use too
where i belong, is not the usual
Sitting here my life's on hold but time keeps moving
as we waste time smoking blunts daily, time we losing
what I want out of life, is nothing more lavish
I pray to god asking him if he can guide in the direction to where I'll have it
my plates full of grease that's why My face full of grief
real talk, they telling me i need a new place just to eat
I don't suffer or sob from defeat, my attitude is grade A like USDA meat
I'm approved from the realist, the goons be my dealers
selling me the profit I need in order to move away from these stealers
what if I didn't go left, and I went right
hip hop glory wouldn't be in my sight
but cocaine corey would be on my site
asking me for a dime for nine, i told him i might
we've come a long way from hustling in the hall way
and we know 17.5 is too much, so we head to CALI fuck what Yall Say

Threyev · 04-08-2009, 04:22 PM

Hm... The flow is kinda weird, going from real fast at points to incredibly slow, and it's pretty hard to imagine this over a beat. I like some of the concepts of your punches--like the Kobe line--but the execution is flawed and a lot of the finishes are really forced. This was a good effort, but it's missing something. Keep up; you got mad potential.

thastickiesteva · 04-08-2009, 09:17 PM

good lookz on the feed

04-08-2009, 01:14 PM	#1
thastickiesteva Banned Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Canoga park Posts: 666 Repped: 3 Repped 96 Times in 71 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 99 Times in 66 Posts	What I think is real What I think is real a young king in his youth is more like made man This year i'm Kobe Bryant in 2007 with a new game plan I'm staring out my window looking at the future where I'm going, is not where I'm use too where i belong, is not the usual Sitting here my life's on hold but time keeps moving as we waste time smoking blunts daily, time we losing what I want out of life, is nothing more lavish I pray to god asking him if he can guide in the direction to where I'll have it my plates full of grease that's why My face full of grief real talk, they telling me i need a new place just to eat I don't suffer or sob from defeat, my attitude is grade A like USDA meat I'm approved from the realist, the goons be my dealers selling me the profit I need in order to move away from these stealers what if I didn't go left, and I went right hip hop glory wouldn't be in my sight but cocaine corey would be on my site asking me for a dime for nine, i told him i might we've come a long way from hustling in the hall way and we know 17.5 is too much, so we head to CALI fuck what Yall Say

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04-08-2009, 04:22 PM	#2
Threyev Join Date: May 2006 Location: The Bronx Posts: 553 Repped: 82 Repped 46 Times in 29 Posts Neg Reps: 3 Neg Repped at 5 Times in 5 Posts	Hm... The flow is kinda weird, going from real fast at points to incredibly slow, and it's pretty hard to imagine this over a beat. I like some of the concepts of your punches--like the Kobe line--but the execution is flawed and a lot of the finishes are really forced. This was a good effort, but it's missing something. Keep up; you got mad potential.

04-08-2009, 09:17 PM	#3
thastickiesteva Banned Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Canoga park Posts: 666 Repped: 3 Repped 96 Times in 71 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 99 Times in 66 Posts	good lookz on the feed