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Old 03-23-2009, 04:47 PM   #1
 
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Trying to get real metaphorical with this one. Hope you like it. One thing I'm a bit worried about is the amount of references, so tell me if you think I o.d.ed on it. Props in advance if you give this a look.

Day after day I wonder just why these bastards hate me
Try to avoid claymores and walk the path of pastries
One false move, they'll say you gave a malice call
Don't move or they'll pull an Alice Paul
If you're trying to get help with hands cracked stand back
With every wave of the flag you unleash a bit of anthrax
More and more opposition but you haven't heard why
The light from the screen is so bright it blinds your third eye
From school to your place call you a fool to your face
Reasoning thumps, they act like Julia Brace
"Going swimmingly," brain must be cancer-fed
That would be true if we were swimming in lava filled with hammer heads
The wind was supposed to change, welcome our missing savior
But we just been fed the same old shit with a different flavor
Let's go is echoed by both the cries and the death toll
This is biblical, huh, well where the fuck is Jethro?
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Old 03-23-2009, 08:53 PM   #2
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A+ just cuz you made a failed Jethro Tull reference
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Old 03-23-2009, 11:07 PM   #3
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OK drop....flowed well had multis.....stay up
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Old 03-24-2009, 01:18 AM   #4
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A+ just cuz you made a failed Jethro Tull reference
stfu all u do is hate. your life must be pretty pathetic.
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Old 03-24-2009, 01:54 AM   #5
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stfu all u do is hate. your life must be pretty pathetic.
well....i mean........yeah....duh........its cool for him to nitpick on someone else's verse...but.....no wait....nvm........omg youre soooooo right........*cries*





feel better?....now fuck off....noone was even talkin remotely in your goddamn direction....apparently youve mastered the art of breathing through your nose on a constant basis....ggeeeettttt iiiiiiiiiittttttttttttt????????(im implying youre a dick sucker)
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its cool for him to nitpick on someone else's verse
Why do people post it if they don't want legitimate feedback. I try to point out some of the things I like or don't like, and now you're wanna hold that against me or something? What you want me to just go in and either say it was dope or say it was ass and then leave? How does that help anybody?

And the Jethro reference was Jethro from the Bible.
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