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Old 03-24-2009, 10:18 PM   #1
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Nigga i'm a man i'm stronger than these ladies/
So many flopped albums the 'song cry' like Jay Z/
You another Wayne except you lamer than the Bradies/
You're a rap grade C goin against Hades/
God of the Underworld, niggas can't phase me/
Before you say 'deez' ya nuts get merked like Mercedes/
Shout outs to the Germans, ya'll niggas keep learnin/
These niggas is germs man, equivalent to worms man/
I'll break ya legs you can call me the Foot Locker/
I O.D on my own shit like fucked up Doctors/
Speakin of medication, I can sell the shit I get from doctors/
But if he goes the extra 'mile' then I can 'Pop-a-doc' son/
That's just how I roll, love me or hate me/
It's just the way I am ya'll can call me Shady/
No still call me Hades, my minions geeks to me/
They listen to complex shit sayin 'it's greek to me'/
Ya'll niggas one big slouch, ya'll are 'sheek' to me/
My shit is strong say ouch, it's all meek to me/
Ya'll nigga's shit is lame, it's all weak to me.../
Talkin so much shit niggas wanna buck me/
They scream 'fuck who' then crowd says 'FUCK ME'/
But they girls model after and for me, they 'suck seeds'/
Ha ha, get it? Fuck O.D I just shitted/
I laugh at these niggas claimin freestyles and spittin writtens/
If rhymes were bullets then half them shits would be bitten/
Whack material, all flat like black fitteds/
I get it but I never have to live it, fuck the lyrics/
I'll shatter your dreams then rip apart your spirit/
These niggas is liars but have their 'ups and downs' like dick hoppers/
It's fun to deploy my niggas like coppers, the straight boppers/
They can double the beef like big whoppers/
You bunch of cock knockers, I meet all of em but they ain't fockers/
In fact they got more snitches than crime stoppers..../
Bitch ass niggas I got so many techs I shoot and miss em/
Ya'll niggas have so many 'Reks' you own systems/
Fuck it, I feel bad for ya'll niggas ya'll are all piss poor/
Work for me i'll have ya'll cleanin up piss floors/
You can be pissed or, be kissed by four/
Excited? Forget I flip it/
I mean four from the clips like snippets.../
One headshot squash you like Frogger or I can 'ribbit'/
Ya'll niggas seem disgraced like shamed whores/
You want amusement I write this shit in Folklore/
But don't confuse it I abuse it it's one big metaphor/
This rap shit is my girl I can take her to town/
Got bangin beats, you can hear 'no chris brown' in my background/
Although I let the beat pound spittin fire I don't condone/
Cuz as I astound I seem to melt the microphone/
Nigga why you ramblin? This ain't no micro-phone/
You Microsoft, who's peepin in my Windows homes?/
I got the game for Sherlocked, but I ain't no holmes/
It's Common I kick knowledge but I don't spit poems/
At least nothin that could make a nigga's mind leave/
I might leave a blue clue or two, but nigga you know I ain't Steve/
I ain't weak, I ain't fake I ain't weave i'm your pet peeve/
My niggas is prominent and yours is sad like grief/
Please homie allow me to be brief/
You ain't shit so you don't need a leaf, nigga you ain't a beast so you don't need teeth/
Matter of fact, I think you need to debrief/
So I can de-queef this rap pussy the game NEEDs me/
These niggas are only entertainment, let me rephrase it laymen's...terms/
Fuck the game until whack niggas are covered in sperm/
Fuck the fans until I no longer have demand/
Fuck the industy until the manager can't even stand/
Nigga you must be on pot to see I don't sizzle like pans/
But I forgive you, cuz I already know i'm the man/
Know i'm the plan, pissin people off on the grid/
Nobody knows you nigga you've been hid, you've been done in you've been did/
Throwin subliminals so hard they sayin in front of they kids

Who the FUCK does he think he is?

Feel free to leave comments, big ups to the people who read. Critcism is encouraged, i'm fat from food for thought (lol). I ain't on a diet either =x. Anyways, enough of the wordplay. Please leave comments on what you liked/how I can improve, whatevah. Peace.

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Old 03-25-2009, 08:21 PM   #2
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