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Old 04-03-2009, 10:09 AM   #1
 
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I'm the king of the streets got a flock of crazy boppers
i get away with sellin crack because of these lazy coppers
these lyrics will slay or stop ya because i'm way hotter
yall thank me for hot rhymes I just reply "de nada"
i dont fuck with fakes or floppers who never gave props ta
a real nigga such as me for that i should straight pop ya
Vending machine style i keep a full supply of coke
plus i'm a great rapper all my lines is dope
You ain't got an ounce of coke or an ounce of flow (lyin wack ass punchline rapper)
wanna be like Jin (gin) bitch? then i'mma down ya slow
ridin through ya block son i found ya hoe
went behind ya house then i told her "down you go"
throne taker bone breaker niggas can't hang
Guns? you got none shit you niggas don't bang
i spit that street shit kid it's not a secret
Feds ask you bout me bitch you didn't see shit

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Old 04-03-2009, 03:26 PM   #2
 
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This is decent. A lot of the metaphors and lines were forced/tired, but some of it was dope.
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