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Old 03-31-2009, 04:17 PM   #1
 
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Nation's Dismay

15-minute drop. Props on any feed.

Let me see if I can quickly rip it properly
As I watch these wanna bees try to sip it sloppily
You can take my feet out from under me, you aint droppin me
You could take the seed out of the weed, but these hypotheses
Bud more knowledge into the minds of our generation
Than the right-wing propaganda being fed to the nation
A space station bein payed for by replubican racists
Instead of feedin the poor poverty ridden children's faces
Cuz let's face it, the mind of racist is too basic
If it gets em the money n power roll up the hood and lace it
Cocaine litters the streets of all the American ghettos
Along with heroin, laced bud, g-strings and stilettos
A future decided by the government leavin the odds tipped
An emotional mosh pit that you could fuck up a squad with
I was lucky enough to escape the tar pits of the mental prison
But some feel there's no reason to even really be living
See that's what that place does when you grow up in it
It makes you feel real good when you can blow up in it
Leave the streets infested with my words that lace the youth's mind
With sick rhymes that'll infect the authority in no time
The majority will show my skills to the deaf dumb and blind
So I can bring a revolution apon this country and revise
Cuz revision is all we need for this ethnic bullshit division
Races unite, faces blend fight for what's right cuz it's making me sickened
the people gettin' fucked like a prostitute about to be murdered
she blew the dude, got came on, as she was choked no one heard her
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Old 03-31-2009, 04:36 PM   #2
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Overall good read....You seem to have a good knowledge on whats going on around you which I see influences your material. Flow started well but got iffy towards the end as you tried to cram to much in. Multi's is the same, got weaker as the verse went on. But with that aside this was a dope drop....stay up
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