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Old 03-26-2009, 01:37 AM   #1
 
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Exclamation My history book (precaution b4 entering...)

My history book (precaution b4 entering...)

alcohol was reformed to be taxated during the 1930's/
this is my history book for my generation i am about to serve thee/
the great depression fell off just as this raps bound too/
but our new era recalls the fact medical raids still can occur through/
the d.e.a the feds they really dont care, free country hold me back /
flee this democary hold there, for this ventilation i breath give me more air/
massachuttes, new york, and the great land of california/
relapse on movin shit as dope so theyll own ya/
rewrite my law in their books , re take our chance they took/
its a delight that our senates crooks, its false they can throw it with no looks/
my damage my heart has failed as a heartattack dispairs/
my government dont give a fuck about me, so on my own i charge to make my repairs/
listen this is 2009/
alltogether lets go reform stand in line/
fuck it anarchy we will create so they listen in no time/
without this the hopes dyin.....no lyin/


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Old 03-29-2009, 03:58 PM   #2
 
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pretty good. kinda strange flow, but it was a good idea overall and you did it well. stay up.

edit - is taxated a word?
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Old 03-29-2009, 04:14 PM   #3
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Dude, have you ever heard of multisyllables????
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Old 03-29-2009, 05:54 PM   #4
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history rap=boring
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