Nightmare Freestyle

G-Shook · 01-15-2009, 04:08 AM

I'm Young..fresh..talented 'non-the-less' I'm still stress
Looking for a Path Out the Jungle..'out-the-mess'
Cus my dreams turn to nightmares..then turn to fears
Fears that got me Wandering and Wondering
If my life is doom for death..Cus my soul speaks out
Then I speak loudly usually from my mouth to myself
But Evil's eyes focused on me.. so I teleport
Straight to my 'thoughts'!!! Just then I got hit by da Cops .....

I need a paramedic or the mort
But this ain't real cus my mind in court
So it's Hopeless to escape the prision that awaits
Knowing the badside of me needs to be 'thrown away'
Cus the only way to reach those 'heavenly' gates
Wait ahh my heart just awaked.....

Tha Pak Ataak · 01-15-2009, 05:44 AM

Its good flow, real good, A lil bit too short tho
but overlall 8/10
Word Up

G-Shook · 01-15-2009, 04:21 PM

Uppin for some comments...

G-Shook · 01-16-2009, 01:58 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tha Pak Ataak

Its good flow, real good, A lil bit too short tho
but overlall 8/10
Word Up

Good Looking...

inna sense · 01-17-2009, 04:22 PM

this had deep lyrics...really stood out...nice

Ryder Bompton · 01-18-2009, 11:15 AM

this some real shit homeboy,you still got it my nig!!! hot drop for the real 9.5/10

G-Shook · 01-25-2009, 04:57 AM

Upping for 200 views ya feel me!

01-15-2009, 04:08 AM	#1
G-Shook BANN ME IF U CAN! Join Date: Feb 2006 Posts: 2,077 Repped: 2 Repped 107 Times in 25 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Nightmare Freestyle Nightmare Freestyle I'm Young..fresh..talented 'non-the-less' I'm still stress Looking for a Path Out the Jungle..'out-the-mess' Cus my dreams turn to nightmares..then turn to fears Fears that got me Wandering and Wondering If my life is doom for death..Cus my soul speaks out Then I speak loudly usually from my mouth to myself But Evil's eyes focused on me.. so I teleport Straight to my 'thoughts'!!! Just then I got hit by da Cops ..... I need a paramedic or the mort But this ain't real cus my mind in court So it's Hopeless to escape the prision that awaits Knowing the badside of me needs to be 'thrown away' Cus the only way to reach those 'heavenly' gates Wait ahh my heart just awaked..... __________________ "...Overrated." Last edited by G-Shook; 01-15-2009 at 04:10 AM.

01-15-2009, 04:21 PM	#3
G-Shook BANN ME IF U CAN! Join Date: Feb 2006 Posts: 2,077 Repped: 2 Repped 107 Times in 25 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Uppin for some comments... __________________ "...Overrated."

01-18-2009, 11:15 AM	#6
Ryder Bompton Veteran Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Bed-Stuy, NEW YORK NEW YORK Posts: 1,355 Repped: 208 Repped 73 Times in 35 Posts Neg Reps: 145 Neg Repped at 87 Times in 56 Posts	this some real shit homeboy,you still got it my nig!!! hot drop for the real 9.5/10 __________________

01-25-2009, 04:57 AM	#7
G-Shook BANN ME IF U CAN! Join Date: Feb 2006 Posts: 2,077 Repped: 2 Repped 107 Times in 25 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Upping for 200 views ya feel me! __________________ "...Overrated."

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01-15-2009, 05:44 AM	#2
Tha Pak Ataak Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: Brooklyn Posts: 113 Repped: 10 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 10 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Its good flow, real good, A lil bit too short tho but overlall 8/10 Word Up

01-17-2009, 04:22 PM	#5
inna sense Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: germany Posts: 152 Repped: 0 Repped 6 Times in 6 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	this had deep lyrics...really stood out...nice