Hip Hop Exercise

YoungJ · 04-07-2009, 05:42 PM

arrogance is evil hence the devilish grin
find myself above the law with intelligence sentencing
conflict enters him and exits a beast
I aint tryn'a eat unless its a feast
definite heat when it come to perfectin a piece
they'll soon understand like its a lesson to teach
hate all you want, you dont know me yet
if you feelin that you smooth as this show me it
now a days any collab sent my way im gon reject
the statement his "flow the bests" is quite appropriate
my words are war, yall couldn't survive the start
look beyond the wise remarks and inside the art
though feelings scattered like a divided heart
i still kill em one by one like nicotine and provide the spark
they style i dislike while i walk miles in nikes
Violent fights....so bright my rivals midnight
No final invites, the crew is the few true
Cant see I'm on point til I shoot ya pupils
Bulls eye..no wonder why this game is full of lies
You fucked wit that many gun fights by now you would've died

thastickiesteva · 04-07-2009, 05:46 PM

tight shit. keep it proper. peace

Threyev · 04-08-2009, 04:24 PM

This was nice. It started off kind of slow, and some of the lines were forced or somewhat nonsensical, but you really hit your stride by the end.

Quote:

definite heat when it come to perfectin a piece
they'll soon understand like its a lesson to teach

That was my favorite line, good shit.

All in all, this is a nice drop, just maybe work on the beginning a little bit. All in all, dope shit though. Good shit.

DXavier23 · 04-09-2009, 10:18 PM

find myself above the law with intelligence sentencing

though feelings scattered like a divided heart
i still kill em one by one like nicotine and provide the spark

- I liked these lines a lot. I agree with khoop about the forced lines but i think overall the piece was strong. good work

Blizzy · 04-09-2009, 10:39 PM

This is different to what i see from you in the audio Prov....I prefer this....had some clever wordplay and flowed well....stay up

04-07-2009, 05:42 PM	#1
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	Hip Hop Exercise Hip Hop Exercise arrogance is evil hence the devilish grin find myself above the law with intelligence sentencing conflict enters him and exits a beast I aint tryn'a eat unless its a feast definite heat when it come to perfectin a piece they'll soon understand like its a lesson to teach hate all you want, you dont know me yet if you feelin that you smooth as this show me it now a days any collab sent my way im gon reject the statement his "flow the bests" is quite appropriate my words are war, yall couldn't survive the start look beyond the wise remarks and inside the art though feelings scattered like a divided heart i still kill em one by one like nicotine and provide the spark they style i dislike while i walk miles in nikes Violent fights....so bright my rivals midnight No final invites, the crew is the few true Cant see I'm on point til I shoot ya pupils Bulls eye..no wonder why this game is full of lies You fucked wit that many gun fights by now you would've died

04-09-2009, 10:18 PM	#4
DXavier23 ----------DX------------- Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: NYC Posts: 1,765 Repped: 192 Repped 1,682 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 1 Post	find myself above the law with intelligence sentencing though feelings scattered like a divided heart i still kill em one by one like nicotine and provide the spark - I liked these lines a lot. I agree with khoop about the forced lines but i think overall the piece was strong. good work __________________ So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in

04-09-2009, 10:39 PM	#5
Blizzy Wordsmith Join Date: May 2008 Location: In Battlefield's Posts: 3,359 Repped: 687 Repped 345 Times in 158 Posts Neg Reps: 25 Neg Repped at 26 Times in 25 Posts	This is different to what i see from you in the audio Prov....I prefer this....had some clever wordplay and flowed well....stay up __________________ MY MUSIC CHECK IT OUT myspace.com/ttpbloodshot

Thread Tools
Show Printable Version Email this Page
Display Modes
Linear Mode Switch to Hybrid Mode Switch to Threaded Mode

04-07-2009, 05:46 PM	#2
thastickiesteva Banned Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Canoga park Posts: 666 Repped: 3 Repped 96 Times in 71 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 99 Times in 66 Posts	tight shit. keep it proper. peace