Stabs in tha back-quick freestyle verse

a-spen · 07-27-2006, 06:42 PM

why is the close ones that try n injure me, put this knife up into me
stabs in the back, but i aint got an injury
the wounds are invisible, but the pain you can feel
im wonderin if theres no wounds then..how will it heal
they wait till you think that your bond is stronger then steel
find your weakness, then go for the kill
ive tride to shake the fake, thought u was real
u were short id lend u money, u were hungry id give u a meal
yet even still, youd manage to take advantage of me
never a friend, just pretend, u just wanted to see
how much you could get of the second part of my name (young money)
put my heart in the game, now its seems im the only to blame
you took aim to my brain and incorrected my thoughts
you simply saw wut i got, n wanted a peice of the pot
got alot n left me left with nothin left
you stole from me n its killin me, its like murder and theft
i admit the good times,yeaa we haad a few
but its apparent now that u faked ya whole attitude
i aint made at chu, im just dissapointed
the point is,u faked feelins n enjoyed it

leave some feedback...

YoungJ · 07-27-2006, 10:17 PM

it was pretty deep... i liked it except for the ending... but besides that good shit

a-spen · 07-27-2006, 11:11 PM

thx for the feedback

a-spen · 07-28-2006, 02:10 AM

more feedbackk...

Doc Glokk · 07-28-2006, 02:12 AM

yo yo uppin this shit....this my main man Young Money from tha block.

sick verse, keep this dope shit goin

a-spen · 07-28-2006, 10:04 PM

c'mon lets get sum more feedback

Tha Prophecy · 07-29-2006, 12:11 AM

are u from aspen?or h/e its spelled?

a-spen · 07-29-2006, 12:39 AM

yea, im young money from a-spen

same wit doc glokk aka mc manik from a-spen

Doc Glokk · 07-29-2006, 12:51 AM

uppin this shit.....

Tha Prophecy · 07-29-2006, 01:23 AM

o i meant aspen the place, but r u from a board called a-spen 2?

Doc Glokk · 07-29-2006, 01:28 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tha Prophecy

o i meant aspen the place, but r u from a board called a-spen 2?

A-SPEN is my block....

is there actually a forum called a-spen?

Tha Prophecy · 07-29-2006, 01:37 AM

i duno i recall one with a similar name i think it was aspend or something but i duno what ever happened to that

a-spen · 07-30-2006, 03:57 AM

nahh a-spen is a rap group, im in it wit doc glokk n anotha emcee named twist from the t-dot

2006mtowers2006 · 07-30-2006, 04:43 PM

lik tha flow!!!

a-spen · 08-01-2006, 02:49 AM

thx for tha feedback 2006mtowers2006 , lets get sum more..

07-27-2006, 06:42 PM	#1
a-spen MIC Join Date: May 2006 Location: STA Posts: 175 Repped: 6 Repped 3 Times in 3 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Stabs in tha back-quick freestyle verse Stabs in tha back-quick freestyle verse why is the close ones that try n injure me, put this knife up into me stabs in the back, but i aint got an injury the wounds are invisible, but the pain you can feel im wonderin if theres no wounds then..how will it heal they wait till you think that your bond is stronger then steel find your weakness, then go for the kill ive tride to shake the fake, thought u was real u were short id lend u money, u were hungry id give u a meal yet even still, youd manage to take advantage of me never a friend, just pretend, u just wanted to see how much you could get of the second part of my name (young money) put my heart in the game, now its seems im the only to blame you took aim to my brain and incorrected my thoughts you simply saw wut i got, n wanted a peice of the pot got alot n left me left with nothin left you stole from me n its killin me, its like murder and theft i admit the good times,yeaa we haad a few but its apparent now that u faked ya whole attitude i aint made at chu, im just dissapointed the point is,u faked feelins n enjoyed it leave some feedback...

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07-27-2006, 10:17 PM	#2
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	it was pretty deep... i liked it except for the ending... but besides that good shit

07-27-2006, 11:11 PM	#3
a-spen MIC Join Date: May 2006 Location: STA Posts: 175 Repped: 6 Repped 3 Times in 3 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	thx for the feedback

07-28-2006, 02:10 AM	#4
a-spen MIC Join Date: May 2006 Location: STA Posts: 175 Repped: 6 Repped 3 Times in 3 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	more feedbackk...

07-28-2006, 02:12 AM	#5
Doc Glokk Tha Doctor Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Canada Posts: 1,438 Repped: 51 Repped 15 Times in 10 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	yo yo uppin this shit....this my main man Young Money from tha block. sick verse, keep this dope shit goin

07-28-2006, 10:04 PM	#6
a-spen MIC Join Date: May 2006 Location: STA Posts: 175 Repped: 6 Repped 3 Times in 3 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	c'mon lets get sum more feedback

07-29-2006, 12:11 AM	#7
Tha Prophecy a.k.a. Nervous~Breakdown Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 192 Repped: 0 Repped 1 Time in 1 Post Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	are u from aspen?or h/e its spelled?

07-29-2006, 12:39 AM	#8
a-spen MIC Join Date: May 2006 Location: STA Posts: 175 Repped: 6 Repped 3 Times in 3 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	yea, im young money from a-spen same wit doc glokk aka mc manik from a-spen

07-29-2006, 12:51 AM	#9
Doc Glokk Tha Doctor Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Canada Posts: 1,438 Repped: 51 Repped 15 Times in 10 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	uppin this shit.....

07-29-2006, 01:23 AM	#10
Tha Prophecy a.k.a. Nervous~Breakdown Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 192 Repped: 0 Repped 1 Time in 1 Post Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	o i meant aspen the place, but r u from a board called a-spen 2?

07-29-2006, 01:37 AM	#12
Tha Prophecy a.k.a. Nervous~Breakdown Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 192 Repped: 0 Repped 1 Time in 1 Post Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	i duno i recall one with a similar name i think it was aspend or something but i duno what ever happened to that

07-30-2006, 03:57 AM	#13
a-spen MIC Join Date: May 2006 Location: STA Posts: 175 Repped: 6 Repped 3 Times in 3 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	nahh a-spen is a rap group, im in it wit doc glokk n anotha emcee named twist from the t-dot

07-30-2006, 04:43 PM	#14
2006mtowers2006 !!!buck the world!!! Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 209 Repped: 0 Repped 2 Times in 1 Post Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	lik tha flow!!!

08-01-2006, 02:49 AM	#15
a-spen MIC Join Date: May 2006 Location: STA Posts: 175 Repped: 6 Repped 3 Times in 3 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	thx for tha feedback 2006mtowers2006 , lets get sum more..