(rap) North Korea Launches Rocket Over Japan

journalrhythm · 04-07-2009, 04:06 AM

back in '06 the UN blew the whistle
and decided any shot was cool except missiles
Pyongyang tends to forget what was said
and recently threw a missile right over Japan's head

and Japan called a timeout to avoid fighting
Obama came in and said "rules must be binding"
China and Russia said "you might be right
but that wasn't a missile, that was just a satellite"

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pT2qkITBHaE

Threyev · 04-07-2009, 04:49 PM

Hm... Decent idea I guess, but some pretty poor execution. First it's only 8 lines, and it's just reporting the news. It has nothing to do with you personally, and it also was too basic for your purpose. This was weak overall. Stay up though

04-07-2009, 04:06 AM	#1
journalrhythm Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: USA Posts: 4 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	(rap) North Korea Launches Rocket Over Japan (rap) North Korea Launches Rocket Over Japan back in '06 the UN blew the whistle and decided any shot was cool except missiles Pyongyang tends to forget what was said and recently threw a missile right over Japan's head and Japan called a timeout to avoid fighting Obama came in and said "rules must be binding" China and Russia said "you might be right but that wasn't a missile, that was just a satellite" http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pT2qkITBHaE

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04-07-2009, 04:49 PM	#2
Threyev Join Date: May 2006 Location: The Bronx Posts: 553 Repped: 82 Repped 46 Times in 29 Posts Neg Reps: 3 Neg Repped at 5 Times in 5 Posts	Hm... Decent idea I guess, but some pretty poor execution. First it's only 8 lines, and it's just reporting the news. It has nothing to do with you personally, and it also was too basic for your purpose. This was weak overall. Stay up though