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TheKidL · 07-26-2006, 09:23 PM

Its well known ya lil dudes travel in packs Ls a vandal infact
Aint nothin to unravel tha gats I cant stand fragile raps
most dudes dont spit it scary believe me I'll rip it daily
Here is some advice gain some knowledge from a dictionary
Enhance ya stance as a man then finance ya plans as man
Think out ya actions then advance ya plans for grands
The new generations think they only can rap about guns
In reality an relation most of them never carried one
Lets get back to that real hip hop niggaz spittin hot
Verbals makin hips lock then seein some lips drop
At the end of the day maybe you'll grip lots

TheKidL · 07-26-2006, 11:13 PM

blah...pluckin

dtale253 · 07-26-2006, 11:17 PM

its good
but

most dudes dont spit it scary believe me I'll rip it daily
Here is some advice gain some knowledge from a dictionary
^^
that didnt really rhyme

and it had too many mutlis to where it wouldnt sound good on audio
but as far as text goes its good
stay up

TheKidL · 07-26-2006, 11:18 PM

props only a text man...

Tha Prophecy · 07-26-2006, 11:34 PM

lol good shit Kid L i liked this more than ur past few.Good job cuz stay up

YoungJ · 07-27-2006, 12:02 AM

good shit, i was feelin it

TheKidL · 07-27-2006, 12:11 AM

thanks people

Em3ricas_Newest_Convictio · 07-27-2006, 02:39 AM

aye-ya
chea i liked it-i tried that whole lookin in tha dictionary thing for more words-well then i went too far

ah well tho-i unfortunately do make mistakes-ha
but im feelin ya on this one

dtale253 · 07-27-2006, 02:42 AM

ayo L, do you do audio?

TheKidL · 07-27-2006, 03:14 PM

yessur..uppin

young mac · 07-27-2006, 09:02 PM

most dudes dont spit it scary believe me I'll rip it daily
Here is some advice gain some knowledge from a dictionary

The new generations think they only can rap about guns
In reality an relation most of them never carried one
Lets get back to that real hip hop niggaz spittin hot
Verbals makin hips lock then seein some lips drop

real nice drop kid....good 2 c u active.....keep droppiN!

TheKidL · 07-28-2006, 02:24 PM

good look....

07-26-2006, 09:23 PM	#1
TheKidL THA KID P Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: New York Posts: 3,422 Repped: 20 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Been a minute Been a minute Its well known ya lil dudes travel in packs Ls a vandal infact Aint nothin to unravel tha gats I cant stand fragile raps most dudes dont spit it scary believe me I'll rip it daily Here is some advice gain some knowledge from a dictionary Enhance ya stance as a man then finance ya plans as man Think out ya actions then advance ya plans for grands The new generations think they only can rap about guns In reality an relation most of them never carried one Lets get back to that real hip hop niggaz spittin hot Verbals makin hips lock then seein some lips drop At the end of the day maybe you'll grip lots

07-27-2006, 09:02 PM	#11
young mac A.K.A TH3 LuMB3rJaCK Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Ct Posts: 2,140 Repped: 84 Repped 66 Times in 17 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	most dudes dont spit it scary believe me I'll rip it daily Here is some advice gain some knowledge from a dictionary The new generations think they only can rap about guns In reality an relation most of them never carried one Lets get back to that real hip hop niggaz spittin hot Verbals makin hips lock then seein some lips drop real nice drop kid....good 2 c u active.....keep droppiN! __________________ !Tz MaC MaNNNNN www.myspace.com/ryanmac860 ^^my beatz ^^

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07-26-2006, 11:13 PM	#2
TheKidL THA KID P Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: New York Posts: 3,422 Repped: 20 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	blah...pluckin

07-26-2006, 11:17 PM	#3
dtale253 Veteran Join Date: May 2006 Location: washington Posts: 4,765 Repped: 35 Repped 1 Time in 1 Post Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	its good but most dudes dont spit it scary believe me I'll rip it daily Here is some advice gain some knowledge from a dictionary ^^ that didnt really rhyme and it had too many mutlis to where it wouldnt sound good on audio but as far as text goes its good stay up

07-26-2006, 11:18 PM	#4
TheKidL THA KID P Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: New York Posts: 3,422 Repped: 20 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	props only a text man...

07-26-2006, 11:34 PM	#5
Tha Prophecy a.k.a. Nervous~Breakdown Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 192 Repped: 0 Repped 1 Time in 1 Post Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	lol good shit Kid L i liked this more than ur past few.Good job cuz stay up

07-27-2006, 12:02 AM	#6
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	good shit, i was feelin it

07-27-2006, 12:11 AM	#7
TheKidL THA KID P Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: New York Posts: 3,422 Repped: 20 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	thanks people

07-27-2006, 02:39 AM	#8
Em3ricas_Newest_Convictio Eminem's Heir Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: i-da-hoe (haha) Posts: 163 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	aye-ya chea i liked it-i tried that whole lookin in tha dictionary thing for more words-well then i went too far ah well tho-i unfortunately do make mistakes-ha but im feelin ya on this one

07-27-2006, 02:42 AM	#9
dtale253 Veteran Join Date: May 2006 Location: washington Posts: 4,765 Repped: 35 Repped 1 Time in 1 Post Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	ayo L, do you do audio?

07-27-2006, 03:14 PM	#10
TheKidL THA KID P Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: New York Posts: 3,422 Repped: 20 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	yessur..uppin

07-28-2006, 02:24 PM	#12
TheKidL THA KID P Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: New York Posts: 3,422 Repped: 20 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	good look....