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Poetic Swagger
Join Date: Sep 2006
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Primetime preliminary shots, my show is the most watched
Pray for reign? Nah, it seems these peasants pray for my flow to stop Self-inflicted pain, yall suffer from drought season mentality "The water moves with him", no doubt, the only reason to challenge me But fuck your proposition, I crush any opposition Leave your life dismantled without as much as a pot to piss in Deadly medicine, too much of veteran to play games I don't respect you deep enough to begin to say names My status is Hall of Fame, most of yall is all the same Not soakin up true knowledge, only falling into flames I sell hope to poor minds then look to the Lord for re-up Mind deep enough to drown nuclear missles from North Korea I'm always being accused of dropping atomic bombs But I'm really the natural force that won't let any harm come Things just seems vicious cause I don't drop any wack shit Acts of terror is all they can compare my impact with
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"Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz Last edited by Komplex; 04-07-2009 at 02:04 PM. |
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| The Following User Repped to Komplex For This Useful Post: | GILoTINE (04-29-2009) |
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Young J
Join Date: Jul 2006
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I don't respect you deep enough to begin to say names
Shit is hot.. Closer is nice as fuck to... Self-inflicted pain, yall suffer from drought season mentality "The water moves with him", no doubt, the only reason to challenge me But fuck your proposition, I crush any opposition Leave your life dismantled without as much as a pot to piss in Good word choices...all that...rhyme structure was on point |
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Join Date: May 2006
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Damn this was hot. Got better and better as you went, and then the last 6 lines or so were just fire. Great concept, great execution.
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Poetic Swagger
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^lol, typical.
anyways..good looks on the feed.
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Join Date: Sep 2006
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another solid, consistent drop. I liked the references and the multis flowed well and were not forced. My only concern is that you may not be striving for true greatness lyrically. I mean, this is quality material and it would be wrong if i told u otherwise. But I feel like your capable of more. Idk i could be wrong, but thats just my take. I get in that mode all the time, where i just dont feel like stepping up my game (it goes beyond just text-rapping lol) but im telling you, as a man who respects what you do, that you could put out something on a whole nother level.
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So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in |
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Poetic Swagger
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I understand exactly what you mean. This basically came off like a "comfort zone" quick drop (albeit still very dope, lol). good looks X, appreciate the honesty.
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Join Date: May 2006
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"lol, typical." You're really, really, really not "dope". Nothing you've ever posted has been anything but almost mediocre - & I'd venture this extends to your entire writing history. That you've convinced yourself you are a writer at all is for the most part laughable, but also a tad disturbing. You weren't even top 5 on this site when I registered. You probably still aren't. That means you're horrible. |
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| The Following User Repped to Shogun For This Useful Post: | TheRealProtege (04-10-2009) |
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Poetic Swagger
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^Lmao@ your style of hate. It's very insidious yet clever that's why I must give you credit. You draw out your opinions and try to explain yourself in a profound manner to make what you're saying sound believable when at the end of the day you're no different than cats who just sit around postin in threads all day sayin "this shit is wack" and leavin it at that. It indicates to me that you think your comments out before you make them.......it also indicates to me that you have no life whatsoever. Not your fault though. Everybody can't be intellectually and socially gifted. I'll forgive you for having a suckish life and just not reply to your negative comments from here on. Thanks for taking to time read and leave feed though. :)
P.S.....as far as the "Top 5" comment.....for the past few years my name has come up in alot of "Top 5" threads in most people's posts. But seeing as that would hurt your argument, I can understand you purposely overlooking that.
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"Set up to be a loser but was made to be a winner If they paint Hip Hop I bet my face be in the picture If they wrote a Rap Bible bet my name be in the scriptures If shorty say I'm her Idol, bet her face be in my zipper"-Joell Ortiz Last edited by Komplex; 04-10-2009 at 06:52 PM. |
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Shogun isn't a fan of me either
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Join Date: May 2008
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^Shogun isn't a fan of anyone lol I'd love to see who his top 5 on here are...
Plex I gotta agree with DX on this....this drop just felt comfortable....it was good but lyrically you didn't do anythin like WHOA....stayed in the comfort zone.....had some good lines....I like the way you continue your rhyme scheme into the next bar without forcin it or goin off subject..... I sell hope to poor minds then look to the Lord for re-up Mind deep enough to drown nuclear missles from North Korea ^my favourite bar....stay up (I think you need to start leavin others feed tho
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You see, to you, if someone says "dope", that's the truth. And if someone says "wack", then that's just hating. The difference between me & the "cats" you mention, is that I've left more insightful & more exhaustive feedback than anyone else on this site, at varying times. I actually read what people post. That's why I can say you're horrible without a hint of "hate" about it. And newsflash dipshit: half the people that go "dooooope" didn't properly read what you wrote. Quote:
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Anyone who thinks you're anything but a poor writer has delusions of e-friendship or is just plain fucking stupid. You're horrifically banal. And despite your penchant for the word, you are definitely not "lyrical". The bubble couldn't last forever, beezy. Tough luck. |
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Poetic Swagger
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alllllllllright. thank you for your input sir. much appreciated. :)
uppin.
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Rorshak
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I co-sign with Shogun. You're probably the most overrated on this place; no disrespect, but it's true. People who say all your drops are 'dope' or '10/10' are just dickriding. And PB's right, you never leave others feedback on this place, you expect us to feed your drops and praise them as classics when they're clearly not.
Just my 2 cents.
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^^I gotta disagree about that. I thought his shit was genuinely dope, and said so. Why would you dickride somebody on the internet??
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no offense to komplex....but dudes be dickrydin da hell outta him....
lmaooooooo @ shogun...only time he/she post is to say something negative
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Join Date: Nov 2008
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i gota laugh about how people get mad cuz people dont rate their shit. ha ha ha, for real you if its dope it speaks for its self thats all there is man. No riddles if its hot then you preaty much wana throw in some imput strait up, well YO I tend to open my mouth to soon, or say shit with out doing all the research maybe i allready said this, but you komplex Im thinkin must be the baddest mutha fucker on here. dopest rhymes IMO, n all yall that are like " owww gilotines dick riden" i really dont give a shit im just givin credit where credit is due, yo n if you want to show me some of your raps i'll be happy to look at um, give some imput tell ya whats what, if it appeases to me then i'll let ya know, otherwise ima have to just stumble across your shit to read it n thats about as likely as tripin over a cordless, cuz i'm not on here much, anyways,
yo komplex that was dumb hott, strait 10/10 n yo my 10 outa 10's only come when i really think that shit deserves it, N yo when i see somthin thats a 9 or better i make sure to throw some rep your way. 1hunz |
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Everybody'z Favorite
Join Date: Feb 2006
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How da fuck can you call Komplex overrated.....Try typin some shit den compare it to his shit....we'll see if he still overrated....
Im mad as hell at da niggaz sayin he overrated too.....Who da fuck iz You??? (cept for ma bro Sparkz) n Shogun iz da funniest mufucka on here.....Point blank...cuz he really body niggaz career...i really read erhthing he type...LMAO and Reddi Ree iz da Greatest
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^^^^^Reddi, you are being such a dickrider
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lol...i aint mean it n a way as saying he's garbage...he dope...but i been here for 2 years...n the whole time i been here Plex was like da apple of most peoples eye............... or maybe im just a hater
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