'This Board Went Down Hill'

Bunny_Rabbit · 03-29-2009, 02:48 AM

All these wack trash text rappers on here.................

Your persona is a stupid title/ I'll make you lose your vitals//
my music hides inside your mind till your medulla spirals//
Im 'dropping verses' like I 'threw a bible'//
and 'dressed to kill' so everytime I look in a mirror it's 'suicidal'//
I influence students with exclusive music//
Im a tiger behind these bars, on some San Francisco zoo shit//
my fascinatin' sentences are agitatin' menaces//
Im a captivatin' nemisis with imagination limitless//
your existence is diminished with fabricated innocence//
I'll activate the gauge and then evacuate the premises//
Im practical with intergalactical battle rap tacticals//
compatible and magical enough to snap clavicles//
lyrical pterodactyl that'll leave you scared to battle//
dress you in a pair of shackles then persist to tear your axial//
an historical metaphorical oracle that's oratorical//
for deportable mortals with allegoric portables//
and I'll come forth to warn a wussie//
It's like you came from a 'domestic cats womb', you were 'born a pussy'//
send your spirit in the atmosphere cuz I got straps in here//
like 'gay auditoriums' I stay 'clappin' queers'//
you'll get hacked with shears when I bring massive fear//
and shoot your ass 'Underground' like your rap career//

Blizzy · 03-29-2009, 09:12 AM

and 'dressed to kill' so everytime I look in a mirror it's 'suicidal'//

^dope line but how do we know your not bitin anymore? i couldn't see anythin so i'll say well done on this piece.....

Bunny_Rabbit · 03-29-2009, 03:07 PM

Props Blizzy..........uppin this

Threyev · 03-29-2009, 04:01 PM

Dope if it's yours. Can't really offer any suggestions. Good shit.

Bunny_Rabbit · 03-29-2009, 04:15 PM

^^^^Thanks man.........

Lil Brizzle · 03-30-2009, 03:55 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Bunny_Rabbit

Im 'dropping verses' like I 'threw a bible'//
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u recycled that line from another drop.....

but apart from that.....great punches.......good wordplay and multies were on point too....but the flow may be off by a couple of syllables if u spit it....still decent though....

8/10

Bunny_Rabbit · 03-30-2009, 08:01 PM

^^^Thanks for the feed..........Uppin this shit

DXavier23 · 03-30-2009, 08:35 PM

a bunch of hot bars in here. I liked the wordplay throughout; it made it interesting to read.

Im 'dropping verses' like I 'threw a bible'//
and 'dressed to kill' so everytime I look in a mirror it's 'suicidal'//

-DOPE

Rhyme scheme was good, but at least 3 punches in here were very forced. Stay up tho.

Bunny_Rabbit · 03-31-2009, 01:42 AM

Much respect for the feed, DX. And fuck you Unbreakable, lol.........punk ass bitch.

Bunny_Rabbit · 04-01-2009, 06:24 PM

Lol, shit........no replies??? Uppin this........

03-29-2009, 02:48 AM	#1
Bunny_Rabbit Rorshak Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: The Tangent Universe Posts: 886 Repped: 44 Repped 118 Times in 53 Posts Neg Reps: 52 Neg Repped at 59 Times in 54 Posts	'This Board Went Down Hill' 'This Board Went Down Hill' All these wack trash text rappers on here................. Your persona is a stupid title/ I'll make you lose your vitals// my music hides inside your mind till your medulla spirals// Im 'dropping verses' like I 'threw a bible'// and 'dressed to kill' so everytime I look in a mirror it's 'suicidal'// I influence students with exclusive music// Im a tiger behind these bars, on some San Francisco zoo shit// my fascinatin' sentences are agitatin' menaces// Im a captivatin' nemisis with imagination limitless// your existence is diminished with fabricated innocence// I'll activate the gauge and then evacuate the premises// Im practical with intergalactical battle rap tacticals// compatible and magical enough to snap clavicles// lyrical pterodactyl that'll leave you scared to battle// dress you in a pair of shackles then persist to tear your axial// an historical metaphorical oracle that's oratorical// for deportable mortals with allegoric portables// and I'll come forth to warn a wussie// It's like you came from a 'domestic cats womb', you were 'born a pussy'// send your spirit in the atmosphere cuz I got straps in here// like 'gay auditoriums' I stay 'clappin' queers'// you'll get hacked with shears when I bring massive fear// and shoot your ass 'Underground' like your rap career// __________________ Last edited by Bunny_Rabbit; 03-29-2009 at 03:08 PM.

03-29-2009, 09:12 AM	#2
Blizzy Wordsmith Join Date: May 2008 Location: In Battlefield's Posts: 3,359 Repped: 687 Repped 345 Times in 158 Posts Neg Reps: 25 Neg Repped at 26 Times in 25 Posts	and 'dressed to kill' so everytime I look in a mirror it's 'suicidal'// ^dope line but how do we know your not bitin anymore? i couldn't see anythin so i'll say well done on this piece..... __________________ MY MUSIC CHECK IT OUT myspace.com/ttpbloodshot

03-29-2009, 03:07 PM	#3
Bunny_Rabbit Rorshak Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: The Tangent Universe Posts: 886 Repped: 44 Repped 118 Times in 53 Posts Neg Reps: 52 Neg Repped at 59 Times in 54 Posts	Props Blizzy..........uppin this __________________

03-29-2009, 04:15 PM	#5
Bunny_Rabbit Rorshak Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: The Tangent Universe Posts: 886 Repped: 44 Repped 118 Times in 53 Posts Neg Reps: 52 Neg Repped at 59 Times in 54 Posts	^^^^Thanks man......... __________________

03-30-2009, 08:01 PM	#7
Bunny_Rabbit Rorshak Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: The Tangent Universe Posts: 886 Repped: 44 Repped 118 Times in 53 Posts Neg Reps: 52 Neg Repped at 59 Times in 54 Posts	^^^Thanks for the feed..........Uppin this shit __________________

03-29-2009, 04:01 PM	#4
Threyev Join Date: May 2006 Location: The Bronx Posts: 553 Repped: 82 Repped 46 Times in 29 Posts Neg Reps: 3 Neg Repped at 5 Times in 5 Posts	Dope if it's yours. Can't really offer any suggestions. Good shit.

03-30-2009, 08:35 PM	#8
DXavier23 ----------DX------------- Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: NYC Posts: 1,765 Repped: 192 Repped 1,682 Times in 143 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 1 Post	a bunch of hot bars in here. I liked the wordplay throughout; it made it interesting to read. Im 'dropping verses' like I 'threw a bible'// and 'dressed to kill' so everytime I look in a mirror it's 'suicidal'// -DOPE Rhyme scheme was good, but at least 3 punches in here were very forced. Stay up tho. __________________ So save me your sorrys I'm raisin a Army Revolutionary warfare with Damian Marley We sparkin da irons marchin to Zion You know how Nas be NYC state of mind I'm in

03-31-2009, 01:42 AM	#9
Bunny_Rabbit Rorshak Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: The Tangent Universe Posts: 886 Repped: 44 Repped 118 Times in 53 Posts Neg Reps: 52 Neg Repped at 59 Times in 54 Posts	Much respect for the feed, DX. And fuck you Unbreakable, lol.........punk ass bitch. __________________

04-01-2009, 06:24 PM	#10
Bunny_Rabbit Rorshak Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: The Tangent Universe Posts: 886 Repped: 44 Repped 118 Times in 53 Posts Neg Reps: 52 Neg Repped at 59 Times in 54 Posts	Lol, shit........no replies??? Uppin this........ __________________

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