My history book (precaution b4 entering...)

mcduffee420 · 03-26-2009, 01:37 AM

alcohol was reformed to be taxated during the 1930's/
this is my history book for my generation i am about to serve thee/
the great depression fell off just as this raps bound too/
but our new era recalls the fact medical raids still can occur through/
the d.e.a the feds they really dont care, free country hold me back /
flee this democary hold there, for this ventilation i breath give me more air/
massachuttes, new york, and the great land of california/
relapse on movin shit as dope so theyll own ya/
rewrite my law in their books , re take our chance they took/
its a delight that our senates crooks, its false they can throw it with no looks/
my damage my heart has failed as a heartattack dispairs/
my government dont give a fuck about me, so on my own i charge to make my repairs/
listen this is 2009/
alltogether lets go reform stand in line/
fuck it anarchy we will create so they listen in no time/
without this the hopes dyin.....no lyin/

Threyev · 03-29-2009, 03:58 PM

pretty good. kinda strange flow, but it was a good idea overall and you did it well. stay up.

edit - is taxated a word?

Bunny_Rabbit · 03-29-2009, 04:14 PM

Dude, have you ever heard of multisyllables????

Tom Chambers · 03-29-2009, 05:54 PM

history rap=boring

03-26-2009, 01:37 AM	#1
mcduffee420 Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: minnesota_st.cloud Posts: 686 Repped: 169 Repped 81 Times in 40 Posts Neg Reps: 10 Neg Repped at 31 Times in 22 Posts	My history book (precaution b4 entering...) My history book (precaution b4 entering...) alcohol was reformed to be taxated during the 1930's/ this is my history book for my generation i am about to serve thee/ the great depression fell off just as this raps bound too/ but our new era recalls the fact medical raids still can occur through/ the d.e.a the feds they really dont care, free country hold me back / flee this democary hold there, for this ventilation i breath give me more air/ massachuttes, new york, and the great land of california/ relapse on movin shit as dope so theyll own ya/ rewrite my law in their books , re take our chance they took/ its a delight that our senates crooks, its false they can throw it with no looks/ my damage my heart has failed as a heartattack dispairs/ my government dont give a fuck about me, so on my own i charge to make my repairs/ listen this is 2009/ alltogether lets go reform stand in line/ fuck it anarchy we will create so they listen in no time/ without this the hopes dyin.....no lyin/ Last edited by mcduffee420; 03-26-2009 at 01:39 AM.

03-29-2009, 04:14 PM	#3
Bunny_Rabbit Rorshak Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: The Tangent Universe Posts: 886 Repped: 44 Repped 118 Times in 53 Posts Neg Reps: 52 Neg Repped at 59 Times in 54 Posts	Dude, have you ever heard of multisyllables???? __________________

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03-29-2009, 03:58 PM	#2
Threyev Join Date: May 2006 Location: The Bronx Posts: 553 Repped: 82 Repped 46 Times in 29 Posts Neg Reps: 3 Neg Repped at 5 Times in 5 Posts	pretty good. kinda strange flow, but it was a good idea overall and you did it well. stay up. edit - is taxated a word?

03-29-2009, 05:54 PM	#4
Tom Chambers AkA Sur-Vis-U-All Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: pittsburgh Posts: 11,279 Repped: 132 Repped 477 Times in 296 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 68 Times in 54 Posts	history rap=boring