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| Freestyles Spit some hot flows in here...show all the other members what you are made of! |
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Join Date: May 2006
Location: The Bronx
Posts: 553
Repped: 82
Repped 46 Times in 29 Posts
Neg Reps: 3
Neg Repped at 5 Times in 5 Posts
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15-minute drop. Props on any feed.
Let me see if I can quickly rip it properly As I watch these wanna bees try to sip it sloppily You can take my feet out from under me, you aint droppin me You could take the seed out of the weed, but these hypotheses Bud more knowledge into the minds of our generation Than the right-wing propaganda being fed to the nation A space station bein payed for by replubican racists Instead of feedin the poor poverty ridden children's faces Cuz let's face it, the mind of racist is too basic If it gets em the money n power roll up the hood and lace it Cocaine litters the streets of all the American ghettos Along with heroin, laced bud, g-strings and stilettos A future decided by the government leavin the odds tipped An emotional mosh pit that you could fuck up a squad with I was lucky enough to escape the tar pits of the mental prison But some feel there's no reason to even really be living See that's what that place does when you grow up in it It makes you feel real good when you can blow up in it Leave the streets infested with my words that lace the youth's mind With sick rhymes that'll infect the authority in no time The majority will show my skills to the deaf dumb and blind So I can bring a revolution apon this country and revise Cuz revision is all we need for this ethnic bullshit division Races unite, faces blend fight for what's right cuz it's making me sickened the people gettin' fucked like a prostitute about to be murdered she blew the dude, got came on, as she was choked no one heard her |
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Wordsmith
Join Date: May 2008
Location: In Battlefield's
Posts: 3,359
Repped: 687
Repped 345 Times in 158 Posts
Neg Reps: 25
Neg Repped at 25 Times in 24 Posts
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Overall good read....You seem to have a good knowledge on whats going on around you which I see influences your material. Flow started well but got iffy towards the end as you tried to cram to much in. Multi's is the same, got weaker as the verse went on. But with that aside this was a dope drop....stay up
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