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thastickiesteva · 04-07-2009, 05:30 PM

I'm still getting high.....
still getting by
who the fuck is u to judge me?
i've been a dangerous asset since my city was in a riot
now I'm living the good life, selling gold to the pirates
i'm irrate but more irritated than a knitch i can't reach
I'm someone who doesn't fall for a damn speech
actions talk loud as words and broken promises break hearts
we expanding like a state park I'm tired of this new age, it's fake art
i don't listen to o g.s who the sip the o.e
i only listen to myself i wanna make my own glory
this is another chapter of my story
i'm bout to finish high school and oddly i'm feeling bad
cuz i would of done more if i could of
I miss the days of 9th grade feeling her up behind the classroom
when the world ends Ill be getting my dick sucked under the last moon
I was left in the cold with wounds exposed, they left me to die
they wanted me to fade away in the sky, cause they felt I was a lie
but i kept it real as any other who tried, now closing my eyes
now the light flashes and I memorize all the high lights instead of lies
when you living it up, they want you giving it up
so when you on top of the world u better listen up
cuz the prince is as brave as the king because of his hunger
and he's passed planning as a result of your success he has your number
and when he decides to call it thats when your empire crumbles
motherfucker stay humble cuz rap is wrestling it's set up like a royal rumble
by the CEOS and the managers who manage to set artists up to battle deepest foes
i got the cleanest clothes, the meanest hoes who won't only cut ya dick they'll clean your nose

Threyev · 04-07-2009, 06:47 PM

Flow is all over the place on this one, and some of the lines are forced, but overall this is pretty good. Nicely done.

04-07-2009, 05:30 PM	#1
thastickiesteva Banned Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Canoga park Posts: 666 Repped: 3 Repped 96 Times in 71 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 99 Times in 66 Posts	cold cold I'm still getting high..... still getting by who the fuck is u to judge me? i've been a dangerous asset since my city was in a riot now I'm living the good life, selling gold to the pirates i'm irrate but more irritated than a knitch i can't reach I'm someone who doesn't fall for a damn speech actions talk loud as words and broken promises break hearts we expanding like a state park I'm tired of this new age, it's fake art i don't listen to o g.s who the sip the o.e i only listen to myself i wanna make my own glory this is another chapter of my story i'm bout to finish high school and oddly i'm feeling bad cuz i would of done more if i could of I miss the days of 9th grade feeling her up behind the classroom when the world ends Ill be getting my dick sucked under the last moon I was left in the cold with wounds exposed, they left me to die they wanted me to fade away in the sky, cause they felt I was a lie but i kept it real as any other who tried, now closing my eyes now the light flashes and I memorize all the high lights instead of lies when you living it up, they want you giving it up so when you on top of the world u better listen up cuz the prince is as brave as the king because of his hunger and he's passed planning as a result of your success he has your number and when he decides to call it thats when your empire crumbles motherfucker stay humble cuz rap is wrestling it's set up like a royal rumble by the CEOS and the managers who manage to set artists up to battle deepest foes i got the cleanest clothes, the meanest hoes who won't only cut ya dick they'll clean your nose

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04-07-2009, 06:47 PM	#2
Threyev Join Date: May 2006 Location: The Bronx Posts: 553 Repped: 82 Repped 46 Times in 29 Posts Neg Reps: 3 Neg Repped at 5 Times in 5 Posts	Flow is all over the place on this one, and some of the lines are forced, but overall this is pretty good. Nicely done.