A confessional

sofis2cated · 03-27-2009, 05:10 PM

It's got a slow flow to it

I'm just strollin through my thoughts
and what I do I find/
A reality check comin up from behind/
The fact that life consists of
nothin but time/
Like pussy is pussy whether she's
ugly or fine/
The world is bigger than my
eyes do see/
And I know Doctor King wouldn't
lie to me/
But can it be to late to achieve your dreams/
Cuz you got obligations to
feed your peeps/
Like the sun and the moon I'm
workin the days/
Probably til I'm ridin in the
hurst to my grave/
This economic downfall is
hurtin my brain/
And my pocketbook makes
insurance a pain/
That's so much irony I should
be in detroit/
So I keep writin rhymes til they're
seizing my voice/
Psychologically I am
reaching a point/
That my mind is resting in
peace with my boys/

mcduffee420 · 03-28-2009, 07:15 PM

yeah i read it with a slow tone....nice and easy to get through not greatest rhymes but something you could kick back to with a beat too it.... im kinda drunk too so, just thought i'd leave some kinda feedback

keep doing your thing

: )

03-27-2009, 05:10 PM	#1
sofis2cated California Lyricist Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Bakersfield, CA Posts: 762 Repped: 33 Repped 10 Times in 8 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	A confessional A confessional It's got a slow flow to it I'm just strollin through my thoughts and what I do I find/ A reality check comin up from behind/ The fact that life consists of nothin but time/ Like pussy is pussy whether she's ugly or fine/ The world is bigger than my eyes do see/ And I know Doctor King wouldn't lie to me/ But can it be to late to achieve your dreams/ Cuz you got obligations to feed your peeps/ Like the sun and the moon I'm workin the days/ Probably til I'm ridin in the hurst to my grave/ This economic downfall is hurtin my brain/ And my pocketbook makes insurance a pain/ That's so much irony I should be in detroit/ So I keep writin rhymes til they're seizing my voice/ Psychologically I am reaching a point/ That my mind is resting in peace with my boys/

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03-28-2009, 07:15 PM	#2
mcduffee420 Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: minnesota_st.cloud Posts: 686 Repped: 169 Repped 81 Times in 40 Posts Neg Reps: 10 Neg Repped at 31 Times in 22 Posts	yeah i read it with a slow tone....nice and easy to get through not greatest rhymes but something you could kick back to with a beat too it.... im kinda drunk too so, just thought i'd leave some kinda feedback keep doing your thing : )